I saw each & every dialogue you used here flashing before my eyes..
That's essentially been the problem, ZZ..Everytime Arnav hurt her..
>>That time after he wants to buy the dress for Khushi as a Tip..& afterwards while denying that he wasn't taking out his anger with Khushi on La, how he shouted, "You don't even exist for me"..
>>The Diwali, "Didn't mean a thing"..
>>The bandagement "Jiss din aapko yeh baat pata chalegi uss din hum yeh dekhne ke liye yaha nahi honge"
It all promised us of a time when Arnav would say, "My world doesn't exist without you", "Nothing means anything without you", "I don't even wanna know anything if you're not there"..& this is what we were promised & later cheated out of..Saale 4liars..
Coming to the OS:
All the talks of 'aukad' & 'sasti cheez' just brought the intensity so effectively into the story. & that train hanging off from over the pool & then falling off.I literally saw that through my eyes, thanks to your imagery.. But did you have to??The life support was not only for Khushi..It was for Arnav too..
& loved the touch you brought by bringing Arnav to Devi Maiyya's feet, but when it's too late for Khushi to see..It made the bandagement wala dialogue all the more potent. & the mitti wala scene reminded me of how Arnav cried in the pre-wedding epi..
I majorly loved this OS because it depicted how it should have been..How Arnav's redemption should have been..& how like in your OS, it's just too late for all that...
Edited by farah53 - 11 years ago
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