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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awww how sweet khushi baby is😳... how can mehta😡 forget maan is maan
hay even i hate ice creams am i a bhoot😳 ???
never mind !!!!
awsum update mariam!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
AWESOME DI...um seriously luking forward 2 it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome part dear...
loved kushi's talks nt to forget also her revenge...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Hi thanks 4 da pm fab update! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awww i loved it...kushi is just like her dad nd mom...do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
aww too cute! Khushi is a fusion of Maan and Geet 😆 LOVED it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
lovely SS...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
superb parts!
continue soon!
pls pm me next time!
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Part 4

Maan and khushi were returning home.

Khushi: daddy, I was so scared. Pata hai he didn't even give me my burger. Khushi made a baby face.

Maan stopped the car infront of a restaurant and took khushi with her.

Maan ordered all the favourites of khushi .

Khushi: daddy I will eat this at home with all of you, I know mumma definitely didn't eat anything, and if mumma didn't eat how will u eat.

Maan smiled at her baby doll and her concern.

Maan and khushi arrived at home.

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In khushi room.

Geet was sitting in a corner and crying, dadi was sitting there telling geet to calm down.

Geet: dadi abhi tak wo wapis kyon nahin aye?

Dadi: geet bete they will come don't worry.

Geet: khushi, maan I miss u both loads come soon.

Khushi: arey mumma app bohat senti ho.

Geet saw khushi standing holiding her dad's finger. Geet ran and hugged khushi and began crying. Geet kissed khushi all over her face and was not willing to let go of her. Khushi returned her mother's love with same passion. Dadi came and hugged khushi. Meanwhile maan hugged geet.

Geet: maan thank you.

Maan: pagal what are u saying? Yeh to meri responsibility thi na.

Khushi: I am hungry. Dadi take khushi with her and went downstairs leaving manneet alone. Maan saw that geet is still sad over the incident that took place almost destroying their lives.

Maan: geet I was thinking that I should get myself kidnapped.

Geet: what? What are u saying maan?

Maan: aur nahin to kya geet, if I get kidnapped u will hug and kiss me the same way u did with khushi. hayeee…

Geet smiled hearing what maan said.

Geet: maan forget it, tum to aisa keh rahe ho jaise I never hug or kiss you.

Maan: kab?

Geet; maan, stop it.

Maan: waise geet imagine if I get kidnapped..

Geet: maaan…

Geet run behind maan.

Maan: arey geet I was joking na jaan.

Maneet went downstairs happily.

Once again khurana mansion was full of laughter.

Although everything was alright, maan was not at peace. He wanted to punish Mehta for whatever he did.

Maan thought of something and excuse himself from the dinner. As he was going upstairs he saw his beautiful family happy, and enjoying themselves. He prayed that god always protect their happiness.

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Maan in khurana construction.

Maan: adi fix my meeting with mr Mehta.

Adi: yes sir.

Meeting time.

Maan: mr Mehta if I want I can destroy everything related to you, but before that I wanted to ask, as far as I know u never mix business with personal life, so why u kidnapped my daughter?

Maan: MR Mehta, thanks god that nothing happened to my daughter, otherwise u will not have saw today's sun along with your family.

Mr Mehta: hold on a second. That's true that I wanted the contract but that's definetly wrong that I kidnapped your daughter, I also have daughters and I care about them I will never even think about your family. Apart from that I know your power and I will never try to do that.

Maan: mr Mehta don't try to fool me. your plan failed that's why you making this all up.

Mr Mehta: maan I have proof that I was not involved in all this.

Maan: o really? And what is that?

Mr Mehta: I was not here from past week, I was in Europe for the contract of my new hotel.

You can check details. As maan checked the details, it was clear that mr Mehta was not involved in it.

Maan: I am sorry.

Mr Mehta: its okay maan, if I am at your place, I would have done the same thing.

Maan: if it wasn't Mehta then who did it.

Maan phone rang.

Geet: maan kahan ho app? Mujhe aur khushi ko roshni ke ghar jana hai.

Maan: o I forgot.

Geet: what u forgot? Maan how could you?

Maan: geet I will be there in 20 minutes.

Geet: ok maan bye

Maan: bye.

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Maan, geet, and khushi arrived at roshni house.

Geet: roshini what was soo important that u call all of us here?

Roshni : arey yaar wait kar.

Jey: maan there is surprise for you too.

Jey and roshni together: ok guys come out.

Maan and geet turned around and geet almost screamed.

Geet: OMG nisha.

Maan: Rahul.

( nisha and Rahul maneet college friends as mention in part 1).

All of them hugged nisha and Rahul. After so many years the college gang was back together. All the old memories came back.

All were having time of their lives.

Rahul: waise wow maan and geet u guys are fast.

Maan: what u mean?

Rahul: arey yaar shaddi bhi hum sab se pehli ki, and now proud parents of khushi.wah .

Geet blushed while maan looked proud.

Nisha: yeah not fair, mujhe bhi shaddi karni hai.

Rahul: I am ready.

Nisha: shut up, tum se to kabhi bhi nahin.

Rahul: and why?

Nisha: shakal dekhi hai apni?

Rahul: haan bohat baar. Handsome hoon.

Nisha: hahahaha in your dreams.

And the fight continues.

Nisha: ok guys I have to tell u all something.

All: what?

Nisha: actually my cousin is coming, from London.

Mom told me that I have to take care of everything, where he will live and all. And I am soo confuse, help me.

Jey: for how many days he is coming here?

Nisha: maybe two weeks, not sure.

Rahul: well he cannot stay with me, nisha aisi hai to uska cousin kaisa hoga. Gosh I don't want to die please.

Nisha: shut up Rahul I am serious.

Maan: well he can stay with us, I mean along with Rahul and you.

Geet also agrees.

Geet: yeah that's right. Waise bhi maan have his guest house next to khurana mansion he can stay there with Rahul, and nisha u can stay with us in mansion.

Nisha: ok then done, wow geet I cant wait. I have a lot to talk with you.

Roshni: heyy not fair, u all will stay together. Well I am also moving in. maan u better forget geet for some days as she is going to stay with nisha and me.

Gee smirked and maan made baby face.

Rahul and jey came to rescue maan. Ohooo only u guys are not friends ok. Well if u both will stay with geet, me and Rahul will stay with maan. Geet tu bhi bhool ja. This time it was maan who smirked and geet made baby face.

Maan: all done then. Wow I cant wait after so many years we all gonna be together.

All of them were really happy.

Maneet told everything to dadi.

Dadi: omg nisha and Rahul are here and u all are going to live together. Wow cant wait.

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Next day.

Girls came on separate car while boys also on separate car.

Maneet were standing at door to welcome their friends.

Boys: rehne ayi ho yah is ghar par kabza karne. Are u planning to stay here for rest of your life?

Girls: and what make u think like that?

Boys: look at your bags. Looks like u have put everything in your hose in these bags.

Girls: don't make your mind work that is already of no use. Why trouble your brain when we all know there is nothing in there.

Girls high fived eachother.

Maan came there.

Maan: well atleast we have BRAINS.

Geet: hawww…

Geet: well we are better than u in any work.

And they all kept fighting until dadi came.

Dadi: stoooppp.

All: dadiii

And they all hugged dadi at the same time and went inside with here.

Maan: geet if they stayed here for long I am sure hamari divorce hojaye gi rey.

Geet: tell me about it maan, abhi to aye hain yeh devils and we are already fighting.

Maan and geet laughed.

Maan: geet all is same as our college days. Omg we were totally devils. Remember 3 teachers got fired because of all of us. Omg we were so bad.

Geet: omg yeah maan.

Maneet also went inside.

There was laughter and happiness all over in the khurana mansion.

Precap: nisha's cousin arrived.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVLEY IT ...UPDATE DERA ...LOVE IT LOT ... AWSOME FAB ONE THANK GOD KHUSHI IS BACK ... LOVE HER VERY MUCH ...BEST ONE ...SHE IS JAAN OF HOUSE ...
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