ff "Love Hamesha"pt30/pg141(Maameet)completed

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HI it is a short FF .... i just added a small scene after watching geet 16 September episode.as you all liked it i cont... 
Maaneet fan fiction: FF love hamesha  for new readers 
part 1 to 5 (small parts ) at page 4
part 6 at page 6
part 7 at page 10
Part 8 at page 14
Part9 at page 18
Part10 at page 25
Part11 at page 29
Part 12 at page 32
Part13 at page 38
Part 14 at page 45
part 15 at page 51
Part16 at page 57
Part 17 at page 64
Part 18at page 69
part 19 on page 76
Part 20 on page 83
Part 21 on page 89
part22 on page 94
Part23 on page102
part 24 at page107
part25 at page112
part26 at page117
part27at page 122
part 28 at page132
part 29 at page 139
part 30 at page 141
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Geet: i will go to out house she got up from bed
Maan: grab her hand" i will not eat you . can't you rest"
Geet: "maan chora mera haath muhje ko daard horaha ha"started crying
Maan: shouted stop crying i can't see tears in your eyes. heard foot step he let her free.
Dadi : back with Maan breakfast... beta eat this
Maan: rub his tummy as he is full. "dadi woh"
Geet: dadi i will eat this omelet ..she took it from her hand.
Dadi : again check her forehead to Maan"beta iss ko abhi bhi bokhar ha "
Maan: looked at her he regret how rude he is with her."dadi mein geet ko hospital la kar ja raha hoon"
Geet:" nahi mein theek ho"Maan: stared her in anger with finger ask her to remain quiet.
Geet : choke started coughing .dadi :rub her back
Maan became worried "why she is so imp for me?"to himself. "get up let me take you to hospital there you will have full checkup" offer his hand She hesitated but grab it as she didn't want to create scene in front of Dadi.she was feeling weak in her knees not able to walk .he picked her up in his arms Dadi :smiled "made for each other"
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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rinky70

naddiya plz continue


doing it keep checking dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute!!!
Would be waiting for more!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
damn good
why u stopped u shud hv continued
 
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT👍🏼👏SOOOOOO SWEET & CUTE👏
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in car
Geet: pehla aap meri baat suna then i will go to DR
Maan: hit the break car stop with a jerk but he but his arm in front of her. " chup aik dum "
Geet: held his arm . oh phir khoon nikle raha ha ( it is bleeding again) she grab his hand he try to remove it but her grab was tight this time" aagar aab ko meri parwa ha tou phir mujhe ko kyun rokta ha aap " (if you care for me why you stop me to take care of you) a tear drop at his palm . he closed his eyes. she wipe it with tissue paper." mein aik sharat per jao gai Dr ka paas aagar aap bhi bandage karwa ga"
Maan :nod ok he started car she still holding his hand

At hospital
Maan at reception
nurse : patient name.
Maan: looked at Geet who was standing at next to wall twisting her duppata. "Mrs Maan" he held his head..to himself "i have to help her out even i hate her"
Dr peon called "Mrs Maan"
Geet: looked at Maan . he didnot looked at her .he moved in room
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye naddi...keep it coming...wat next..bekaraar ho raha hai dil!
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DR: hi mr & mrs Maan .. may i help you?
Maan: yes she is having temperature looked at geet who was still standing Maan pull her hand to sit.
Dr: any other prob.
Maan: she is .. paused
Geet: no i am fine .. he has cut his hand see this she pull his hand & showed it to DR ... see how deep it is . it is bleeding since yesterday
DR: smiled as he was looking at Maan face who was feeling bit shy at her crazy act ( they were at gyne department) ."will you come with me Mrs Maan"
Maan: pagal ha yeh larki bilkul ...
Dr: back .. bit worried
Maan:"is she ok ?"
DR: bit angry ."mr you are not taking care of her. her bp is high plus she is very weak.she has to go for some more test"
Maan: was ready for that as he knew she is not at all taking care of herself. busy with office etc." you guide me i will take care of her"
Dr: is this your first child? looked at Maan.
Maan: yes i that is my first child
Geet enter shock what he said
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gulgulfam

great post. very nice scene.


added more
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab work.....totally loved it...
hope it sure goes that way...
and maan saying that the
child belong to him...
really nice
keep writng