MG ~( DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN) new thread pg 144

HEY GUYS...

i have wrote a little piece...

please do have a look...

title even i doesnot know...suggestions would be highly great...

so plzzz  let me know about this...

here it is

                                                        PROLOGUE

Why did you'''''.

Why ''.(she screamed on him'')

Was it my mistake that you did this to me'''.speak up''..

I am not that old innocent geet now''.i have grown up now''..grown up due to your perfidy''.

Why 'why you left me , am I that bad that all the people leave me''..it doesn't hurt '.when they did it but it hurted me'..my soul died on the day when you betrayed me''.you broke my trust MR KHURANA''.i trust you'.i  blindly believed you'..but you just broke it into pieces ''..broken pieces maan'.that can never be mend now''.

I know it was my mistake not to tell you that how much I love you ', how much I longded for you''.you know I have craved for your one glimpse day and night''in these three years''.but now I realize it was not coz of love that once I had it was and is pure hatred'', disgust that I feel''

I just can't forget  you ''and nor I can forgive you''.i will not

Not in this life time''

I know I am being mean because you deserve greater detestion maan'''.

You deserve my baby's hatred maan''you donot even deserve to see her face'..

She is only mine''.do you understand this MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA''..i hate you and I will never let even your shadow come near my diya''just keep away from her'..just go away from our lives maan''leave us''don't even dare to come near my diya''..

guys plzzz tell me if u want me to continue it

Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago

                                                  



PART 1   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57806445

PART 2   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=14

PART 3   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58870089

PART 4       https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59307876

PART 5 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=40          

PART 6  

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=48

PART 7  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60880834

PART 8    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61364969

PART 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=74

PART 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=81

PART 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62707273

PART 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=101

PART 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=112

PART 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=121

PART 15  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2994491?pn=133

THREAD 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64055401

THREAD 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72781734

Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago

Interesting do continue soon dear...👍🏼

conagrts on ur new FF dear...

Originally posted by: geetsweet

conagrts on ur new FF dear...

continue soon...

will be waitng

thanks...
but i don't knw that is it a ff or ss

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

Interesting do continue soon dear...👍🏼

thank you...😊

hey plz cont. it.. its interesting

awesome start

superb amazing
and title can be saathiya or bewafa

interesting, continue soon