ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted* - Page 24

This...

oh god.. what a painful shot.. 

Superbb too good story
touch my heart

Omg im speechless! Makes my heart cry out :( 

This is such a wonderful masterpiece. Loved it and cried too. Thanks for posting it. You are such an awesome writer. 👏

This is the best and most earnest piece of writing I ever read in India Forums. I was not a follower of IPKKND. Watched it on n off and as such I am definitely not a regular in the forum too and I have not read FFs on them except for the one written by my friend in the initial days of the show.

I had read it the first time but I would still comment! :)

this is one of the awesome work i come across...  not one of the this is just bestest...
you penned evey emotion perfectly with the dialogues... the whole karma thing you added here that everything comes back to you .. you never change it anyhow ...
thank you for good reads..

this is first time .. m reading you and i just loved it
Edited by fraser - 9 years ago

Awesome... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The mud scene u copied frm Sher-e-zaat was at a point whn tht lady was atlast, after losing her most priced relation (her husband), looks out for the Almighty. 


Edited by love-hurts - 8 years ago