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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
nice start ... lovely . come back soon .,... 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Part 1 is awesome ...hope M will realise his true feelings for G soon ...do continue soon ...thxs for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Strawberry and red rose Part 2
I thank my friend Ratna for making this siggy for me.
 
Thanks to everyone.I'm rly thankful 2 u all 4 d wonderful response.1 of my readers
pointed out that Maan gave orchids instead of strawberry n red rose 2 Sameera.Wht i've 2 say is Maan said he'll giv strawberry n red roe 2 Sameera when he proposes her.But orchid was a b'day gift.
 
 
Maan woke up from the sleep.Geet was blushing thinking of what happened between them.She was shy to face him.
M:Geet...i fell asleep.
G:You were drunk...and then...after what you did you got tired.So you fell asleep.
M:What did i do to get tired?After playing in the water i just fell asleep.Right?
Geet got the biggest shock of her life.
She thought:The moment which i considered the most is not in Maan's memory at all.
She tried to control her tears knowing that her eyes were becoming wet.
M:Let us go back Geet.
G:Yes.
M:Geet...you know...while sleeping i dreamt of Sameera feeding me strawberry.It was such a romantic dream.I never wanted the dream to get over.
Geet's heart broke.
M:I wish i would be able to marry Sameera soon and make the dream real.
Geet was shattered.
She thought:Maan can't understand that his feelings for Sameera is not love.But he will understand who his real love is.

After a month...
Geet felt dizzy and started vomiting.She consulted a Doctor.
Dr:Congrats...you are pregnant.
Geet was shocked.
Slowly she got relieved.
Geet thought:I will tell the truth to Maan.When he comes to know about this he will accept me.He may even realize that he loves me.
She imagined her feeding Maan strawberry singing:

Mere humsafar mere humsafar mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar
mere paas aa mere paas aa

Geet gave him a red rose.He took with a smile.
G:Shall we dance?
M:Yes.
He kept the red rose behind his ear.They both chuckled.He held her hand and started dancing.They were lost in each other.


Hai safar ye hamara naya naya
Kisi pal andhera jo ho gaya
Hai safar ye hamara naya naya
Kisi pal andhera jo ho gaya
Kahin kho na jaayein ye reh guzar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa
Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar
mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar
mere paas aa mere paas aa...(Refugee).

Maan caressed her face:I love you Geet.

G:Love you too Maan.
Suddenly she realized that it was only her dream.She smiled.

Geet went towards Maan.
M:Geet...i was waiting for you.
She smiled.
M:I was waiting to tell you something.
Her eyes sparkled.He showed a red rose and strawberry.
She blushed knowing that her dream was coming true.Maan was going to propose her.
M:I am going to propose Sameera.
Geet was shocked.
M:I wanted to tell you this before i approach Sameera.I just can't anymore.I am crazy for Sameera.
Geet was shattered.She was trying hard not to cry.Maan ran away.Geet cried.
Unfortunately Sameera was absent that day.Maan was really upset.
He rang her up:Sameera..why did'nt you come to college today?I missed you.
Sameera smiled:I have cold Maan.Anyways happy to know that you missed me.
He smiled:Will you come tomorrow.I want to give you a surprise.
She waited eagerly for that surprise.
S:I will come for sure.I don't want to miss your surprise.
He smiled:Will wait for you.Bye.
She smiled:Bye.

The next day Maan went towards Sameera hiding the red rose and strawberry.
M:Sameera...
Sameera's face was dull.
S:Maan...why did Geet leave the college suddenly?
Maan was shocked:What?
S:Only a month was left for the college to close.Then why?
M:Geet left the college?She did'nt tell me.My God!I have to stop her from going.She must be in the railway station i guess.I hope so.
His red rose and strawberry fell down from his hand while he rushed to the railway station in a hurry.Sameera saw it.He took the red rose and strawberry from the floor.
S:So this was Maan's surprise.He was going to propose me.But he left everything knowing that Geet was leaving him forever.
She became upset.

Maan reached the railway station.
His eyes searched for Geet with hope.

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Me 1st again  🥳

  Jasmine   🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...what did this Maan do in his drunken state 😲...he doesn't even remember it and talks about Sameera 😡...poor Geet...a sad situation for any girl...now she is pregnant and Maan is all ready with strawberries and roses to propose to Sam 😕...now that she is leaving hope he realises his true feeling and is able to stop her...waiting to see what happens next..loved the pics u used ...plz continue...TC 😊
                         

Edited by --Ratna-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
OMG geet is pregenant
hope he will be able to stop her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice update 
feels bad for geet 
hope maan catches geet in time 

thanks for pm 

bye 

take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
oh wow dream sequence was awesome
poor geet hrtbroken...
hope he understands his true luv soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Awesome update👏
Liked geet dream sequence⭐️
Poor geet ..heart broken😭😭
Omg..Geet is pregnant😲
Hope maan will realize his true feeling for geet
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome part yaar..
totally love it..
Continue soon..
OMG Geet is pregnant
Hope Maan find her n accept her..
Update soon please..
And Thnx for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Oh no feel so sorry for poor Geet 😭

Continue dear 😊
Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago