Unknown Truth(AR) Pg 108 05/10 ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys ..me back with a new FF. Now that lucky is over and love not is going to be over in1- 2 parts and me done with my exam so i have some free time.

This concept came in my mind yesterday. So,I am just posting the preview of what the story is all about. About this fiction, this won't be a light hearted romantic * i have one to complete = P* but more on the intense side..😆

 

All her life she was told that she is an orphan. No one knew about her mom, dad or any other family. Even the orphanage where she is living knows nothing about her family background except that she was brought to this orphanage when she was about 11 month old. During her growing up years she used to feel sad watching other children play with their parents. Everyday people used to come to the orphanage to adopt kids but no one adopted her. As time passed she accepted this as her destiny that she is destined to be alone. There is no one to call her as their child, love her, tell her bedtime's stories, play with her and even get angry on her when she makes mistakes.  Still every day she prayed for just one wish to see her parent's once.

Now all of 23 she is starting a new journey. Although she never got the love of parents, it didn't stop her from achieving her goals. She always wanted to help other children who don't get the love of their parents and today is the first step in fulfilling this dream of her. Today is the first day of her job. She is about to leave the house when she receives a call from someone telling her that she is the daughter of Shashank Gupta ,one of the top businessman of the country. The man who is worshiped by millions of people, the idol of youngsters and the one who is going to be her new Boss.

 

So this is the preview of the new FF. Me continuing it or not depends on you all. If you liked the preview and want me to continue then please reply.. I'll be waiting to know your response.

 PS :  NO PM's for this... i'll start with the PM"s when posting first part..so if you want the pm do tell me.


Loads of love..

Mel..😳..      


INDEX

part1: page 2

part2: page 4

part3 (a): page 7 , continue (b) :  page 9

part4: page 12

part5: page  16

part6 (a) :  page 21, (b) page 26, (c) page 33

part7 : page 39, (b)  page 44, (c) page 50

Last part : Page 56

Surprise updates : Pages- 62, 70 , 78 , 84, 90, 97 , 108

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aarora thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
hey nice one..continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Dear!
How R U!
I wish u r gud
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woah dear
its really a nice one hats of to u i think its best onesound interestingits rocking oneplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm

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Nidha
Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
suzzane14 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
yup....do pm me...hehe....amazing concept and yeah introduce armaan soooon...!!! hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
HAI REALLY NICE CONCEPT.......... PLS CONT. SOON..... AMAZING CONCEPT.... DO ME PM... PLS.... I WILL COMMENT TO U R ALL PARTS ...............IF U PROMISE TO UPDATE DAILY........

LOVE
CHAHAT
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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
excellent concept
dont forget to pm me ok
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
hey
nice concept
coolio
plz add me to pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Hey thats a really nice concept.

Do add me in ur pm list.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Hey caramel
Its a gr8 intro....
loved it very much
cont soon
nruti
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
interesting ....
continue soon