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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
lol i loved this . i never thought of azfer and neelam togather but now i want to see qurbat soo bad.
aww i feel sorry for shala, poor girl horrible mother and now a rishta but now atleast she has zahid.
"tumhaarey jooton ka number aur kiya?
lol azzan.
update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: watevewriter

lol i loved this . i never thought of azfer and neelam togather but now i want to see qurbat soo bad.

aww i feel sorry for shala, poor girl horrible mother and now a rishta but now atleast she has zahid.
"tumhaarey jooton ka number aur kiya?
lol azzan.
update soon!


OMG a new AzNee fan added to our group!!!! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

OMG OMG OMG!!!! i'm soo happy!!!

thnx and yes Azzaan is funny he and tooba will bring a funny part in this story

thnx for reading it love you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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❀️ ❀️ Chapter # 2 πŸ’” πŸ’”

Okay chapter three added

Shahla laid crying on her bed it was 3:00 am and she still couldn't sleep every thought disturbed her his marriage in 2 weeks ,people comming to see her tommorrow everything bothered her

She cried as she said to herself loudly "kyun tum kuch nahhi karte?? kyun tum mera tamasha dekhte ho? kya tumhe nahin samjh aata kai main sirf tumse pyaar karti hoon...i only love you Zahid just you but you don't care damnit!!"

she sat up as she dried her tears "of course tumko kya khabar? tumharey liye toh main sirf bhaanji hoon na? kaash us din main ne nahi suni hoti naaani aur naana ki batain shayad phir aaj main itni takleef main na hoti"

she went to a window "aakhir dard kis ko nahi hoga ..." she smiled bitterly at this thought

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Zahid was standing at the terrace winds were blowing hard against his handsome face he closed his eyes and remembered a sweet moment of his past

**The 7 years old Zahid was walking happily as his father (in reality grand father) took his little hand in his and walked in the lobby to see the baby girlthat was just about a week old .Zahid was very curious as he had heard some one saying that baby Shahla was a princess he had heard a lot about princesses in stories but never seen one.
They walked in a door Zahid made his grand father leave his hand and ran to the baby carriage and looked at her he smiled and then ran back to his grandfather and tugged his pants and said

"papa yeh Princes hai na?" the little boy looked curiosly at his grandpa

"haan beta yeh Princess hai" came his grandpa's reply

the little buy tugged at his grandpa's pants again while saying "YEH MERI PRINCESS HAI NA?"

his grandpa smiled and replied "haan Zahid beta yeh tumhaari princess hai"

"ye sirf meri princess hai???"

"haan beta ye sirf tumhaari princess hai"

his grand father took the baby girl in his arms and sat at a couch so Zahid could see her too while Zahid looked happily at the baby girl and to every one's least expectation he bent and kissed the baby girl's soft cheeks

"awww" was the voice in his back ground but he didn't hear anything he was looking at his princess*****

Zahid openned his eyes as he repeated the same words 18 years later "Woh sirf meri princess hai"and smiled while twinkling a tear or two in his eyes

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Next mrning Azaan was driving to airport

"uff ye Zahid bhi na ..bhai baan kar phuss gaya ab uss churail ki bhootni cousin ko recieve karo"

he arrived there the driver was holding up a sign which had her name on it

the flight landed as people stepped out an old aunty about 50 who was fat and dark was comming his way

Azaan said to himself "kya yeh toh nahi...?? ho sakti hai after all uss Haniya churail ki cousin jo hai"

but the aunty went other way and behing her came a beautiful girl he felt like starring at her for a long time he kept doing it untill she stood in front of him

"Hi i'm Tooba"

"JEE!!!!" Azaan yelled he couldn't believe that bhootni turned out so pretty

"jee koi problem hai??" she said

"jee nahi...sorry...main..." she cutt him off and said

"aap Zahid jiju hain na?"

"jee ...nahi..."

again he was cut off "arey yahan kiyun kharrey hain hum Jiju chaliye chaltey hain"

she got in car quick

leaving Azaan to say "chalo aik baat pe toh apni cousin pe gaayi hai...kisi ki nahi sunti!!!"
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The people came inside and were seated they were all chatting untill Zahid came in as Anila quickly introduced him

"Yeh Zahid hai mera chota bhai aur yeh log Shahla ko dekhne aayen hain"

the lady said "yaani kai humaari bahu key chotey mamoo?"

Zahid's eyes looked up as he painfully replied "jee main hi hoon"

Shahla was brought in she looked gorgeous and Zahid couldn't help but looking at her .He could see in the eyes of the guy he admired Shahla and would defintely want to be married to her.He sighed sadly but tried his best to smile for the sake of her hapiness

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Tooba talked and talked and talked while Azaan just watched her boy would he give anything right now for some cotton buds so that he doesn't have to hear anything

"Jiju...ice cream!!!...c'mon main aap se pehli baar mili hoon ice cream nahi khilaayengay?"

he just nodded as they went inside

"kaun sa flavour lo gi?"

"Chocolate...nahi nahi...vanilla...nahi chocolate...nahi vanilla...nahi chocolate...nahi nahi"

Azaan eyes popped out and he immediately said to the waiter "1 scoop chocolate ka aur ek vanilla ka aur meray liye kuch bhi"


"haan ye theek rahey ga thnx Jiju"

"main Zahid..."

he was cut off again as she began her tales again and told him everything from her first teddy bear to what she bought to wear for Zahid's wedding

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They were talking all were cheerful except for Zahid and Shahla who were completely silent .Suddenly Naeem entered with Abdaa and then Naeem fainted right there

"NAEEM BHAI" screamed Shahla

"oh Crap!!!" Zahid ran to him while Abid who was Naeeem's best friend took him away

"Zahid main usko le jaaraha hoon tum baaqi sub ka khayal rakho"

"theek hai bhai"

"nahi huim sab saath chalay gay" declared his grandmother

"haan behtar yeh hi hoga" said his grand pa

"main bhi saath chaloon gi Abid" said the poor Abda

"theek hai hum sab chaltay hain saath Zahid Shahla ka khayaal rakhna" advised Anila

"jee bajiya" replied the worried Zahid


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Shahla kept crying and Zahid comforted her it hasd been an hour but no news came no phone call at all Zahid was worried now

Zahid's phone rang

"hello"

"haan Zahid main hoon Abid"

"kya hua bhai Naeem bhai kaise hain?"

"kuch nahi Zahid usko ek minor heart attack hua hai"

"KYA????"
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
once again an awsome chapter, i loved tooba, lol jiju. aww i hope zahid and shahla end up togather reallu quick they both love each other so why not confess it.
thanx for thewonderful chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all so sorry mew...for such delay 😳 Yaar was very buzy wid a college event .. . next time will come on time paka 😳 once again an awesome update... 😊
Shehla and Zahid are such poor souls...felt really bad for both of them...specially zahid remembering his childhood ...the way he said yeh bas meri princess hai...made me all sad
is it possible you can bring these two together...pls...pls...pls 😳
just cant see them parted 😭
OMG naeem got a heart attack 😲
and tooba is one funny girl ...so true just like her cousin even she doesnt care to listenπŸ˜†
Pls do continue soon...waiting for the next part...😊
and pls add some zahid shehla moments together 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
no no dear its okay don't worry

well they will get together or not...they will but at end when Zahid will divorce Haniya

more moments will be added for sure paka



thank you sooo veryyy much for reading

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Posted: 13 years ago
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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Very Nice... Just read Part I... Sorry, couldn't get time for next part but I surely will... I don't watch this drama but I am really liking your FF. Can't you pair Zahid and Shela??? Please... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww thank you soo very much for reading dear luv you!!!!!!!!!
and yes dear they are paired together but its a bit of sad story but they wil be together at end!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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❀️ ❀️ ❀️ Chapter # 3 πŸ’” πŸ’” πŸ’”


Okay on request of my darling bestie Waru who wanted more ShaHid (Shahla and Zahid ) scenes so here is whole chapter just for you Waru!!!

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"Kya hua Zahid maamoo?" asked the frightened Shahla

"kuch nahhi bus ek minor heart attack hai...koi fikar ki baat nahi he is okay" replied Zahid

"chalo Khuda ka shukar hai"

"tum theek ho na Shahla.."

"bilkul theek hoon mamoo"

"bas ziyada parshaan na hona"

"...jee"

the sound of a jingle could be heard

"arrey mamoo Igloo wala hai!!!" squealed Shahla in excitement

"haan toh...ice cream khaani hai kya??"

she nodded her head

"acha baba dilaata hoon strawberry na?"

"jee"!!

soon Zahid brought two cones a strawberry one for her and chocolate one for himself

"acha Shahla jaldi se kha lo iss se pehle baqi sub aayen bura lagey ga"

"theek hai"

both started eating happily.Shahla who had finished hers thought of mischeif and snatched Zahid's cone and started to eat it

"Shahla ye kya badtameezi hai?"

"arrey mammo chaley mujhe pakrey aur ice cream lejaayen"

"nahi Shahla"

"kya hua mamoo mujhe nahi pakarsaktay kya? am i too fast for you??"

Zahid got up and ran after the fast Shahla he knew she was very fast

"Shahla ahista gir mat jaana"

"main nahi giroon gi"

she kept running and stoping for few seconds just to bother him more

they were running up the stairs when Zahid finally grabbed her by waist as he did that both fell and tumbled down the stairs Zahid who tried his very best to avoid any injuries on his Shahla tried to cover her fully botth kept tumbling stairs and stopped at the bottom

"Shahla tium theek ho"

"haan main sahi hoon"

both suddenly felt uncomfortable at the postion they were in Shahla on top of him and her burnette hair falling all over Zahid's handsome face.He couldn't help but stare at her beauty her soft and silky burnette hair,beautiful black eyes,her plump pink lips with the cutest mole a little bit above it and her fair complexion...the last time he looked at her like this was when he first fell in love with her when he saved her from drowning

Shahla couldn't help but blush at the way he was looking at her as he moved away a strand of hair from her face she blushed tomato red as she stared at his handsome face... his soft black hair ,his strong yet gentle black eyes,his lips and his handsome features

suddenly they heard the door being opened Shahla quickly got off from him and ot up and ran to her room blushing and laughing to herself quietly as ZAhid sat at the stairs with a smile fixed on his lips

Shahla on reaching her room danced in glee she didn't care about the bruises she got she was so happy being so close to him was like a dream wow would she do anything to be in his arms again to feel the same

Zahid kept siting there untill his grand pa came to him in shock

"Zahid beta kya hua?"

"kuch nahi abu"

"tum itna smile kyun kar rahe ho?"

"nahi nahi to..."

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Shahla was too happy tonight even more than words could say she difted off to a wonderful remembrance

" The five years old Shahla was playing happily in park while the 12 years old Zahid was playing with his friends .A boy aboout Zahid's age took Shahla's plastic ball away .She started crying the angry Zahid came and took the ball back

"meri Princess ko tang mat karo"

"tum kaun hotay ho mujhe kehnay waaley?"

both the twelve year old started fighting

untill Zahid won the ball back and took it to Shahla smiling proudly "

Shahla blushed at the remembrance
"Zahid uss din tum ne kitni pitaayi khai meri wajha se bohot chotey lagi par tum ne meri ball wapis laayi"she started talking to herself

"I love you Zahid" she squealed and giggled like a 16 year old as she kissed a photo of him that was kept in her drawer

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did you guys like it? sorry if it was small dedicated to Warda

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Edited by MewPrincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
OMG...you dedicated this part to me ...you are the most wonderful person i met on IF πŸ€—
so sorry yaar...i could not log in for the last couple of days 😭
i loved it loved it loved it a lot 😊
Shehla is just like a kid...and i love the way zahid pampers her😳
so wish they get together soon 😊
you know i got a chance to watch an episode of this serial today...and i could easily affiliate with it...thanks to your ff😊
i have just one question ...does zahid knows that shaehla is awrae of the fact that zahid is not her mamo??
pls update soon...and give us a long update next time😳
sorry once again for teh delay 😳
love you πŸ€—
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