maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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who accept me as writer😆😆

i knew 
every one who read my ff 
want to kill me,
becose many time i m off for long days
par its urgent dear

as i have two kids
and being house wife is really tuff job

so who want to read 
my ff
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as i  make index here for my every update

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this is my first attempt to write


1               :jaara hatke please sab bachke(on -going)


  2                  marriage no murder is guD option(on-going)


3                    tere bacche mere bacche(on -going)


4                  Totally gone case  (still to start)
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about poem i write
 poem         page no.            ff name              writer of that ff
    1           page 1                  kashmakash                  muskaan
    2                  pg1            winter sonata                 ritzy09
    3                  2                 Dangerous love             sdlife19
    4            Page 7                             Pretty little liars                                    neha5058
    5            Page 12                         DANGEROUS LOVE                               sdlife19
    6            Page 28                        The escort business                              ananya/tanya
      7            Page 45                          INNOCENT LOVE            tellyme 
    8            Page 62                        u , me , aur...             valli22
    9            Page 73                       parineeta                   kawaii_geet
    10          Page 79                       in love with my jiju       doublecross
     11         Page 80                      Winter sonata                          ritzy09
        12             page  85                      The escort business                       ananya21/tanya
        13       Page 87                     winter sonata               ritzy09
    14       page 87          kashmakash             muskaan
    15         Page 99                  Captured love           mrs.msk
      16    Page 104               kashmakash              muskan
     17       Page 105             life partner                  palindrome
     18,19      Page 105        hamaari prem kahani      heytal
        20              page 105                   DANGEROUS LOVE        SDLIFE 19
       21              Page 116                  Captured Love                      mrs. msk
      22               Page 122                  DARMIYAAN                         neha512
      23            Page 130                  DAASTAANE  WAFA               SOBIA 4MAANEET
    24            Page 130                      INNOCENT SEDUCTRESS             TANYA K
from 25 to 31         


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                                        POEM NO :1
this is the poem 
i write for muskaan's new ff
like to share

i knew
me gone mad

kya kya likhne lahi hu
to  much emotional
what to do
yeh din hi aise hai
you understand na
hi hi hiii

na hum bewafa the
na tum bewafa the
kasoor tha to,bas tha uss faasale ka
jo pahle pal se hi
hum dono ke darmiyaan the


tum ne kabhi kuch bhi to mujh se kaha  nahi
aur agar kabhi kuch kaha hoga toh
un faasalo ke kaaran maine kabhi kuch bhi sunna nahi
aur kua sunti,
kyu sunti,
mai uss kahi gayi baat ko
kyoki jab maine huch sun na chaaha aapse 
tab to kabhi ,aap ne kuch kaha nahi

aur  ab
jab aap ne kaha ki
hum aapke hai
jism se rooh tak
din se raat tak
dil ki aakhiri saas tak
dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi  ,sun na saki
saare sapne dobaara dekhu
aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki
ab 
yeh sab jaan kar
teri har baat maan kar
ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki


na tum bewafaa the
na hum bewafaa the
kasoor tha to tha
bas uss faasale ka
jo hameesha se,hum dono ke darmiyyan the

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                                                         POEM NO :2
this one 
i wrote for

winter sonata


jab thi mai bhi masoom ,unkhili si kali
to maine bhi ki thi himaat
bai khayali,bai irradgi mai
maine bhi bana liya tha sapno mai aapna aashiyaan

mai samjhi thi ,mere sapne tho mere aapne hai
jo pure karlu gi mai kabhi na kabhi
par na socha tha,,jo hai mere aapne
woh hi kuchal dege ,unhe aapne kadmo se

aur tod diya that unhone muhje is tarah
ki khud se khade hone ko apne parro par
ya milane ko khud se nazar
ek zaraa bhi nahi tha mujh mai zinda raha

aaj jab paya khud ko khud ke hi saamne kisi dusre roop mai,to phir dil ne kaha

mujhe bataa,mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai kuch thum si gaii,jhijhak si gai
par phir uski aarmano si bhaari aankho mai dekh kar kaha,ja  bana apna ghar kahi dur kisi saahil par
tabhi

ari nadaan
rait par bane aaishiyaane ko toh
samander ka mohtaaj hona padta hai
kyoki usse to koi bhi sarphiri laher mita deti hai

to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai chand lamhe sochti rahi
phir boli,ja bana le sabse dur chand par apna ghar

ary pagli
chand jo khud hi andhere ka wasi hai
jo khud hi suraj ki roshni se chipta hai
woh kaise de paayega teri aashao ko roshni

to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai kuch simat si rahi thi is duniya ki berukhi se
par uski ek siski ne ,tod di meri bebasi si
aur apni rooh ki awaaz,
ke chup ja kahi
tham ja kahi
na lad ab kisi se
ke koi aisa  yaha nahi
ke jiske liye tu kar sake khud pe yaki
tabhi uski ek awaaz ke
 eeye pari meri
bataa muhje ke

to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
ek pal ke liye to koi jawaab mai de na saki
par phir kuch lamhe soch kar
uski aur dekh kar mai boli
jaa bana le badalou pe apne aashiyaane ko
jisko chu na sake ye zami aur yaha ke log

arre maasom
ku tujhe laga
ke aasma hai,is duniya se zuda
aur rakh lega yeh tujhe ,har musibat se baccha
kyoki
ik hawa ka jhoka hi,dega issko hila
kaise rakhe ga ye tumhe samet kar
jab hawa ka  jhoka hi,le jaayega issko udda


to phir mai kaha jao,kya karu
kya koi kouna ,koi hissa is duniya ka
nahi hai hammare liye bhi bana

ab bahut ho chuka 
sabre kho chuka
ab  hum hai jaha,hamaare sapno ka aashiyaana hoga waha

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NISHUUU jhappi pa muahhh.
missed u a lot yar...
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hi dear😃how r u?
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

hi dear😃how r u?


me fine dear

how are you

and 
what you think about my  new poem
kaisi lagi
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


me fine dear

how are you

and 
what you think about my  new poem
kaisi lagi

u r asking about ur poem for muskan na?
yar it really suits geets emotions,loved it a lottt,amazing1.
2KIDS,1HUSBAND,HOUSE WIFE but still U R AMAZINGLY MULTI TALANTED👏.