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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
thnx rakhi didz.
sure
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
beautiful n amazing part..
armaan n avi were sooo cute...
brilliant jani...
simply marvelous..
thnx for the pm...
part 17
wow lovely part...
this is what i wanted between them for a long time...
finally they have confessed their love...
cont soon...
Originally posted by: Kasurbest
Alright...sry sry for being a lazy ass
Chapter 16 --- long and completely filled with fun udLoved the math to core...and the Raj Malini and Rahul scene was just colorful...splashes of life!the last scene was awesome... 2 MINUTES! hilarious the way ammy was trying to get the whole room clean, but the ending was really gracefulcant wait till the date now...😉finally the time comeswill be soon back with my comment on chap 17
Originally posted by: Kasurbest
Chapter 17 - - - love is in the air!
Rahul is damn hilarious!Avi and Ammy :) soo sweet. Armaan is just too cute :-*Ud soon
"Armaan kaha jaa raha hai?"
"Kahin bhi nahi mom. Main thodi der main aa jaunga."
Haha he is going nowhere, and still he will back in few...lol love it when kids reply to their parents with this sentence, clearly he is going somewhere! 😉
Surprise, Surprise...yet i will pretend i dont know what it is ;)
Catch up soon...Waiting to read something new and thrilling...
Originally posted by: Kasurbest
Alright so this time you wont have to wait.. yayyy!!!! guess m lucky today!chapter 17 - - - short yet a nice one thnxxloved Malini and Sonia, gee Sonia still argues her point like a teenager...haha NEEV! hahahahawell rest just got summerised with great flow of words... ----😳loved the ending, this one in particular"Armaan kaha jaa raha hai?"
"Kahin bhi nahi mom. Main thodi der main aa jaunga."
Haha he is going nowhere, and still he will back in few...lol love it when kids reply to their parents with this sentence, clearly he is going somewhere! 😉 haha, so true! I cant help but laugh when particular ppl said it in india while we visited 😆
Surprise, Surprise...yet i will pretend i dont know what it is ;) gud girl
Catch up soon...Waiting to read something new and thrilling... u're in luck. I was writing current part just today in school 😳
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