DIL KA RISHTA- NAKSH FF (last part @ pg 106) - Page 3

2nd part was nice and cute.
u depicted their cute relationship in a nice way.
can't wait to read the next part.
loved ur dialogues

i rllllllly liked it yar.....

i really loved it yaar !!!!!!!naitik flirting with akshara...........
it was very cute.......plssss continue soon..........um waiting for the 3rd part.....

Both the parts was really good..
Continue soon...

 

 

 

    thnx shikha di 4 lovely siggy.luv u.

 

part 3:

its morning.the alarm rings.akshara gets up and closes d alarm.akshara was about 2 go when naitik woke and pulled her back.
akshara:naitik kya kar rahe hai aap chhodiye mujhe.mujhe nahne jana hai aur puja bhi karni hai aap chodiye mujhe.
naitik:nahi
akshara:nahi kyu? naitik dekhiye main late ho gayi to maa gussa ho jaegi.plz naitik.
naitik:kya akshara har waqt puja-path aur ghar ka kaam.mere liye to time hi nahi hai aapke pas.
akshara:naitik,ab ye 1 month to hum saath hi rehne waale hai tab koi nahi hoga par abhi mujhe jaane dijiye.aur ab aap bhi uth jaiye apko daddaji k saath walk par bhi jana hai.
naitik(suddenly gets up):kya aaj bhi walk nahi nahi kal packing karne ki thakawat abhi tak nahi utri .nahi main nahi jaunga.
akshara:thik hai main daddaji ko jaa kar bol deti hu phir aap jane aur daddji jaane.
she was about 2 go when naitik holds her hand and said:nahi  nahi daddaji ko mat boliye main jaata hu par 1 shart par.
akshara:shart! kaisi shart?
naitik:apko mujhe kuch dena hoga.
akshara:kya?
naitik:wahi jo aap bhul rahi hai.
akshara:main, main kya bhul rahi hu. jaldi bataiye na naitik mujhe late ho raha hai.
naitik:aap meri morning kiss dena bhul rahi hai.chaliye jaldi se de dijiye.
akshara:kya naitik aap bhi na.
naitik:jabtak aap mujhe kiss nahi dengi main apko nahi jane dunga.
akshara gives him a kiss and quickly and shyly runs to the bathroom.
naitik gets up with a smile and started getting ready 4 the walk.
akshara comes after bathing fresh like a daisy.
naitik turns around and sees akshara coming drying her hair.she was looking beautiful in red coloured saree with wet hair and little make-up.naitik was completely lost in her beauty and he was continuously looking at her.
akshara:kaha kho gaye aap
naitik:apki is khoobsurti me.aap bahot sunder lag rahi hai akshara.
he slowly moves towards her but she stops him and says:bas kijiye naitik daddaji apka intezaar kar rahe honge,jaiye.
naitik:mere pas abhi 15 mins. hai.
akshara:achha ab in 15 mins. me aap yahan rehkar kya karenge? jaiye na mujhe taiyaar hone dijiye.
naitik:in 15 mins. me main apko taiyaar hota dekhunga.
akshara:aap bhi na naitik(saying this she walks towards dressing table and sits)
she was getting ready and naitik was continuously looking at her as he cannot take his eyes off from akshara.as he started moving towards akshara,rashmi comes and said: dada bhabhi aap dono ko daddaji niche bola rahe hai chaliye.
naitik and akshara give a smile 2 each other and moves down.

 

 

Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 14 years ago

AMAZIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was amazing yaar.........naksh scene was really superb....
plssss continue soon!!!!!!!!!!

very nice.......................I liked the romance very much...............update the next part soon...................! 😊

hey all the 3 parts are amazing
do update soon  
gr8 work  👏



ishita

loved it dear.
naitik is really naughty.
can't wait to read the next part!!