I have got two words for this one shot
MIND BLOWING and
OUTSTANDING,
Loved all the scenes you wrote into this one shot, each snippet was written perfectly.
I am guessing the third scene was the Teri meri dance, I was not sure but I read a few times.
All the scenes you included in the update were my favourite from the serial and in a way a turning point in there complicated and very complex relationship.
The quotes you included after each part complimented the scene perfectly.
The update was written exceptionally well, honestly you are an amazing writer and I don't think I will ever get tired of saying this in my comments.
Loved the one shot it was a brilliant and fantastic read,
Thanks for the PM,
A special thanks to "Angelteen" for giving you the confidence to post this, however I am shocked you need confidence as you are a genius at writing and a phenomenal writer xx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 years ago
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