Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47.. - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
nice and sweet dear 👏 👏 👏
cont fast im w8ing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
I loved ur FF yaar......
it's really very very nyc....
PM me too whn u update....
will be waiting 4 ur update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
really cute update dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
How sweet...good one......... pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
nic e part
pls do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
good start ...pls cont soon
Posted: 14 years ago
#17
thank you guys..
for all ur comments... i appreciate it.!!!
yeah sure...
i'l PM u as soon as the next part is updated..
i'l be updating the next part most probably by monday or tuesday,,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
itz a vry gud update yaar!
itz relly beautiful!! ...
do continuee...
Pm me also! wanna read d nxt part 2.!
Posted: 14 years ago
#19
hello guys..
me bak with another part of Tum Dena Saath Mera...
but before i begin with the next part... this part is seriously dedicated to two of my most beautiful and wonderful friends.. Manasi and Ankita... i have spent most of time here at IF chatting with these two.. so i think they should get sum credit for tolerating me.!!!!!
 
 
part 2
 
Naitik : uff.. kaha fas gya main...
In the dining hall...
 
Daddaji : arre bahu.. ke baat hai.?? munna kathe hai.?? so rha hai ke vo abhi tak... uthaya na tune use abhi tak.??
 
Akshara : nhi daddaji.. abhi utha kr hi aa rhi hu inhe.. bus 10 min. mein aate hi honge.. aapke liye main naashta paros du ya fir aap abhi sair par jaaenge inke saath.??
 
Daddaji : arre na.. na.. bahu.. aj koi sair vair par na jaunga.. aj to mhane munna se ek bahut zaruri bat krni hai.. kuch poochna hai usse (in an angry tone)
 
Gayitri : kya hua daddaji.?? munna ne koi galti ki hai kya.??
 
Daddaji : arre tu zyada sawal jawab na kr.. bahu... ja.. aur jaa kr dekh vo tayar hua ya nhi.. aur fatafat neeche le kar aa..
 
Akshara : ji daddaji.. bus abhi bulati hu inhe..
 
In Naksh room...
 
Akshara : naitik.. ye kya.. aap yaha khade hai.. n vaha pe aapka sab intezaar kr rhe hai...
 
Naitik : to main kya karu akshara.. dekhiye na.. mera track suit nhi mil rha hai.. ab main daddaji ke saath sair par kaise jaau.?? hey bhagwan... aj to pakka daddaji se dant padegi..
 
Akshara : aaj apko sair par nhi jana.. aur rhi bat daant ki.. vo to aapko padegi hi.. daddaji aaj thode gusse mein lag rhe the.. pta nhi kya baat hai..
 
Naitik : oh god.. kuch kaha kya unhone aapse akshara.??
 
Akshara : nhi.. lekin ab agar aap 5 min. mein neeche nhi pahunche to vo zarur mujhe dantege.. bolenge ki ek kam dia bahu ko.. aur usne vo bhi thik se nhi kia..
 
Naitik : arre.. aise kaise dantege vo meri pyari si biwi ko.?? main hu na aapko bachane ke lie..
 
Akshara : accha.. ab baatein bad mein kijiye.. aur jaldi tayar ho jaaiye..
 
Naitik : akshara.. mere button to aapko hi lagane hai na.. aap fir neeche jaa rhi hai.. fir upar aaengi mere bulane par.. aap to iss chakkar mein patli ho jaengi.. lekin gharwale sochenge ki unka beta koi kaam aaj kal bahu ke bina nhi krta.. naak kat jaaegi meri to..
 
Akshara : aap bhi na.. natak band kijiye.. (while buttoning his shirt) : aap ko pta hai kya.. aap na bahut cute lagte hai jab aap mujhse apne shirt ke button band krwate hai.. bilkul ek chote baby ki tarah.. jo jab skool jana shuru karta hai tab apni ma se button lagwata hai... gharwalon ne aapka naam kuch soch samajh ke hi rakha hai... MUNNA.!!
 
Naitik : ha.. ha.. uda lijiye mera mazak.. aur bacha hi kya hai.. kisi ko meri kadr hi nhi hai...
 
Akshara : agar aapka natak khatm hua to neeche chale.?? ya fir aaj dadaji ki daant khane ka man bana hi lia hai.??
 
 
Naitik : arre nhi.. chaliye..
 
In the dining hall..
 
Daddaji : aa gya munna.. ye koi wak hai kya uthne ka.??
 
Naitik : vo daddaji.. uth to main jaldi hi gya tha.. bus nhane abhi gya hu.. vo kya hai na.. isse pehle fone aa gya tha.. vo humari singapore wali party se.. bus unhi se baat cheet karne mein thodi der ho gyi...
 
Daddaji : vo sab to thik hai.. par munna.. humein tujhse ek shikayat hai............................
 
to be continued..
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next part will be coming up most probably by next monday...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Nice part dear....
Do cont soon..