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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Whoa!!!!! That was mind-blowing-ly splendid!!!!!!!!!

The entire story line of show and the emotions n feelings of the characters was so wonderfully captured in this OS!!!!!!!

Ur an awesome writer!!!!!!! The flow of words is like a river... it just gets to u!!!!!!!

πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Love you are on a roll! Ad what a roll!
Loved the one shot - it captured their journey so beautifully! And I am glad through that you stayed true to their characters...
Happy birthday Avantika! Thats an awesome birthday present!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Loved how beautifully you wrote emotions Khushi was feeling in different situations. From the hospital scene to Diwali to night after kheer scene to after kidnapping and then a happy one with both of them winning their love.
Loved every bit of the detailed study. πŸ˜‰
How will Nanheji know now that unki dhadkan ek ho jati hain? that they can feel each other's presence?😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
beautiful relation dat they shared xplained via touch...now dats sumthing mesmerizing...πŸ‘
keep it up..!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
This was so touching and simply beautiful!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
I am feeling all nostalgic Nafisa, what can I say you have even managed to give me a fresh perspective on the over all happenings in the actual show. The way you picked different scenes and added relevant quotes to each scene is quite impressive. You have definitely given a new meaning to certain scenes that we just took literally and on face value, your interpretation and descriptive details about every single emotion made me feel all the more for the characters involved! So kudos and thank you for sharing your work with us! <3

Here is wishing Avantika a very happy birthday, I don't know her but I must thank her for her birthday inspired you to share this piece with us! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Oh my goodness!! I am your fan now!
The insight you provide is amazing...πŸ‘

It's like living the scene...as if it is happening to me!

I am speechless at your skill.

Think about making it your profession!, seriously!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Kya bolu ab? You have rendered me speechless... I feel like no matter what words I choose, they still wont be good enough to express how much I loved it...! So all I am gonna say is that this was undoubtedly one of the most well written pieces I have read in a very long time...πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awesome OS, Nafisa!!
The quotes were nicely chosen!
I especially like the last part with the "bas...pata chal jaata hai"!
Great job :)
Thank you for the pm!
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