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nice update!!!
so again abhiya are going to be together 😃.but i wanna know about pia's nightmares.
continue soon...
Yipeee me 1st
Lovely update shreya dear😊Abhiya relation turn normal...waiting for nxt whts happen Piya?continue soon dear😊
Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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----unres-----dammit! I missed my place...😡sorry for unresing so late...fabulous update moti...so finally abhay got to know that Piya had had nightmares are is still suffering from it...of course Abhay u are the only one to heal her😛 through ur love😉 go for it man!
Originally posted by: ..mandy..
See I am unreserving my comment like a good gal 😛 This FF is my fav among ur works n I was abt to PM u for an update but I saw ur note saying u will update shortly 😉 The update as usual was a great read n I still wonder if ur old soul trapped in a young mindless teen's body 😛 I wish I had half the maturity back then when I was ur age to understand n depict relationships so well as u do 😊 Abhay is such a stupid moron 😡 He clearly has feelings for Pia but y the hell was he in denial? I can understand his heart was broken n he also knew Pia more or less was sailing on the same boat but still he avoided her Liked the way u wrote the part where he reminscences their moments together by inhaling her fragrance like he wanted to trap it with him forever or watching a show once he considered stupid just bcoz she liked it 😳 Finally it was Pia who broke the ice while Abhay was busy dodging her 😛 Who was a psychiatrist I wonder here 😛 I loved the way Pia made his bday special 👏 It was very sweet n very well penned down. Even now that dim witted idiot cannot realise what Pia feels for him? 😡 Misha coming to see Abhay was a lil bit of a shocker for me I thought staying with Abhay, Pia had learnt to overcome the demons of her past but looks like walking out on Abhay only brought them back in her life 😭 I am really curious to know what Misha told Abhay that made him take a firm stand I hope its something that brings them closer rather than drive them apart I really cant stand this any longer Shreya 😳 Please update this one first na? 😃
I know I was supposed to do it yesterday but I was caught up in meetings till late night
Mandy...first you call me an old soul then you nag me for being under 18...are decide karke bolo😆
It's not Abhay's fault Mandy. he is messed up big time and unlike Pia he hardly had a proper confidante, so it is hard for him to accept his feelings , or to act on them. And, Pia understands him and she is more accepting of her feelings so😛 Abha knows Pia is attracted to him, he just doesnt know the extent of her feelings
And...i wouldn't be so sure if its walking out on Abhay that's affected him you know😉
Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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Fab update as usual. I have to say on base of emotion this has to be your best work amongst all. The way you portray the dilemmas, insecurity of a person on trusting someone, going into a relationship, fear of heart break and trust break, fear of rejection, aftereffects of bad childhood, parental problem - isn't normal for a teenage girl like you. so that way hats off 👏👏 i have to admit im very impressed and you know how difficult it is to impress me. though you act like a kid at time but i guess it's allowed since i do too but you are not a normal kid 😛jk 😆 I understand Abhay's situation too well and how the fear works because he has a bad experience that changed his life. his dad's cheating his mom and her death - poor him. his fears are completely justified. and Pia's feelings are so strong here. she actually called him and did everything to surprise and make him smile on birthday. you know for a person like Pia - i mean the way you portrayed her here emo is a big issue and she is coiled up into her own so my psychology says a person like her would forget how Abhay behaved with her and still pretend to be normal just because they mus love him extremely and know the person too well to realize it wasnt completely his fault either. again marvelous writing 👏Does Pia still get nightmares because she is afraid she isnt good enough to be loved or someone will hurt her leave her again? 😕fab work.. update soon
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