MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
nyc prt
Maan is soo rude
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Niceee
THanx Devrji for pm..<3<3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Nice part ...
Thanks for the pm dear...
Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
very interesting part richa

why maan so so rude  😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part...waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - III


Annie wnt to dinner table. Karan and Sunaina wtng fr hr. She sat wid dem. Servants strt serving food to dem. Karan is looking very disturbd. Sunaina askd hm wats d matter.
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SUNAINA:kya hua Karan beta aap bahut pareshan lag rahe hai?

KARAN:mom aaj subah fir se Rathore uncle ka phone aaya tha. wo puchh rahe the ki hum logo ne kya decide kiya shadi ko lekar.

Annie got angry.

ANNIE:are isme puchhne wali konsi baat hai.itni b common sence nai hai unme? Hum jinn halat se guzar rahe hai,aise me hum shadi k bare me soch b kaise skte hai.

Karan too get frustrated.

KARAN:to tum kya chahti ho ki ab is ghar me sab jeena chhod de?

ANNIE:Bhai aap itne selfish kaise ho skte ho? abi 6 mahine nai hue us hadse ko or apko apni shadi ki padi hai? Dadima ko pralytic attack hua hai us wajah se. Geet ne us din se ek shabd nai bola hai.aisi situation me aap ye sb soch b kaise skte ho?

KARAN:maine pehle b kaha hai dadima ko hospital me admitt karo or geet ko pagalkhane me.

Karan's word raised hr anger 100 times.

ANNIE:Bhai how dare u?khabrdar jo ye baat apne dobara boli to.ye ghar akele apka nai hai hum sabka bhi hai. Or raha swal Geet or dadi ka to unke medical expences main pay krti hu.so dis is none of ur business ki wo dono kaha rahenge or kaha nai.

Sunaina seeing both create tension.so she intrupts.

SUNAINA:karan pls beta shant ho jao.mr. Rathore se main khud bat kr lungi.nd Annie apne bade bhai ye bat krne ka ye konsa trika hai?

ANNIE still boiling in angr:mujhe tameez sikhane k badle pehle bhai ko rishto ki kadar krna sikhaiye.

Annie left d dinnr widout eatng nythng. She went to hr room, feeling very lonly. Trying vry hard to divert hr mind.bt past injuries disturb hr alot. She saw a photo frame on hr study table. She picked dat nd hugged it.

ANNIE:main apko kabi maaf nai krungi.bahut bada dokha dia apne hum sbko.i'll nver frgve u 4 dat.

She strt crying nd laid on hr bd. Slowly2 she caught in sleep...

"A White colourd Car running vry fast on lonly road. Hr speed increase more nd more. All tries bcmng failed to cntrl dat car.it seems dat d breaks of dat car r nt workng.it moves unctrolled here nd dere.it runs at vry hyper speed. Suddenly it falls in a deep KHAI nd blast cmpletly."

NAHIII, Annies screams in dream nd wake up instantly due to fear. Hr body is cmpltly wet. She swetting badly.she hyperventilated. Sunaina came in hr room nd switch on d lights. She went near hr nd hugged hr. Annie's eyes still filled wid fear. Sunaina tryng to calm down hr nd gave her water.

SUNAINA:beta r u alrite(she nodded yes) firse wai sapna dekha.(she nodded yes again) beta tu bhul kyu nai jati ye sb.kb tak khud ko takleef deti rhegi.jo hona tha wo ho chuka hai use
badla nai ja skta.beta jb tk tu apna dhyan dusri cheezo me nai lagaegi ye sapna tujhe aise hi darata rahega.

ANNIE:mom aap jo keh rahe ho wo mere bas me nahi hai.kaise bhul jao sb kuchh. Geet or dadima ki ye halat mujhse bardast nahi hoti. Unki ye halat mujhe baar baar sb yaad dilati hai.

SUNAINA:isliye to beta Karan bol raha tha ki ghar ka mahol badalne ki zarurat hai. Ek baar uske sujhav pe sock k to dekh.

ANNIE:pls mom aap bhi janti hai ki mera faisla badle wala nai hai.hm is topic pe pehle b behas kr chuke hai. Geet or dadima yahi rahenge mere paas isi ghar me.or ye mera akhri faisla hai.is topic pe ab or discussion nai hoga. Apko Karan bhai ki khushio ki itni hi
fikar hai to theek hai aap log jo karna chahte hai karie.leki meri dadima or meri best frnd yahi rahenge.

SUNAINA: ok ok calm down.ab tu subah subah gussa karke apna mood mat off kar. Kal raat ko b gusse me tune kuchh nai khaya
tha. Chal ab jaldi se fresh ho ja main breakfast lagwati hu.or ha bina khaye hi office mat chale jana.

She wnt outside. Annie got up nd went to washroom. Aftr getting change she went to see Geet,how she is. She sit near her. Due to
her new medicines she is sleeping calmly. Annie kissed on her forhead. Meanwhile her cell start ringing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
OMG!!!! lot of suspense but still amazing
love it so much
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
lovely update...
annie's and geet bond is very nice...
kya maan geet ko pasand nahin karta hain????

yeh dadima aur geet dono ko kya huva hain???

jaldi next update dedo...waiting eagerly...
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BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - IV


Annie's phone ringing. She pick up d call, it was from Romeo, MD of Dream Fashion House.
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ANNIE:ha Romio bolo kya baat hai?

ROMEO:Annie sis tum kaha ho?

ANNIE:ghar pe hu breakfast kar rai hu? Kya hua koi jaruri baat hai?

ROMEO:Annie tum bhul gayi aaj hmari meeting hai Mr. Killawala k sath.

ANNIE:oh yes wo to main bhul hi gayi thi. Romeo ek kaam karo tum ye meeting akele attend kar lo.

ROMEO:nahi sis its not possible.bhul gai hume aaj unki factory jana hai.last time jo fabric aaya tha wo itna badia nai tha,isiliye ye meeting factory me rakhi hai. Is baar tm khud jake fabric check karna uske baad hi ye deal final hogi. Main 20min me waha pahunch raha hu tum bhi pahunch jao.

ANNIE:theek hai Romeo main nikalti hu.

Call cuts. She left from d home without eating anything. She is waiting 4 her shaffer but wen she is seeing she is getting late so she
decided to drive d car hr own. Romeo already reached to d factory nd waits 4 her. Aftr few min.she also reached to d factory. She ws just about to park d car in parking area. She by chance look someone who looks very familier
to hr. Sshe doesn't believe on hr eyes. Howz it can b possible. Her mind ask again nd again. She followed him but soon he vanished frm her eyes. She immediately ran to meet Mr.
Killlawala. He greets her. But she was still thinking about dat person to whom she saw just a min ago.

ANNIE:Mr. Killawala hum baki bate baad me discuss karenge. Abhi aap apne sare workers ko ek sath buliye.

Both Romeo and Mr. Killawala r confused what she is talking about?

ROMEO intrupts:Annie sis what r u saying? Hum yaha fabric dekhne aaye hai na ki workers.

ANNIE:Romeo pls jo main keh rai hu wo karo. Mr. Killawala aap pls abhi k abi apne sare workers ko bulwaiye,mujhe unse baat karni
hai.

Seeing no choice he agreed wid her demand. He summoned all d workers. He introdused Annie to his workers. All workers r confused.

ANNIE:dekiye main kisi ko dhoond rai hu,jise maine subah abi thodi der pehle parking area me dekha tha.so pls co operate wid me. Tell me yaha aise kitne workers hai jinke pas bike hai ya jo kisi k sath aaj bike pe aaye hai. Un workers ko chhodkar baki sab apne kaam pe laut jae. 50 workers stayed all others left. She enquired more. 40 more workers left. Only 10 remained. Annie asked their details. All 10 gave. Out of 3 match up with her requirments.

ANNIE:Mr. Killawala in 3 workers ki full details mujhe chahiye. Romeo still in confusion what exactly she wants to do. But he decide to keep quite nd wait 4 the rite time.

KILAWALA:ok miss Anvesha aap mujhe 10 min dijiye main puri detail nikalwata hu.

He gave hr all details regarding dat 3 workers.

ANNIE:Romeo abi time nahi hai tum ek kaam karo ye meeting tum kar lo mujhe bahut zaruri kaam yaad aa gaya hai. I need to go.

Annie left from dere. Romeo apolozise for the inconvience and go wid Mr. Killawala to attend d meeting. Annie straight go to the private dectative. She gave him all details and one pic.

ANNIE:ye insaan in 3 jagaho me se kahi pe bhi ho sakta hai. Mujhe is admi se judi har information chahiye.

DECTATIVE:dont worry mam apka kaam ho jayega.

ANNIE:good.

She gave him a chekque. Nd went to her office. In her cabin she only thinks about morning incident.
Annie thought( aise kaise ho sakta hai. Kya wakiye me jo maine dekha wo sach tha ya sirf mera weham. O god pls meri help karo.) whole day she only think about dat man. She saw him in her thoughts again and again. Seven
days passed to dat incident. Today Annie came early in d office.

ANNIE: Tasha... Tasha.

She summoned her secratory. Tasha came inside d cabin.

TASHA:yes mam.

ANNIE:ek baat batao main tumhari secratory hu ya tum meri?

TASHA:mam aap.

ANNIE:whattt?

TASHA:mam mera matlab hai ki aap mam hai or main apki secratory hu.

ANNIE:to mujhe meri appointments ke bare mein kon batayega?

TASHA:silly me,main bataungi mam.

ANNIE:to batao jaldi.

TASHA:oh yes silly me.
(She gave her all details of her today's shedule) mam ye ek parcel bhi aaya hai aapke liye pata nahi kaha se. Confidential tha isliye
maine khola nahi.

ANNIE:theek hai main dekh lungi. Tum jao.
TASHA left from there...
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part dear 

just loved it 

maan's intry is supr 

what happen in past 

cont soon 

thanks for pm