Chapter 20
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Chapter 20
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Chapter 21
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Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan
OMG! Thank you for the amazing double update!!!! I've read it and I kind of hate you for ending it right before the date >.> but if you make the next part super sweet, you'll be forgiven! I shall leave you a detailed comment later, for now, I'm running late for my class (all your fault...i kind of sat down to read the updates instead of leaving my house on time!)
I'll edit the comment later.Thanks!!Love ya!
Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan
OMG! Thank you for the amazing double update!!!! I've read it and I kind of hate you for ending it right before the date >.> but if you make the next part super sweet, you'll be forgiven! I shall leave you a detailed comment later, for now, I'm running late for my class (all your fault...i kind of sat down to read the updates instead of leaving my house on time!)I'll edit the comment later.Thanks!!*edited!*alright so I read it again.. :D I absolutely loveddd the Armaan-Avi balcony scene! I kind of wanted to kill Sonia for ruining their moment but its okay...you better have some nice Armaan-aAvi parts coming up missy...and no Sonia bothering them :PThe movie scene was sooo cute! I was going 'awww' in my head over and over again. holding her hand secretly under the blanket! eekkk..they're sooo adorable.and avi tied with Armaan for the race?😲😲 wow..i wasnt expecting that. I was thinking that Armaan would win the race and then she'd have to go on another date with him...since the dinner is already the first date. And I like how Avi's character is rooted. Not too forward minded but not too backward minded. she's got the nice balance between being modern and holding onto her cultural values. I love how most of the characters in this ff are happy-go-lucky. and I hope that Avi's brother doesnt create problems between her and Armaan.. >.>Alrighty then, Update soon missy! will be waiting for it!And I'd like to be on the PM list as well. Thank you!!😊Love ya!
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