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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

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This was beautiful! Sad, and it made me cringe once of twice, but really well written.

I absolutely loved the part where he's comforting her, and he realizes just HOW MUCH his words had hurt her. His redemption was really well versed for his usual woh actually 😆

AND I love that Ayaan was there to stop Asad from killing Akram (although he truly did deserve it)

Sorry I unresed after sooo long! But thaaank you for the PM and hope you update sooon 😃

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Awww Yeahhh!!! :D Loved this chapter! Perfectly written! Can't wait for drunk Zoya!!! Gonna be epic! 😆😃

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Indianbuddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Really good keep going please update soon again 😊

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Amazing update! I liked Asad standing up for Zoya and even more when he consoled her. And how he is in the serial right now, I don't think this was out of character! You did a good job (:

But I'm mad cause you just killed me with the precap. DRUNK ZOYA + ASAD = OMG.

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bindasss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Wow! Absolutely loved it! Please continue soon! Lovely update! (:

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

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