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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
SUBERB UPDATE.VERY VERY VERY NICE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hay dear tat was great commence...
cute family moment between manan geet and khushi !!!!!
loved it ...
hmm wats up with sameera!!!!!
she must have done sumthing to khushi ???
becjar nakul ...
aur haan sharif bacha(mariam)🤣 ...great update!!!
awsum do conti soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
jan love it ,,
how amazing yar !!
u r just fab ,,no words ,,
kool hai ji
meri chamak challo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
i m sure dis is done by dat stupid chipku sameera ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
nice job jaani keep it up:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I loved this khushi, hope she is fine. continue soon as the precap sounds interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc update...
maan u drama king stop it now. and waise u ghande itni zoor se marne ki kya zarorat thi. Uff u know how much its hurting. Geet touched her cheek, and made a baby face. 🤣
Luvd dis part...Plz continue soon...Arghhh Sameera...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
yaaar jaldi update karo na ..
waiting for the next part..
cant wait plz...
jaldiii ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Maan: geet get up, geet ankhen kholo. Maan picked geet in her arms and took her to bedroom.

Maan: dadi u take care of geet, I just come back.

Maan looked at geet and left from there.

***************

Maan came downstairs and checked the number and called it there.

Guy: hello!

Maan: hello!!!

Guy: oh mr maan, looks like geet couldn't take the shock.

Maan: shut up..dont take my wife name, and what u said to her?

Guy: ohh nothing much just I have ur daughter..

Maan: you bast***..leave my daughter alone. I wil kill u with my bare hands and..

Guy: mr maan: if u want ur daughter alive, u better sign the contract paper with mr mehta.

Now maan understood everything. Mr Mehta was one of the most authoritive person after maan in business world.

As maan got the deal, mr Mehta wanted, they wanted to make a contract but maan refused. So they in revenge got the weakness of maan to get what they wanted. Nothing was more important then his daughter to maan.

Maan: fine, you will get the contract papers, as it is legal matter it will take some time.

Guy: ok until u don't give us papers we have your daughter, and make sure u don't involve no police in it, as it will just harm ur daughter. They disconnected the call. Maan was not sure but he had a plan.

He went up to check on geet, she was crying bitterly. Maan asked dadi to leave them for a moment. Dadi left from there.

Maan asked geet to calm down instead geet started to cry loud.

Geet: maan I want my baby back. Maan mujhe mera baby la do.

Plz maan do something plz.

Maan: geet khushi ko kuch nahin hoga. Nothing will happen to her, I promise jaan before the new day starts khushi will be here with us. U trust me na jaan?

Geet: more than my life.

Maan: love u geet. Ok I have to go, u don't worry, khushi will be back.

Geet: jaldi ayega maan, kyonki geet apni khushi aur maan ke bina nahin reh sakti. Geet hugged maan, and maan left from there.

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At kidnapper's place.

Khushi: oyeee, iniots ( idiots)

Guy 1: what?

Khushi: I don't like this place, its ewww.

Guy 1: keep quiet, otherwise I will lock u here.

Khushi: u are not good.

Guy 1: chup bethi rahoo.

Khushi: nobody talks to khushi like that, u got me. Talk to me one more time like that, then'

Guy 1: then WHAT?

Khushi: then I will tell ur mom to stop giving u ice cream. ( to khushi this was the most horrible punishment).

Guy 1: I don't like ice cream.

Khushi: OMGGG are u bhoot?

Guy 1: nooo

Khushi: how can u hate ice cream? Its yummy, try that sometime. You can come to my house promise I will give u my chocolate ice cream..

Guy 1 smiled. ( afterall our khushi is cute na yaroo)

Khushi: can I say something?

Guy 1: u wont keep quiet still so go ahead.

Khushi: I wont give u my ice cream, bring your own.

I wanna go to my mumma and daddy. Can I go plz?

Guy 1: no

Khushi: plzzz plzz plzz

Guy 1: no stay quiet.

Khushi: I am hugry. Guy passes her a plater with some sweets and snacks.

Khushi: I don't like that. I want to eat burger.

Guy 1: well u aint getting that so eat this.

Khushi: no, how dare u refuse me? Khushi started screaming.

Guy finally got irritated and slapped khushi.

Khushi got really scared and sat down and started crying.

Khushi: I will tell my daddy, then he will beat u.

Guy left from there. Khushi started crying

I want my teddu, mumma I miss you, daddy app kab aao ge.

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Maan contacted all the higher detective agencies, as it was the matter of his daughter he didn't want to take any risks.

Maan: do whatever u want, don't care about money, I just want my daughter safe and sound.

(Commissioner= com)

Com: don't worry maan, ur daughter will be fine.

As it was the matter of maan singh khurana daughter,

Mehta still didn't see the power of MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

It didn't take maan and the agencies more than an hour to find the locations, in no time maan was there. They captured the kidnapper and maan went in the room. His heart broke into million pieces seeing his princess sitting in corner all scared and crying, rage filled his heart for those responsible for khushi's tears.

Maan: princess.

Khushi looked up and ran to her daddy and hugged maan.

Daddy I missed u. aap late kyon aye. Mujhe ghar jana hai.

She cried. Mujhe mumma pass jana hai.

Maan: haan princess we are going home. Stop crying baby. Shh daddy is here.

As maan took khushi out she saw the guy..

Khushi: daddy he slapped me here. Khushi show maan her cheek. Maan went up to guy and beat him up. The police have to held him back from killing that guy.

Com: relax maan. Take khushi home now.

Maan: hmm

Khushi: daddy I wanna do something.

Maan: what princess?

Khushi walked up to the guy and kicked the guy and slaped him many times. Then she came back.

Khushi: lets go daddy, mumma is waiting.

Maan smiled at her daughter's anger.

Precap: khushi meeting geet😛

Precap 2: friends reunion.😉

I hope u guys liked it.

Do press the like button and comment.

Even if u didn't liked it do tell me.

Thank you soo much for reading it and giving it your time.

Edited by iampretty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
yay i am first😆
awh i love you jaani
thank you for not doing what u were gonna do😉
lmfao khushi is choo cute
love her talk with the kidnapper
ugh that kidnapper slapped princess😭
maan was gonna kill him
beautiful part jaani
loved the ending
thank you sooo much
love yaa
continue soon
mwah

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 12 years ago
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