wow nice start yaar //but it was short..waiting for the next one
Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
superb update
Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Hey...awesome work...loved it...
Originally posted by: goldenball
Nice one...
amazing
wow nice start yaar //but it was short..waiting for the next one
Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
superb update
Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Hey...awesome work...loved it...
Originally posted by: goldenball
Nice one...
amazing
Originally posted by: mechantefille
OMGoodnesss...Jazz- why so short... but yeah I loved it...it almost sounds like poetry...=)
this is cheating. what a short update.
interesting do continue
Read bot d parts just now...interesting...can u pls add me to ur pm list??
Originally posted by: deejayaqueel
Good work!!
THIS... is the MSK i fell in love with... and THIS was the MSK who was different from the other 'boss-secy' romance bosses!! 😍😍
When is the next one??? 😳😳
Originally posted by: sangi1588
Wow... Loved the update Jazz...it was so perfect..the characterization of both the characters...Love your style sakhi 😉
Originally posted by: sneha0504
loved their collide and fall meet... how many ever times I read or see them meet like this.. it still gives me the goosebumps.. lovely update!!!!!!
Originally posted by: LuvScooby
Jazzy...your writing is pure poetry😳 It flows so wonderfully.
I just love that he finds solace in her eyes, they are indeed his oasis.
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