MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12

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<div align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="7">❤️BE MINE FOREVER❤️</font></font></div>
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<div align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="5">Hai all, Richa Kapoor again with a New FF of our Favourite Maaneet Theme</font></font>
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</font></div>Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

 PART - I

 

 Today nothing new is happend. As usual Doctor came daily to see his patient. The room is filled with the same silent and dullness. Doc check the pulse first. Again his forhead filled with many lines. A girl wearing a black jeans nd red tshirt having a long hairs seems very tenced. Dont know what happend to the girl. She looked at doctor with a great hope. May be this time he gave some hope or improvement news about the girl who half laid on a bed in a cream coloured suit,like a stone. Her eyes are open but no sign of life seemed in them. Her cute face looks very dull. Her long hairs tide carelessely. She continously looking only at the pics hanging on wall opposite to her. Neither she moves nor she utter any word. She is cmpltly silent. She is not more than a vegetable,totally dependent on others. For her day or night both are same because she doesnt able to senced any thing. She dont able to listen what's going on around hr. She caught some where in her own thoughts. Dont know when she will come out from them. 

(BED ROOM OF MAANEET)

The girl who was standing near her was her  sister in law(nanad) and from past  6months,she take care of her and desperatily waitng to hear her bhabhi's voice once again. She is very concerned for her. She can do anything to made her alright. But her all tries fails. She change many Doctors. Arrange India's bestest treatment for her but all in vein. As she doesnt respond to any treatment. Her dull and dry eyes have no expressions. She cant see her like dat as she is her only best frnd. She wants to see her like b4 at any cost.

 

 ANNIE:-kya baat hai doc aap pichhhle kai dino se roz aa rahe hai lekin Geet me koi improvement kyu nai ho rahi hai?

 

 She is very curious nd worried.

 

 Doc:-dekhiye maine pehle b apse kaha hai jab tak ye royengi nahi tab tak humare kisi bhi treatment ka koi fayada nahi hoga.kuchh b  kijiye lekin inko rulaiye. Agar ye aisi hi rahi to hume drr hai ki kahi inhe...

 

 But befor he compltes Annie stops him as she doesnt wanted to hear more bad news,sply for Geet,to whom she love more dan anyone.  She is not only hr bhabhi,but her childhood frnd too. With whom she share all hr happiness,worries and best moments of life. But from past 6 months she missed her so much. There are many members in a family,but Geet is d only one she relied fully. Annie is very strong girl who owned a Fashion company at her own. Her perfection and hardwork gave new heights to her company and name in Fashion World. But she still defeated when she look at Geet.

 

 ANNIE:- pls doc aise mat boliye. Kuchh nahi hoga ise.

 

 DOC:- maine kuchh new medicines likh di hai.inhe de dijiye baki jaisi bhagwan ki marzi.

 

 He left with servant. Annie sat in front of her. But Geet cant see her for once. Annie cupped her face.

 

 ANNIE:- idhar dekh meri taraf. Itna naraz hai mujhse? Pichhle 6 mahine se teri aawaz sunne ke liye taras gayi hu. Dadi bhi us dinn  se...(she stopped. Tears rolled on her cheeks continously) dekh bahot ho gaya tera ab. Bahut seva karwa li tune mujhse. Lekin ab  main thak chuki hu. Kab tak tu or dadi aise hi mujhe sataoge. Pls ek baar mujhse baat karle. I promise main teri har baat manungi. Tu  jo kahegi wahi karungi bas ek baar kuchh to bol de.

 

 But Geet still looking only at the hanging pics and said nothing. Annie rested her head on her shoulder. She is still crying at her  miserable condition. Dont know when she got in sleep... But Geet cant sleep properly from last six months. That day change her life completely. Geet is very bubbly and fun loving girl. Love everyone and always tries to make everyone happy around her.When she talks all around her mesmerized. No one can ever think that the same fun loving girl ever converts into a live dead

Plz Plz Plz let me know how you like the story start...

Love

- Richa

Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

nice dear...👍🏼

lovely start...

Interesting Start !!

Cont Soon !! 😃 !!

loved d 1st part..cont.soon...

I like the concept and the character sketch.The first chp was sad but very well written.I wonder what happened to Geet and who/what is responsible for her current condition.Looking forward to the next chp and update soon😊

nice start.. soemthing different.. Geet is already married to Maan?