SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
great story pls continue soon and pm me also when u update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
I really loved your os . Awaiting more and off the record we all looove !!!! Looonggg! Updates ... Varsha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
nice start...loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
This is freaking awesomee!! Please continue sooon!! I loved it! And pm when you update! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Res
(I know how much you hate this but I'm absolutely helpless..my internet connection chose today of all days to expire! And its really shitty to type from this cell so I have no option but to wait till tomorrow to gush about just HOW FREAKING MUCH I loved it!! )

*Edited*

I would have updated this sooner but i went back to being grumpy, sulked for an hour and decided its not worth sulking over! Didn't make an ounce of sense I know, but the thing is, I'm BACK! ðŸ˜ƒ

You know, your PM kinda gave me goosebumps because my Birthday is coming up in 2 weeks and all my senses are on hyper-alert these days! 😆

And you just inadvertently gave me a birtday gift!😊

Anyway, Asad at a night-club?😲 Seriously, who'd have thought of that?!😆 But you did more than justice to his character and just perfectly described his awkwardness! 

I was giggling throughout the chapter at Ayaan's and Asad's banter! 

"Matlab ke, ab woh room akele aap ka thodi na rahega. Aur agar maine raat ko aisa kuch dekh liye jo bachon ko nahi dekhna chahiye..." Ayan said mischievously, satisfied with the way his brother's eyes grew in size as he realized what Ayaan was implying.

🤣😆😆

It took me less than a minute to breeze through the chapter. That's how smooth and effortless your writing is! Feels like it all comes so naturally and easily to you! I think I've just become an even greater fan of yours!😳

And I love you even more for staying true to the characters. All of them! Ayaan was his true funny and adorable self, Asad was his true brooding self and Zoya was well, Zoya!😆

I just really wanna thank you for starting this SS! I've been dying to read something from you on AsYa and a SS is more than anything I could have ever wished for! ðŸ¤—

P.S. Did you see that? 100+ Likes! Eeep Ranjana, I'm SOO happy for you! ðŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Grenade - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
interesting =) Continue ^^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
hey itso gud
ever frmwhenthis marrige track started
i was really eager to see bache party
reallly mindblowing
plz ccept my buddy and plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
I am sure there will be a ladai- wala scene...
very excited 4 it!
 
but pls,pls pm me first ðŸ˜‰!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Superb SS..
Loved this chapter..
Continue soon & PM me when u update..
Waiting for next chapter..
 
 
 
Mariam...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
its intresting.loving this.
uptade soon and pm me please.