FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 7

Love the way you have developed the story😍😍 Sahiba and Keerat's bonding plus your characterisation of Angad is amazing! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😇😇

Originally posted by: piyushi

Loved it. Thank you for the update. Eagerly waiting for next one.

Hi Piyushi.

Thank you for reading this. I will be updating it soon.

Originally posted by: NidhaA

Oh boy! Angad has gone into the CEO mode and it’s refreshing to see. It was an empty threat he made but an effective one, I am guessing. Please make Sahiba keep a counter clause - I wanna see these two putting their business sense on display.

Well written as always ❤️

I was actually awaiting your reaction to Angad's character. Who knows how much of an empty threat he makes?

But Sahiba might though not the clauses we all are expecting... Someone has to show their real age after all.

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Wow👏👏

Loved Sahiba charging in to save Keerat!! ❤️❤️❤️ I really am impressed with Angad’s rapid mode change!!!👍👍

Thank you Kalavathi5,

I tried to avoid Angad from being the cringe he is in the show at the moment.

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Awesome update

Loved inder to take control, Angad was more mature in handling things here , loved it 👏👌

❤️I badly wanted Inder to do something other than being the show piece he is in the show. All he does is drink and say his lines ...err taunt. He could do some work. 😆

Originally posted by: bookworm3294

Love the way you have developed the story😍😍 Sahiba and Keerat's bonding plus your characterisation of Angad is amazing! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😇😇

Thank you for appreciating the story. This story does focus on the individual bonds between different characters while trying to tell the lead characters' story.

You will have few other characters that you can look for in the upcoming chapters.

Amazing update!! ❤️

Angad's threat was as empty as a husk but well he was doing damage control. If this was shown in ITV, I still would have watched.😆 Unfortunately no such things happening! Two business people in one marriage? That would be fun to see...do update soon. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: mirai07

Amazing update!! ❤️

Angad's threat was as empty as a husk but well he was doing damage control. If this was shown in ITV, I still would have watched.😆

Soooo soooo true. But what can we expect from TV shows. They come up with most ridiculous, hard to digest logics. There are so many things other than fate and accidental rituals that they can show. But nahi, they are adamant ki hum toh bakwaas hi karenge.

Unfortunately no such things happening! Two business people in one marriage? That would be fun to see...do update soon. 👍🏼

Yeah. Though we will have to see how much likeminded the two of them are.

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Fantastic update! I liked how calmly Angad took charge and understood everything… why are TV guys shown so dumb whereas they are heralded as the smartest among businessmen yet doofus when handling problems of a personal nature!

What a splendid update!

Starting from inderpal his differences between his family & the way he is more close to his younger brother and family is amazing. I could see a good bond between Inder & veer too. Unlike in show. Would love to see more interaction between Inder & veer more here. Coming to Manbir she was fabulous both with jasleen & Santhu. She was so classy unlike in show where she just preaches about class & do something opposite.
Sahiba was so badass here. How I wished to see her like that in show. Rather than an emotional fool & mahaan fl. I always loved the bond shared by Sahiba Keerat. I think after Jeevika Manvi these sisters duo have place in my heart. How lovely you have portrayed keerat through sahiba’s eyes. I love how she was so protective of keerat just like a mother. Keerat’s vulnerability was shown well. They way she got scared seeing Angad I could understand the trauma suffered by a teenager. I am glad Angad apologised to keerat. Also keerat saying he has bad taste in women 😆. So keerat is hardly 18 here I suppose. So out of curiosity I am just asking are you planning to show veer keerat as a Jodi here? If so I would like to see how it shapes up here after too much drama. Coming to Angad I appreciate you to show him as someone with a working brain (at present I am so pissed off by him in show😡). Oh boy he was super manipulative with Sahiba a true businessman. He exactly knew how to get things done. But I wonder what our santhu baby had filled in his ears. Hope he don’t take out his hatred for santhu sindy duo on Sahiba. I am eagerly waiting for the next update. Would like to see how they fall for each other post there marriage. Also interested to c what happens to Bawejas & Seerat, along with Veer keerat too (hopefully they are a couple here)