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Posted: 5 months ago
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Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait smiley17

Soo Jaspal might not be Veer's Father smiley39I really hope he is.

If Daarji actually Ends up being Veer's father smiley37

PLS UPDATE QUICKLY I FEEL LIKE A DETECTIVE

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Originally posted by: themasked

Part eighteen

Kiara found herself nursing a terrible headache as they gathered for the gharoli ceremony.Her fellow drinkers ,Ekam, Sahiba and mami didn't fare well either.Infact,Ekam looked positively green.It felt as if the world were laughing at her when she saw Bebe dancing around in glee.Why did they have to suffer hangovers while the person responsible for that concoction,the one who had outdrunk them the previous night,got to frolick around without a care in the world.She however,did feel a sense of vindication as she spotted an extremely miserable looking daarji.Bebe had driven some home truths after all.

Smirking,she felt happier when Sahiba openly refused Angad's company and chose to stand with her.Soon they were joined by Ekam and Gurleen mami.They drew little attention to themselves and the ceremony was completed smoothly.Kiara knew she ought to be more excited and emotional about her brother's wedding but she couldn't find it in herself to care.Garry was a commitment phobe and would probably grow tired of Shanaya anyways.Her soon to be Parjaai was happily walking into a trap,she thought wryly.

"Mami,when are you planning to tell Veer?"

"I honestly don't know what to do."

"What if he finds out from someone else ?"

Her mami looked troubled.

"I really don't know how to tell him.And I don't know how he'll take it.What if he reacts in anger?"

Kiara thought for a while.Mami did have a point.If he were to find out about their 'experiences',he wouldn't hesitate to act in anger.Behind his calm demeanor and sugary sweet personality,lay a monster.She had seen it first hand the day Ekam had come back home from college bruised and cut up from a beating .Veer hadn't wasted a second.He tracked down the boys and thrashed them black and blue with hockey sticks.Only Daarji's intervention saved him from prison.

Ekam was no better, her sharp tongue often got her into people twice her size and never backing down despite the damage they did to her.It had always eluded her as to how these two were born to parents as calm and unruffled as Gurleen mami and Jaspal mamu.But then,mamu had caused his fair share of trouble while in college himself.

Then she removed the secret about Veer's parentage which was a double edged sword.He would end up hurt either ways,she thought with a pang.On one hand,if mamu wasn't his father,their family unit would remain intact but he'd become illegitimate.On the other hand if mamu was his father,well.....

Either ways he was a product of a rape; there was no other way to put it.

Suddenly she giggled.The other three looked at her,t heir expressions a mix of concern and puzzlement.

"I'm sorry but I just had a thought.What if Daarji was Veer's father?That would make Veer Ekam's uncle."

"Di,how could you joke about it?"

"And he'd be Chachi's son and brother-in-law."Sahiba added with a peal of laughter.

Finally mami and Ekam broke and burst into laughter.

"What are you laughing about?"asked a suspicious looking Veer who had siddled up.

"What if you were Ekam's uncle?"

He looked at them in horror.

"I'm thankful that God has spared me that fate."

As he fled,the four of them burst into fits if giggles again.

"Did you see his expression?"

"He looked terrified."

Soon bebe announced the end of the ceremony and the guests started leaving for lunch.The four of them looked at each other and nodded ; loading their plates with food,they convened in the storeroom where no one would bother to look for them and sat in a circle.

"Before we start , let's just eat up.The food looks especially good today."

All of them tucked in except mami and Ekam.

"What's wrong?"Kiara asked through a mouthful of paneer.

"It keeps bugging me."Ekam muttered."I want to kill that man."

Mami looked at her sadly.

Kiara on the other hand felt chills,remembering Veer's words.Whether he was mamu's biological son or not,Ekam was definitely her father's daughter.

"Ekam,first eat,then rant."Sahiba told her firmly."If we want to catch the culprit,we need your brain to function."

"CATCH THE CULPRIT?"Kiara and her mami looked exclaimed in unison .

"What are you saying puttar?"

"Chachi,I know how distressing this can be for you and Kiara but a rapist never strikes once.And Ekam,judging by your past experiences, you might be the next target."

"Ekam?!"Kiara was ready to throttle her little sister for concealing such important information.

"I didn't want to worry you all."she whispered,looking guiltily at her mother,who had turned pale.

Without saying a single word, Gurleen got up and left the room.Sahiba made to follow her but Kiara stopped her.

"Give her some time,she needs to let out some time before she can have a single conversation.And if you're worried about safety, she's sobre and the house is filled with people.No one in their right minds would try anything.Ekam,eat up quickly.The sooner we catch that....man, the better."

They ate in complete silence.


Who is Veer's biological father πŸ˜²πŸ€”

Can it be Inder ?? πŸ€”πŸ€”

Daarji joke was 😁😁

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Originally posted by: Simiyy

Really enjoying your story... wonder who is Veer's real father!?

Also would it be possible to add like a scene of Angad and Sahiba?

Veer's father's identity will be revealed in subsequent chapters.

And yes,I can add scenes of Angad and Sahiba.But I'm afraid it won't be too romantic as he did attempt to molest her in the storeroom while drunk.So that will always lie between them.

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Originally posted by: Amanita09

Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait smiley17

Soo Jaspal might not be Veer's Father smiley39I really hope he is.

If Daarji actually Ends up being Veer's father smiley37

PLS UPDATE QUICKLY I FEEL LIKE A DETECTIVE

Jaspal being Veer's father is a pretty terrible scenario.Ironically ,it will end up breaking their family as both Ekam and Veer will end up hating their father.πŸ˜…

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Part nineteen


"So, they're serving icecream downstairs.Who's volunteering to get them?"Kiara asked

"I'll go",volunteered a very subdued Ekam.

"How about we all go?"Sahiba quipped.

The girls nodded.Washing their hands and locking the room safely behind them, they made it to the buffet.Kiara remembered to get her mami's plate as well.But to their dismay, there was no ice-cream left.

"I can't believe it."Ekam was upset.

"Hello girls."

They turned around to be greeted by Shanaya who was accompanied by Angad.

"I know we started off on a bad footing,but I was hoping we could get to know each other better."she looked at them expectantly.

"Don't worry Shanaya, I'm sure the girls would love to spend time with you ."he said with a forced smile.

"Actually, we are searching for mami to give her her plate.She hasn't eaten yet you see."

"Daarji called her over,something about introducing her to someone.You'll find her near the reception."Angad replied, looking strained .

"Sahiba,could I have a word with you?"

Sahiba blinked at him,hands shaking as she attempted to adjust her dupatta.Ekam immediately perked up,

"Mummy wanted to talk to Sahiba Parjaai as well."

"Yes"seconded Kiara,nodding nervously."We can't afford to lose her."

Sahiba shot them a grateful smile.To their collective horror,Angad grabbed hold of Sahiba's wrist and tried to pull her away.

"You are my wife and you will obey no one but me."he said through gritted teeth."I've had enough with your stubbornness.Rebel longer and I will break your spirit or my name is not Angad Singh Brar."

Ekam saw red and without hesitation took hold of Sahiba's wrist and pulled her in the other direction.Incensed ,Angad pulled harder, oblivious to his wife's painful cries.It wasn't long before everyone noticed the mini tug of war.

"Angad,let go, you're creating a scene."Sahiba muttered through her pain.

He only tightened his grip.

"Isn't your family the one fond of creating scenes? Aren't you on familiar grounds?You consider yourself a great person with that art of yours don't you? Let's see what you do when you can no longer paint or draw."

He dragged her to the buffet table were they were serving hot jalebis and thrust her hand right into the boiling oil.To Kiara's horror ,Ekam caught hold of Sahiba's hand and in the melee that ensued,the pitcher toppled right over,spilling boiling oil over her and Sahiba.Thankfully she and Shanaya managed to pull them away before any serious damage was done though Ekam did end up with a rather large burn on her foot.

"Ekam!"her mami and mamu hurried over.As mamu checked Ekam's foot,mami confronted Angad.She looked livid.Without any warning,she slapped him.He looked at her incredulously,holding his paining cheek.Not once had anyone in the family seen Gurleen Kaur Brar lose her temper,let alone publicly.Even mamu looked shocked.

"Gurleen puttar,please calm down.The media is present;there are several guests as well."To Kiara's disgust, bebe intervened.

By their side,Sahiba had started shaking.Noticing her,Shanaya called out worriedly.

"Gurleen aunty"

They all but managed to catch her when she finally collapsed.

*******************************************************

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S PREGNANT?"

Kiara looked aghast at the doctor's announcement.

"I thought Angad paaji hated Sahiba Parjaai."Ekam asked, wincing as her father gently rubbed salve over her burnt foot.

"Where's mummy?"she asked.

"Chewing out Angad in Daarji's study."a voice replied from the door.

Kiara looked up to find her mom staring at them.Gone was her usual snark and trademark smile.Something seemed to be troubling her.

"Kiara,Ekam,can I please talk to you for a second?"

The two of them glanced at each other and nodded.

"Jaspal,please go and check on Gurleen.The last time I saw her,she looked ready to kill Angad.And from the likes of it Manveer parjaai and Inder paaji are ganging up on her."

With reassuring pat on Ekam's shoulder,he left,failing to notice her flinch.However,it didn't escape Jasleen's eyes ;she chose not to comment on it and left,bading them to follow her.

"Don't worry about Sahiba, I'll take care of her."Shanaya reassured them before settling down on a chair by the bed.

Kiara found herself warming a bit towards the girl.The Brar household didn't deserve such a person.

"Parjaai,"she called out hesitatingly.

She was rewarded with a dazzling smile.

"Just call me Shanaya.I think you're more comfortable with it."

"May I talk to you when we return?I think you need to know a few things before you marry my brother.

*******************************************************

Ekam watched her bua pace the room frantically.

"Kiara, Ekam,I know there's something you're hiding from all of us.Care to share?"

Both shook their heads resolutely.Bua just sighed.

"I can force you two to do anything, you're all adults but it doesn't stop hurting does it when your old children don't share things with you."

"You mean child,mom,not children.When have you ever shared anything with me? It's always your precious Garry that matters, doesn't it?"

"That's because Garry is twice the child you can ever be.He was not the one who decided to plagiarise and tarnish his name in front of the family and business world.He didn't impregnate someone out of wedlock and have an abortion done later."

Kiara felt as if her mother were slapping her with every word.As anger surged through her,she did something which she'd sorely regret.

"Garry was the one who eloped with Seerat on the day of Angad's wedding and got her pregnant as well before dumping her.Sahiba was telling the truth on the day of the engagement."she whispered.

Seeing her mother turn pale left her feeling satisfied.

"There's no way Garry would do that.Lies!All lies!You can't believe everything that girl says!"her mother yelled.

Kiara wordlessly pulled out her mobile and tried calling someone.

"Ekam, please call Garry on your phone."her younger sister complied and put the call on speaker.

"Hey Garry,Kiara here.When are you going to tell mom and Shanaya about the whole Seerat debacle?"

"Are you mad Ekam?"he replied,"Mom would kill me if she got to know of my .....you know .....indiscretions.And as for Shanaya, I love her too much to tell the truth.She'll leave me man."

She hung up.

"Kiara,not a word of this to Shanaya,got it?"her mom threatened her,eyes blazing.

"Too late mom, she's been listening to the whole conversation."

Kiara held up her phone to reveal a shocked looking Shanaya,staring at everyone,eyes wet with tears.

Edited by themasked - 5 months ago
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Originally posted by: themasked

Part nineteen


"So, they're serving icecream downstairs.Who's volunteering to get them?"Kiara asked

"I'll go",volunteered a very subdued Ekam.

"How about we all go?"Sahiba quipped.

The girls nodded.Washing their hands and locking the room safely behind them, they made it to the buffet.Kiara remembered to get her mami's plate as well.But to their dismay, there was no ice-cream left.

"I can't believe it."Ekam was upset.

"Hello girls."

They turned around to be greeted by Shanaya who was accompanied by Angad.

"I know we started off on a bad footing,but I was hoping we could get to know each other better."she looked at them expectantly.

"Don't worry Shanaya, I'm sure the girls would love to spend time with you ."he said with a forced smile.

"Actually, we are searching for mami to give her her plate.She hasn't eaten yet you see."

"Daarji called her over,something about introducing her to someone.You'll find her near the reception."Angad replied with a strained smile.

"Sahiba,could I have a word with you?"

Sahiba blinked at him,hands shaking as she attempted to adjust her dupatta.Ekam immediately perked up,

"Mummy wanted to talk to Sahiba Parjaai as well."

"Yes"seconded Kiara,nodding nervously."We can't afford to lose her."

Sahiba shot them a grateful smile.To their collective horror,Angad grabbed hold of Sahiba's wrist and tried to pull her away.

"You are my wife and you will obey no one but me."he said through gritted teeth."I've had enough with your stubbornness.Rebel longer and I will break your spirit or my name is not Angad Singh Brar."

Ekam saw red and without hesitation took hold of Sahiba's wrist and pulled her in the other direction.Incensed ,Angad pulled harder, oblivious to his wife's painful cries.It wasn't long before everyone noticed the mini tug of war.

"Angad,let go, you're creating a scene."Sahiba muttered through her pain.

He only tightened his grip.

"Isn't your family the one fond of creating scenes? Aren't you on familiar grounds?You consider yourself a great person with that art of yours don't you? Let's see what you do when you can no longer paint or draw?"

He dragged her to the buffet table were they were serving hot jalebis and thrust her hand right into the boiling oil.To Kiara's horror ,Ekam caught hold of Sahiba's hand and in the melee that ensued,the pitcher toppled right over,spilling boiling oil over her and Sahiba.Thankfully she and Shanaya managed to pull them away before any serious damage was done though Ekam did end up with a rather large burn on her foot.

"Ekam!"her mami and mamu hurried over.As mamu checked Ekam's foot,mami confronted Angad.She looked livid.Without any warning,she slapped Angad.He looked at her incredulously,holding his paining cheek.Not once had anyone in the family seen Gurleen Kaur Brar lose her temper,let alone publicly.Even mamu looked shocked.

"Gurleen puttar,please calm down.The media is present;there are several guests as well."To Kiara's disgust, bebe intervened.

By their side,Sahiba had started shaking.Noticing her,Shanaya called out worriedly.

"Gurleen aunty"

They all but managed to catch her when she finally collapsed.

*******************************************************

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S PREGNANT?"

Kiara looked aghast at the doctor's announcement.

"I thought Angad paaji hated Sahiba Parjaai."Ekam asked, wincing as her father gently rubbed salve over her burnt foot.

"Where's mummy?"she asked.

"Chewing out Angad in Daarji's study."a voice replied from the door.

Kiara looked up to find her mom staring at them.Gone was her usual snark and trademark smile.Something seemed to be troubling her.

"Kiara,Ekam,can I please talk to you for a second?"

The two of them glanced at each other and nodded.

"Jaspal,please go and check on Gurleen.The last time I saw her,she looked ready to kill Angad.And from the likes of it Manveer parjaai and Inder paaji are ganging up on her."

With reassuring pat on Ekam's shoulder,he left,failing to notice her flinch.However,it didn't escape Jasleen's eyes ;she chose not to comment on it and left,bading them to follow her.

"Don't worry about Sahiba, I'll take care of her."Shanaya reassured them before settling down on a chair by the bed.

Kiara found herself warming a bit towards the girl.The Brar household didn't deserve such a person.

"Parjaai,"she called out hesitatingly.

She was rewarded with a dazzling smile.

"Just call me Shanaya.I think you're more comfortable with it."

"May I talk to you when we return?I think you need to know a few things before you marry my brother.

*******************************************************

Ekam watched her bua pace the room frantically.

"Kiara, Ekam,I know there's something you're hiding from all of us.Care to share?"

Both shook their heads resolutely.Bua just sighed.

"I can force you two to do anything, you're all adults but it doesn't stop hurting does it when your old children don't share things with you."

"You mean child,mom,not children.When have you ever shared anything with me? It's always your precious Garry that matters, doesn't it?"

"That's because Garry is twice the child you can ever be.He was not the one who decided to plagiarise and tarnish his name in front of the family and business world.He didn't impregnate someone out of wedlock and have an abortion done later."

Kiara felt as if her mother were slapping her with every word.As anger surged through her,she did something which she'd sorely regret.

"Garry was the one who eloped with Seerat on the day of Angad's wedding and got her pregnant as well before dumping her.Sahiba was telling the truth on the day of the engagement."she whispered.

Seeing her mother turn pale left her feeling satisfied.

"There's no way Garry would do that.Lies!All lies!You can't believe everything that girl says!"her mother yelled.

Kiara wordlessly pulled out her mobile and tried calling someone.

"Ekam, please call Garry on your phone."her younger sister complied and put the call on speaker.

"Hey Garry,Kiara here.When are you going to tell mom and Shanaya about the whole Seerat debacle?"

"Are you mad Ekam?"he replied,"Mom would kill me if she got to know of my .....you know .....indiscretions.And as for Shanaya, I love her too much to tell the truth.She'll leave me man."

"Kiara,not a word of this to Shanaya,got it?"her mom threatened her,eyes blazing.

"Too late mom, she's been listening to the whole conversation."

Kiara held up her phone to reveal a shocked looking Shanaya,staring at everyone,eyes wet with tears.

So many plotlines at once 😲

wow πŸ˜²πŸ€—

Interesting....

I feel bad for Kiara πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

Waiting for next chapter....

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Omg I am so intrigued to read more....

Can't wait!!

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Posted: 5 months ago
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WOW

Gurleen slapped Angad

Sahiba is Pregnant

Ekam and Kiara know garry made seerat eloped

Shanaya found out

SO MANY things happened in this chapter, can't wait for the next.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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To be updated

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Eagerly waiting for the next update! Hope you post soon!

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