FF : Ariya - kahi pyar na ho jaye -note - pg 49

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hello everyone . i have been reading to all ff ss n os in this forum for past year .liked each story based on ariya so i decided to write some on my own too hope u all like it n do comment n give your feed backs .
characters sketch :
ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore : ETF's chief, caring towards all his team members brave smart and have a past with Arjun
ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte: etf's second command,has a past with sameer and after the death of his wife roshni he built a wall between himself and world. after roshni passed away he became rude n arrogant and never allows anyone to come near him
Aisha Kapoor,chotu, liza , shree, riya n sakhsi: same as in the show only riya is not dead here
PROLOGUE:
What happens when two friends fall in love with same guy but destiny keeps in twisting their life with unpredictable events.
what happens if u love someone n that person is interested in another , how hurtful it can be
 
index:
part 1 & 2 - page 1
part 3       - page  3
part 4       - page  5
Part 4  B  - page   6
Part 5  A  - page   8
Part 5  B  - page   8
Part 5  C  -  page   11
Part 5  D  -  page   13
Part 5 E   -  page   14
Part  6     -   page   14
 Part 7     -   page   17
Part  8A B   page    18 
part  9     -   page    18 
part 10    -   page     21
part 11    -   page     23 
part 12   -   page     25
part 13   -   page     27
part  14  -   page     31 
part  15  -  page      33
part  16  -  page     35 
part  17  -  page     42
final part page 46😊
 
part 1:

A normal day at etf , it was beautiful day n it was her first week of work in etf as a research specialist n encounter officer after working for research desk she was promoted to etf as research n encounter specialist. This was the best week of her life as she came to the field which she was dreaming for past 2 years and now with her bestest buddy shree being was like sonne pe suhaga ... she entered the office n saw shree n chotu already there , straight way she made her way to them ...

Shree : good morning ri ,kaise hai ajj bari jaldi uth gayi

Chotu : haan haan ajj lagta hai apne samjhe ya samjhao ko bahoot miss kar rahi thi hamari ri , kiwu ri?

Riya: shree chotu shut up .aisa kuch nahi yaar tum log bhi nah

Itne mei Ayesha , liza aur sakshi  ki entry hoti hai .

Ri: gud morning guys .how r u all today

Liza n Ayesha:gud morning guys  kaise ho tum sab

Sakshi:kiwu ajj ki morning mei ayesa kiya hai riya jo u love about it .

Ri: nahi kuch bhi nahi bas uhi. Lagta hai madam ji ka mood kharaab hai , kiwu sakshi

Sakshi:nahi yaar kuch aesa nahi hai bas slept late at nite .

While these guys having there nok jhoks our dono rowdy's ki entry hoti hai .

Rathore:kiya laga rakha hai sabne , this is not fish market go complete all your paper work today as we don't have any case today saying this he turned to go to his cabin

Liza,Ayesha,riya, shri,chotu,sakshi :sorry sir \ sameer

Arjun(in his mind) nahi sudhrenge yeh log kabhi

Both arjun n rathore went to their respective cabins

Riya :guys mei tumlogo ke liye coffee bana do

Shree: ha yaar ri

Sakshi:ri arjun ke liye nahi meine nah rahul se uski cutting chai magaii hai, who lata hoga

Listening to this riya is sad but she smiles n shows her dimple n says ok . chotu n shree r watching this silently n thinking, when there friend is going to have her life of happiness

In the cabin arjun is thinking :what happen to riya ajj usne mujhse gud morning bhi nahi wish kiya n he is lost in his thought just then sakhsi enters n says arjun yeh lo your cutting chai n arjun is still in his thought n says kiya huwa riya ajj koi hartaal hai kiya n sakshi  in her high voice says .. kiyaaa .. n arjun comes out of his thought n sees sakshi there with his tea n says tum ja sakti ho .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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GO AHEAD DEAR BUT TELL ME WHEATHER IT ISFOR  ARLYA LOVERS OR FOR ARAKSHI 
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friends do comment if u like it or not .
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hey i always loved to read ariya stories so i am writing it on ariya as well adding arakshi as it will b something new n enjoyable . kip on reading n coment dear  @nature shivani
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nice start.. Continue soon.
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nice start..!!
arjun thinking about riya cool..!!
and riya also thinking about him..!!!
continue soon..!!
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part 2:

After drinking coffee everyone got busy with there respective work. Shree , chotu and riya were gossiping as usual and giggling

Sakshi:what happen guys , koi joke mara kiya

Aisha:shhh guys abhi tum logo ko daath lage gi

Liza:come on aisha yeh teeno nahi sudhrenge, inko toh sirf dammit' aur samjhe ya samjhao' sudhaar sakta hai

Arjun while reading his file, in logo  ki baatein sun raha tha and smiling inward.

Arjun(pov) yeh  ladki nah kabhi nahi sudhre gi hamesha isee khel he sujti hai pagal karke choree gi mujhe ek din ... jabse ayi hai hamre zindagi he badal gayi hai phirse jinee ko ji chahata hai .. uff arjun yeh kiya soch rahe ho tum sirf roshni ke ho phir kiwu iss ke bare mei sochte ho . )  he was so lost into his thought ke use rathod kabse bula raha hai par who sun nahi raha

Sakshi:arjun arjun kaha koye ho , sameer kitni deer se awaaz de raha hai tumko

Rathod: (pov) yeh arjun bhi nah patani kab mera dost apne ateeth se bahar nikle ga, kaun ise  phir jiinee ki waja dekhae ga

Arjun: huhu haa rathod bolo kiya huwa

Rathod: Rawate ek naya case aaya hai.

Arjun: kaun sa case.

Rathod: wo simla k eek minister mohan singh chatur ka  murder ho gaya gai aur uski biwi ne kaha ke kuch log unki beti jo waha college mei pharti hai use bhi kidnap kiya huwa hai .aur abhi tak koi ransom money ka call bhi nahi aya hai ..

 

Arjun : Let's go to the murder spot.

 

Rathod: Yes let's go team.shree tum ajj sham ki flight book karo hum sab ke liye rahne ka intazaam bhi karo . riya tum aur aisha minister sab ke bare jo bhi information mile use dhudo , chotu tum apne simla walee sab he informers ko inform kardo.

Sakshi:sameer kiwu nah hum plane ke badle mei ek he car me challe yah bus mei

Rathod: ha sakshi yeh idea acha hai .shree bus ko hire karlo aur tum sab ki chuti hai jao shopping karlo aur packing karlo shaam ko sab yaha office mei milenge

Shree n all other: yes sir

Riya\chotu\shree : talking to themselves .wow simla kitna maza ayega wah .

Arjun; Hum waha maza karne yah honeymoon par nahi jarahe hai jo tum logo ko maza aeyega. Hum waha murder case solve karna.tum log ek kabil officer ki tarha behave karo, samjhe yah samjhao

All trio : sorry sir

Shree : yaar ri tumhara samjhe yah samjhao ne kiya joke mara aur who bhi honeymoon olalala lagta hai tumhara kuch chance hai haha

Riya: shree shut up

Chotu: kiya yaar tum dono bhi lar rahe ho chalo ab packing sheking karte hai akhir jana hai pyar ki duniya me .acha shree meine suna hai waha couples aksar honeymoon par aate hai , kiya arjun sir bhi gaye thee waha

Shree:mujhe kiya pata meri shadi nahi huwi hai abhi ,tum chaho toh mei arjun sir se pooch ke batao

Chotu:pagal hai kiya daath khawae ga

Riya n shree giving hi five to each other n laughing

 

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😊 kaisa laga dosto ..
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nice  yar...!!
arjun thinking about riya haan cool😉
wow everyone going to shimla on case..!!!
continue soon
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interesting parts and the opening is very nice..
continue soon


love to know more..


shimla jake honeymoon rawte bhi achche joke marta hia