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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part:- 44
       Few days later. 
    Maan is getting pressure fr. the owner of that tourism com. ,which maan wants to buy. The co. os running loss so that he wants to sell it to maan. Maan is thing wheather to buy it r not, as it under loss.why it is under loss,wat r the reasons for it, why that co. failed to reach the hearts of people. wat r the pros and corns if he take that5 co.. He held a meeting to discuss this and if any suggestions r there to improov the com. the meeting held by arjun,aadhi, prasant and some other his enior employesand ofcourse Nainatara who always wants to tag along with Maan.Maan asked the members why that com. under loss and how shpuld be rectified,wat r the actual pblms in running this , even though he got important information through the tour organisers, hotel manage ment, drivers, guides,etc.. he wany to know why not it gaon trust of people. wat should be done in that direction to reach the hearts of people. 
    Some suggested to  minimise tour cost. 
     Some suggeted that to ofer discounts. 
    Some suggested that to offer gifts.
    Some suggeted that 1 pkus 1 offer,   
   And Naina tara suggeted to spend a greater amount on publicity, we can give publicity through all communicative media,like t.v.,cable, paper, large hordings, net, e mails and arranging personal agents to go door to door campaign.
   None can give Maan satisfacton. He concluded meeting giving tham 2 days time.
     Later in the evening he is going to his mansion inhis car he is again thinking about that com. athe same pblm,how he could meet hearts of people. he remembered his every conversation with tour organisers and hotel management etc..etc., suddenly he remembered that Geet is also in that tour.shaayad ye kuch suggestions depaaye as she isalways thinking about others. she may observesome faults and difficulties in that tour. mai ek kaam kartha hu, ek baar uske ghar jake puche thi hu ki saahaayad ye meri kuch madat karpaaye,thinking that he told kaka to take the turn to geets house. kaka smiled in himself and took the diversion.
   As soon as the car stopped Maan came out of car and entered in the gate He wondered as the gate kept open. He went to the hall but find none. A light voice of Devi sthothram fr. radior taperecorder is been hearing to his ears. Unknowingly his steps took that directionto the back yaard of the house. There he stoos stunnrd and numb by seeing the beautifull sight ever infront of him.
     There Geet,, Arpitha, Dishu standing ina line performing Bharatanatyam to the Devi sthothram''Akhilandeswari...Chamundeswari...Palayamam.. Gouri..."with their beautifull mudraas and  perfect bhangimaas.
Geet is performing the dance with full grace and as perfect devotteeto maa DURGA. She wore a suit with her dupatta tied around her waist.Her ligh,light foot taking stepsaccording  to the lirics, completingthe meaning of each and eachword of that sthothram. Dishu is also performing like geet twisting her small,small handa and legs and showing her beautiful almond eyes which shows full expression of eachword of that sthothram.Arpitha is also not less than the rest of two.Totally there r 2 mothers and 2 daughters performing at a time on a common stage. That means 3 generations performing at one stage.
 A very...very...raresight, one and only among lacks or we can say crores pf people
     Maan rooted at his place , he even forgot to blink his eyes and breathing. He dont want to blink as if he will miss the beautiful scene if he winks. Kaka who, came inside to get chai fr. geet also stud numb seeinh this tremendous performance given by trio.
       Here the trio r not at inthe sence that somebody r observing them. they t fully involved in their dance with full grace and elegance.
     Maan is totally spell bound and flattened by this new face of geet. He is not able to express his amazement and his happiness inwords. His heart miss its beats. An unknown happiness spread in his heart,which he never experienced before.
     At last after total 10mtsthe sthothram completed and the triobend down to retreat. As soon as theystopped , they turned by the sound of claps. There stood Maan and kaka clapping their hands in a big aplause. The trio shocked to see them inside the house like that,
  Aap? geets regular exclamatory,
 Sir..aap kab aayi?Arpitha?
Dost'Dishu jumped inhappy and ran to him.
Maan took her in his arms kissing her saying beautiful dance.
T.U. Dishu, nani teached me.
Maan looked at geet said, beautifuldance, i dont know aap itna accha dance karthe ho..
Geet:- Teacher hu na bacchhonka sikhanahai mujhe.
Maan:- tabhi tho aaphi sikhayahoga, arpitha aur dishu ko..
Geet:- ji.. ander ayiye..
Kaka:- such me bitia,aap bahut accha dance kiya. aapko stage per performance dena chahiyetha.
Maan;-haa, geet kakathik. kahrahahai,aur aaptino milkediyetho kitna naam , fame aur keerthi and...he wants to say something,
Geet:- She spated saying ,.. hume nahi chahiye ye sab. she told in a raised voice.
 [ she dont want to be in news ,as she fears for her past. she dont want to identify by anyothers, she wants to be dark]
Maan:-lookedher  in awe as he never seen her raising her tone in that way.
   Geet composed herself immeaditely and said sorry to them and asked them to sit i couch.
Mai paani lekar aathi hu, sha oved to get water.
Mai aap ki haath kiadrakwaali chai keliye aayahu beti'' kaka
Per maitho aapse baath karne ayithi nahi aapki b. coffee keliye    
said Maan.
Geet:- per maitho kuch  bhi nahi kaha aapse?Maan:- ji wo mai kahrahaki mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai.
Geet:- pehle nastha, cofee hojanedijiye, phir baath karsakthe, and she went to kitchen to tell arpitha to prepare chai,and coffee.

Precap:- Maan asking suggestions to develop tourism co. to geet.


t.u guys for ur responce. 


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
yaar didnt checked  after typing no time for  editing , as net is giving trouble, current pblmaswell sorry guys 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awesome update. it will be wonderful when 3 generations dance or sing or enjoy together. maan asking suggestions from geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely maan is so indulged with geet's dance performance in front of maa durga & offered her to give stage performance but geet refused..do continue soon dear 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
nice up[date
beautiful dance
loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update👏 omg Geet is a trained dancer😲 dia is sooo cute .😆i hope Maan gets to know about geet's past . 
Eagerly waiting for the update plzzz update soon
Thank u for the pm😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful and interesting FF...

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