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sona rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

NISHU i sent pm's to my buddies yar.

love u.

Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago

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#752

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sona rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

nishuuu...kahan ghayab hai yar???????

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

here dear

till my net get dead

hey dear

you know me write three poem more for others

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: sona-rai
nishuuu...kahan ghayab hai yar???????

hi dear

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

poem no:

it for kashmakash by muskan

me here with my few lines😆😆

sorry for mistake😉(spelling mistake dear)

yeh kaisi tukado mein

zindagi jee rahe the hum

hai hum ,

ek dusre kee

yeh kyu nahi ,

ek dusre se kahe rahe the hum

apne aap banaye gaye

mere niyamo ke alawa

kabhi bhi , haan

kabhi bhi ,toh kuch maine kiya nahi

aur kya woh

badalna chahegi mujhe

iska bhi toh mokka ,

maine hame diya nahi

kya mera

hammare is rishte mein ,

khush na rahna

yu ghutna

aur

chupchap ,sab sehna

kya kasoor tha bas unhi ka

kya mera

kabhi bhi ,

kuch na kah paana hi

mera bhi kasoor tha hi

kyoki

woh meri baat sune

meri har chooti zid ke aage jhuke

mere nakhre uttae

mujhe apni palko par bethaiye

is sab ka mokka bhi toh

maine hame diya nahi

aaj jab woh aayi

mere yu saamne

tham gayi yeh zami

ruk gaya aasma

par

mujhe mein naaye ahsaas the jagne laage

aur khud ka hi ,

naya pahlu

tha nazar aaya

mujhe mere hi saamne

jo chah raha tha

ke chum lu usse

chu lu aise usse ,

ke jaise chua na ho pahle usse

yeh kasak si mujhme jaagne lagi

kyu apne in hasin palo ko bhi

aur hasin banna sake hum

is baat ka bhi mokka ,

maine hame diye nahi

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 11 years ago

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
me here with my few lines😆😆
sorry for mistake😉(spelling mistake dear)

yeh kaisi tukado mein
zindagi jee rahe the hum
hai hum ,
ek dusre kee
yeh kyu nahi ,
ek dusre se kahe rahe the hum

apne aap banaye gaye
mere niyamo ke alawa
kabhi bhi , haan
kabhi bhi ,toh kuch maine kiya nahi
aur kya woh
badalna chahegi mujhe
iska bhi toh mokka ,
maine hame diya nahi

kya mera
hammare is rishte mein ,
khush na rahna
yu ghutna
aur
chupchap ,sab sehna
kya kasoor tha bas unhi ka
kya mera
kabhi bhi ,
kuch na kah paana hi
mera bhi kasoor tha hi
kyoki
woh meri baat sune
meri har chooti zid ke aage jhuke
mere nakhre uttae
mujhe apni palko par bethaiye
is sab ka mokka bhi toh
maine hame diya nahi

aaj jab woh aayi
mere yu saamne
tham gayi yeh zami
ruk gaya aasma
par
mujhe mein naaye ahsaas the jagne laage
aur khud ka hi ,
naya pahlu
tha nazar aaya
mujhe mere hi saamne
jo chah raha tha
ke chum lu usse
chu lu aise usse ,
ke jaise chua na ho pahle usse
yeh kasak si mujhme jaagne lagi

kyu apne in hasin palo ko bhi
aur hasin banna sake hum
is baat ka bhi mokka ,
maine hame diye nahi

superb lines!

each line depicts the story of a relation!

wow!

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

poem no :17

for ff life partnerby palindrome

from geet point of view

(spelling mistake count karna is not allowed)

rishto ka kaisa yeh pahlou

hai aaj nazar aaya

ke ab toh

ajnabi sa lag raha hai

mujhe mera hi saaya

kehna aasan hai ki

bada gaya hai woh

par woh to badala hi nahi

jo badle hai

woh to mere hi ahsaas hai

mein jaanti thi

ki woh rishte unke liye khaas hai

par kyu

par kyu aaj mujhe

unke liye sabse khaas hone ki

lagi yeh nayi aas hai

yeh sab to mere liye

ajnabi se ahsaas hai

kyu mein itna badal gayi

kya mein sach mein itni nazuk thi ki

rishto ki thodi si tapan se hi pighal gayi

aaj to mujhe

aarav bhi rishto mein mujh se pakka laga

kyoki uss masoom ne

khushi khushi de diya

apne khaas hone ka ahsaa

is nanhi pari ko

jis se bhi jyaada khaas hone ki

abhi hui thi mujhe aas

hey my dear mami

chillexxx

now you have to listen

so please relaxxx

mami batata hu mein

aapko ek sachai

jo yeh rishto mein jalan

aur sabse khaas hone hi aas ki havaa

abhi aap se hai takrai

yeh mujhse ho kar hai aaie

aur

rishto mein sabse khaas hone ki chah

yahi hai rishto ki sachai

yeh baat aur hai ke

aap khud kuud gai iss aag mein

aur mere charo aur

yeh meri pyaari dadi ne hai lagayi

please tell me guys

lines are good aur not

me waiting for your reply

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#759

poem no : 18 and 19

this two are written for hamari prem kahaani

ff by heytal

this one i write after reading the pologue

kyu hua yeh saath mere

jab kuch bhi to tay karna

nahi tha haath mein mere

mein aayi hi kyu ,is duniya mein

agar mujhe aana hi tha ,toh

aisa to koi saath diya hota

jo mere hone ko sarthak ker deta

aisa nahi hai ke ,koi aaya nahi tha

sang apne jo sapne laaya nahi tha

jisne bin kuch kahe ,sab vaade kar diye the

bin mujhe chue ,mere har zakham bhar diye the

jab usse ,rahna nahi tha saath mere

to kyu bhar diye the ,aankhon mein naye sapne mere

woh chaa gaya

sab kuch hi to chut gaya

har sapna mera tut gaya

kuch bhi nahi tha haath mein mere

na tutna mere adure sapne ka

na woh unchahe saath phere

kyu hua yeh sath mere

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#760

poem no : 19

for same ff hamarri prem kahaani

few line from geet point of view

kyu hua yeh saath mere

kyu tut gaye sapne mere

bina hue pure

kyu koi laut aaya

agar aana hi tha usse

toh gaya hi kyu tha

jab gaya tha woh zindagi se

toh har sapna le gaya tha

aur mujhe un apno ko dekhne ki sazaa de gaya tha

phir zindagi mein kya hua

kyu hua

kis liye hua

yeh sab baate yaad nahi

na todo mujhe iss kadar ke jud bhi na saku

nahi suni kissi ne meri faryaad bhi

toh ab uske aane se ,kuch aur jyaada apne rab se ruth gayi hu mein

ke kyu bheja ab usse ,jab itni tut gayi hu mein

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