Strawberry and Red rose-Epilogue

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Pt:Pg1
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Pt3:Pg16
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Pt5:Pg34
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Strawberry and Red rose Part 1 
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I'm writing a Maaneet ss after a long time.so plz giv me long comments.Those who want Maaneet version of KKHH can enjoy it.Bcz tho it's not d Maaneet version of KKHH it's abt friends who fall in luv.
 
 
 
Maan saw Geet murmering and entering the college building.
M:Hey Geet...you look so angry.
G:That Maithili...and her stupid friends teased me Maan.
M:How?What did they say?
She made a baby face which made Maan giggle.
G:She called me behenji...
Maan burst into laughter:The whole college including me calls me behenji.You are used to hearing it akways.Still you are getting hurt?
G:Maan...you are my best friend.If you tease me it's ok for me.I don't get hurt at all.But if someone else teases me i get hurt.
Maan smiled pulling her red cheeks.
Suddenly his eyes struck the stylish hot girl Sameera who passed by.
M:Wow!Sameera is so hot.
Geet became jealous.
She knew Maan's secret crush on Sameera.
G:Maan...you are always after Sameera.
M:That is because i love her.
Geet got hurt.
G:Maan...it's not love.What you have for Sameera is only crush.An attraction towards a beautiful girl.
M:What nonsense!How can you say that?
G:I am your friend and i can read your mind.
Sameera turned back and smiled at him.She winked her eye at him.
Geet was irritated.
Maan was falttered.He was on cloud nine.
She walked away.
M:Geet...Sameera also loves me.
Geet was becoming insecure.
M:Geet...my wish is to marry the most modern...stylish girl of this college.Sameera.Once i will propose her giving strawberry and red rose.
Geet felt sad.She thought:Maan...propose me with strawberry and red rose.Or let me be your strawberry and red rose.
Suddenly Geet thoughtLMaan wants a modern girl.I will wear a modern dress and impress Maan.

Geet wore pant and a white shirt.
G:Maan will be impressed.
She rushed to the college.Everybody was surprised to see Geet.Slowly they laughed.
Maan and Sameera also burst into laughter.

M:What was the need for this?
Maithili:Behenji can never change.
Geet was really hurt.
Maan got angry and shouted at Maithili:Stop it Maithili.Don't dare to insult my best friend Geet.
Geet got some relief when Maan supported her.
Sameera:If you want i can groom you.So that you can look modern and stylish.
M:No need Sameera.
He looked at Geet holding her hand:Geet...you are beautiful in the way you are.You don't need to change.

Geet blushed.

S:By the way...today is my birthday.
M:Wow!Happy birthday...
G:Happy birthday Sameera.
S:Thanks a lot.But you both have to come to my beach house in the afternoon for the party.
M:Sure.
Sameera looked at Maan deeply:I will be waiting.

Maan made Geet wore a hot beach dress forcefully.
G:Maan...i feel shy.
M:You can't cover your whole body with duppatta and go to the beach.Anyways you look hot.My grooming worked out.
G:Really?
M:Yes.
Geet became very happy.
They went for the party.Everybody was stunned to see Geet in a hot outfit.
Geet became overconscious about her dressing when others started staring at her.
Maan whispered:Geet...relax...
Geet took a deep breath to relax.
S:You look really stylish Geet.
G:Thank you Sameera.
Geet looked at Maithili.Maithili was jealous of Geet's looks.Geet gave her a victorious smile leaving her irritated.
Maan gave a orchid bouquet to Sameera with Geet:Many mny happy returns of the day.
S:Thank you.Lovely.I love orchids.
Maan and Sameera smiled at each other.
Maan took a guitar and sang for Sameera:
Chand Sitare, Phool Aur Khushboo
Chand Sitare, Phool Aur Khushboo
Ye To Saare Purane Hain
Taza Taza Kali Khili Hai
Hum Uske Deewane Hain...(Kaho na pyar hai).
Seeing Maan and Sameera sharing eye lock Geet became insecure.
Maan got drunk at the party.After the party Maan took Geet to the proper beach to have fun in the water.He splashed water over her.
G:Maan...you are not in your senses.You are drunk.
M:Come on Geet...
He pulled her towards him.
Her heart beat fast:Mahi...mahi...
They sat on the rock.Geet held his hand happily.They both were cheerful with each other.

G:I loved this place sao much.Really enjoyed a lot with you Maan.
M:Geet...i want to eat strawberry..
G:Maan...here there is no strawberry.
M:You are lying.I can see strawberry.I am going to taste it now.You know i can die for strawberry.I love it.I'm crazy for strawberry.
He tasted strawberry without realizing that what he tasted was not actually strawberry,but Geet's sweet lips.Geet could'nt resist as it was her Maan.He tasted strawberry more and more making Geet his in every way.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jasmine  πŸ€—...hi dear...glad u started a Maaneet SS...thank u for the awesome update and PM...Geet is such a sweet and simple girl...felt bad when people teased her...Maan is thinking he is in love with Sameera...then why did he stop her from helping Geet change her appearance...why did he do it himself...hope he realises what he feels is just attraction and what Geet feels for him is love...loved the beach and strawberry kiss scene ...plz continue...TC πŸ˜Š


     
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo for new FF
Nice start
Cont soon
T4pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrates for this new SS
 
loved it a lot...
 
specially maaneet's frndship...i feel sameera wud be nice in this ss...
 
wow they kissed...but i am kind of confuse...will maan remember their kiss the next morning...feeling bad for geet if he dosen't...and continuous hitting on sameera...
 
looking forward for this story...
 
continue soon...
 
love ya
varsha😊
Edited by mahimaneet - 11 years ago
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Very nice and cute SS πŸ˜Š

Loved the beginning πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start..
Maan claims geet as his friend but he failed to c pain in her eyes..
when sam was ready to help her in grooming maan denied it..
and he himself made her change..y?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for new threadπŸ‘
Nice startπŸ‘
Continue soon
eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...
loved it...
do continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its awesome dear thanx 4 pm  begning is very good πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing ... i luvd it ... haaaye maneeettt thnx fr the pms yar do continue sooon...