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Chapter 38-Gurleen

Of all the things she had expected him to do this definitely took the cake.As he pulled her closer, she lost her balance and narrowly escaped falling on top of him by bracing against his shoulders.It took her a few seconds to regain her balance and she found herself staring into his eyes.Meanwhile,his arms had found their way around her waist,supporting her.He gently lowered her and adjusted his position;she found herself sitting on his lap.

He waited for her to pull away but she didn't.He caressed her face with one hand with the other still around her waist.She felt him trace her forehead,eyes and nose before hovering over her lips.She closed her eyes as she felt him touch them reverently.A curious tingle shot up her spine as his hand made his way to her neck.He ran down the entire length of her neck ,all the way upto her shoulder blade before retracing his path.He even undid her braid and combed through her tresses,separating each strand.

Without realising it, they'd moved closer to each other,their noses almost touching.She opened her eyes and found herself staring into deep pools of melancholy.He seemed rather dazed as he fixated her with an intense stare.She was unable to move,captivated by his gaze and found herself leaning towards him subtly;she paused ,giving him the window of opportunity to push her away.

When he didn't,her heart leapt and she swiftly closed the rest of the distance between them, her lips meeting his.When he stiffened,she tried to pull away but to her surprise,he pulled her closer, wrapping his arms tighter around her, deepening the kiss.Tendrils of electricity danced up her arms ,sizzling her skin.Her heart beat wildly ,almost as if attempting to break out of her ribcage .Meanwhile,he had moved on to her chin and jaw,each peck burning her from within.He quickly made it down her neck ;she gasped when he approached her pulse point.

He returned to her lips and the kiss which had started off soft,grew more demanding;they finally broke free when both of them needed air.She knew she looked a mess with her hair askew and lips swollen,not to mention the blush creeping up her face.He looked no better,she had managed to mess up his hair again;she attempted to smooth it over.

They sat in silence for a while attempting to find their bearings.The dazed look hadn't left his eyes yet ;he was in an entirely different world it seemed.When he finally let go of her,she scrambled off and elected to sit beside him again.Neither said a word,both too confused to contemplate.

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The next morning

"It's just a sprain; there are no fracture lines on the x ray.I'll just stabilize your ankle and you'll be good to go.Make sure you give that foot a lot of rest though and take these tablets when it hurts badly."said the doctor.

It wasn't long before her foot was patched up and she was cleared to go home.

"Parjaai,could you please drop me off at the Brar office building?"

Her Parjaai looked at her quizzically.

"Why do you wish to go there?"

"Daarji wishes me to meet the board before I officially take over tomorrow."

To their surprise,they found Jaspal waiting for her at the reception desk.Her Parjaai raised an eyebrow at her while she shrugged.

"Sat sri akaal Pammi ji, Gurleen."

He refused to meet her eyes.A flicker of irritation passed through her.

"I would like to drive Gurleen to our office."

Her Parjaai didn't look too pleased.

"You need not concern yourself with her.I am more than capable of driving her around."

Gurleen sighed.It seemed the cold war between the Brars and Babbars would never abate.No matter how much they professed to tolerate each other,too many egos had been hurt for any pretence of civility.And her Parjaai had started growing possessive on top of everything, suddenly worried that Jaspal would take her place in her life ,hence the extra hostility.

"Pammi ji,I wasn't asking for permission.I just declared my intentions.I have no intention of backing out until and unless Gurleen herself declines my offer."

He still didn't look her in the eye.

"No one needs to drive.I can hail a cab and reach the office by the time you finish squabbling."

It effectively shut the two of them up.

"Gurleen, I'm afraid I have a lot of work at home.I trust him to drive you safely."

Jaspal nodded with a slight smirk.To her shock,he took her arm and led her to his car parked outside,opening the door for her.

Once the two of them had settled in,he started to drive.It took her a while to finally find her voice.

"It's strange that you are perfectly capable of asserting your right over me in public,but when it's just the two of us,you conveniently forget everything."

"We have appearances to keep up in public and in front of the family."

She rolled her eyes.

"Did we have an audience yesterday night as well?"

He blushed deeply.

"We should talk about it, shouldn't we?",he asked softly.

She sighed,

"Yes,it has complicated everything.It's a bit difficult to pretend that nothing has changed between the two of us."

"I know Gurleen.But perhaps we should slow down and think this through.I'll admit that I have been attracted to you from the beginning.However,it has not evolved into love and I'm sorry, I'd like to keep it that way."

She mused over his words before replying.

"I too am not in love with you.I have a great deal of respect and admiration and think you'd make a good friend,but my feelings do not run deeper than that.At the moment, I'm just disappointed that we cannot trust each other, there's nothing more to that as well."

She knew she had been the one to kiss him first;but that was one topic she conveniently ignored.Her feelings were too messy to handle.

He suddenly stopped the car;they had arrived.

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Chapter 38-Gurleen

Of all the things she had expected him to do this definitely took the cake.As he pulled her closer, she lost her balance and narrowly escaped falling on top of him by bracing against his shoulders.It took her a few seconds to regain her balance and she found herself staring into his eyes.Meanwhile,his arms had found their way around her waist,supporting her.He gently lowered her and adjusted his position;she found herself sitting on his lap.

He waited for her to pull away but she didn't.He caressed her face with one hand with the other still around her waist.She felt him trace her forehead,eyes and nose before hovering over her lips.She closed her eyes as she felt him touch them reverently.A curious tingle shot up her spine as his hand made his way to her neck.He ran down the entire length of her neck ,all the way upto her shoulder blade before retracing his path.He even undid her braid and combed through her tresses,separating each strand.

Without realising it, they'd moved closer to each other,their noses almost touching.She opened her eyes and found herself staring into deep pools of melancholy.He seemed rather dazed as he fixated her with an intense stare.She was unable to move,captivated by his gaze and found herself leaning towards him subtly;she paused ,giving him the window of opportunity to push her away.

When he didn't,her heart leapt and she swiftly closed the rest of the distance between them, her lips meeting his.When he stiffened,she tried to pull away but to her surprise,he pulled her closer, wrapping his arms tighter around her, deepening the kiss.Tendrils of electricity danced up her arms ,sizzling her skin.Her heart beat wildly ,almost as if attempting to break out of her ribcage .Meanwhile,he had moved on to her chin and jaw,each peck burning her from within.He quickly made it down her neck ;she gasped when he approached her pulse point.

He returned to her lips and the kiss which had started off soft,grew more demanding;they finally broke free when both of them needed air.She knew she looked a mess with her hair askew and lips swollen,not to mention the blush creeping up her face.He looked no better,she had managed to mess up his hair again;she attempted to smooth it over.

They sat in silence for a while attempting to find their bearings.The dazed look hadn't left his eyes yet ;he was in an entirely different world it seemed.When he finally let go of her,she scrambled off and elected to sit beside him again.Neither said a word,both too confused to contemplate.

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The next morning

"It's just a sprain; there are no fracture lines on the x ray.I'll just stabilize your ankle and you'll be good to go.Make sure you give that foot a lot of rest though and take these tablets when it hurts badly."said the doctor.

It wasn't long before her foot was patched up and she was cleared to go home.

"Parjaai,could you please drop me off at the Brar office building?"

Her Parjaai looked at her quizzically.

"Why do you wish to go there?"

"Daarji wishes me to meet the board before I officially take over tomorrow."

To their surprise,they found Jaspal waiting for her at the reception desk.Her Parjaai raised an eyebrow at her while she shrugged.

"Sat sri akaal Pammi ji, Gurleen."

He refused to meet her eyes.A flicker of irritation passed through her.

"I would like to drive Gurleen to our office."

Her Parjaai didn't look too pleased.

"You need not concern yourself with her.I am more than capable of driving her around."

Gurleen sighed.It seemed the cold war between the Brars and Babbars would never abate.No matter how much they professed to tolerate each other,too many egos had been hurt for any pretence of civility.And her Parjaai had started growing possessive on top of everything, suddenly worried that Jaspal would take her place in her life ,hence the extra hostility.

"Pammi ji,I wasn't asking for permission.I just declared your intentions.I have no intention of backing out until and unless Gurleen herself declines my offer."

He still didn't look her in the eye.

"No one needs to drive.I can hail a cab and reach the office by the time you finish squabbling."

It effectively shut the two of them up.

"Gurleen, I'm afraid I have a lot of work at home.I trust him to drive you safely."

Jaspal nodded with a slight smirk.To her shock,he took her arm and led her to his car parked outside,opening the door for her.

Once the two of them had settled in,he started to drive.It took her a while to finally find her voice.

"It's strange that you are perfectly capable of asserting your right over me in public,but when it's just the two of us,you conveniently forget everything."

"We have appearances to keep up in public and in front of the family."

She rolled her eyes.

"Did we have an audience yesterday night as well?"

He blushed deeply.

"We should talk about it, shouldn't we?",he asked softly.

She sighed,

"Yes,it has complicated everything.It's a bit difficult to pretend that nothing has changed between the two of us."

"I know Gurleen.But perhaps we should slow down and think this through.I'll admit that I have been attracted to you from the beginning.However,it has not evolved into love and I'm sorry, I'd like to keep it that way."

She mused over his words before replying.

"I too am not in love with you.I have a great deal of respect and admiration and think you'd make a good friend,but my feelings do not run deeper than that.At the moment, I'm just disappointed that we cannot trust each other, there's nothing more to that as well."

She knew she had been the one to kiss him first;but that was one topic she conveniently ignored.Her feelings were too messy to handle.

He suddenly stopped the car;they had arrived.


Yapp, let's kiss each other BUT WE ARE NOT IN LOVE πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

they both need to trust each other πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜³

You wrote brilliantly ❀️

Ph needs to hire u asap.

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Yapp, let's kiss each other BUT WE ARE NOT IN LOVE πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

they both need to trust each other πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜³

You wrote brilliantly ❀️

Ph needs to hire u asap.

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The kiss was PERFECT!!

But how can you kiss but are not in love,they should confess already.

I want another Kiss to happen πŸ˜• 😩!!!

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Chapter 39-Jabjyot


Jabjyot watched her husband closely as he smiled to himself in the mirror as he got ready for bed,a rare occurrence indeed.Usually,she never interfered with her husband's moods,letting them run their course but this time she was too intrigued to let go.

"Brar Saab,you look very happy tonight.I wonder what's in the air?"

He chuckled before turning to her,

"Meri votti, your husband is now the father in law to the most affluent woman in all of Punjab.Now no one can look down on the Brar household.I no longer have to look down on anyone."

While she was happy for him,she couldn't help having misgivings.

"Brar Saab, don't you think it's a little unorthodox for Gurleen to outrank Jaspal and you?He is her husband and you're her father in law.What if this sows discord in the family?"

"Jabjyot, you're severely underestimating your son and husband."he reprimanded her,

"Jaspal is not Inder.He will be proud of his wife's accomplishments and will do his utmost best to ensure her success.As for me,what sort of father cannot resent his own child's success?"

"You don't trust your own children,but you're perfectly willing to support a near stranger.How could you?"

Her husband contemplated for a while before replying.

"All my children have been disappointments. Inder is too wrapped up in himself to consider his family and business.Jasleen is a chameleon. She loves no one and is utterly worthless when it comes to business.For all that she goes on and on about not getting the same opportunities as her brothers,not once has she ever attempted to work for it.If she expects me to hand everything over to her on a silver platter, she's sorely mistaken."

Jabjyot was shocked.She had always thought her husband had trouble expressing his love towards his children but such full blown hatred was unexpected.Brar Saab had decided to back Gurleen which left her to protect the interests of her children.

"And what about Manveer? She's ambitious and smart enough."she ventured .

"But she rejected my job offer in favour of her husband.Had she been an iota smarter she would've realised the insecure wimp her husband actually is and acted sooner.Yet she clung to him and he discarded her."

Jabjyot closed her eyes,she had been disappointed in Inder as well.Brar Saab had hoped for Manveer to join the company but Inder had quickly put a stop to it,unable to see his spouse sucessful in face of his own failures.

"You've talked about everyone;but what about Jaspal?"

"Jaspal is my least problematic child and probably the only one's life I haven't ruined yet with my interference.He is kind ,good and loyal and deserves all the love in the world.I wish to marry him off to someone who will love him unconditionally for the way he is and protect him."

A lone tear trickled down his cheek.Jabjyot felt numb.Her husband had finally acknowledged his part in ruining Inder's life,yet he was ten years far too late.While she was happy that he cared enough about Jaspal,a part of her resented the fact that her third son could be happy while her first son drowned in misery.

She knew a mother could not have favourites,yet Inder was the child of her heart.She had nearly died giving birth to him and wanted him to be happy.She'd been heart broken when he had been forced to give up hockey and the love of his life and had prayed he'd find his happiness with Manveer.Yet it was not meant to be.He became a drunkard and her daughter in law miserable.Her only solace now was Angad,who in her eyes was an extension of the child of her heart.

If her son couldn't be happy,atleast get grandson could.She'd ensure that Angad inherited what was rightfully his as the eldest Brar.There was no way she could let an outsider change the status quo.As long as Jabjyot Kaur Brar was alive, everyone would stay in their rightful places.

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The next morning,she went in search of Manveer who was busy instructing the household staff regarding the preparations for Gurleen's induction as chairperson.Manveer was the perfect Brar bahu,someone who could uphold the family's image no matter how dire the circumstances were.She was very reliable and never questioned their judgement.Most importantly,she was grooming Angad to be a worthy heir.What more could she want?

"Manveer puttar,"

"Ji Bebe?"

"Could you please walk with me?"

Manveer took her arm and the two of them set out into the gardens outside.

"Puttar,I need your opinion about something,no someone.Your family has known the Babbars for a long time right?What is Gurleen like?And more importantly,is she suitable for this family?"

Manveer thought for a moment before replying.

"Bebe,I know I have always been harsh on Gurleen and that has coloured your judgement.I have always been unfair to her.While she did play a role in sending my brother away to the States,we cannot forget that she'd didn't mean any harm.She was just a child who was in the wrong place at the wrong time .I just need time to get over the whole incident, that's why I still feel reserved around her.Plus, she's already apologised multiple times which has actually helped me.

She is truly a good person Bebe.You can never doubt her character.Her only flaw is that she talks too much,if that's even an issue and has the tendency to befriend any living being."

Jabjyot started laughing.It seems they had all missed something hidden beneath the girl's reserve.Jaspal was in for a shock.And she was going to enjoy every single minute of it.

However,nice as the girl might be, she'd have to learn and adhere to the status quo.She vowed to ensure it would happen.

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The kiss was PERFECT!!

But how can you kiss but are not in love,they should confess already.

I want another Kiss to happen πŸ˜• 😩!!!

The thing is both of them haven't really gauged the depth of their feelings yet.They're still in a state of denial as both have bigger problems to worry about, making it hard for them to prioritise each other.For Jaspal, it's the conflict between his Daarji's values and his own principles which reflect in his estimation of his self worth.Gurleen has to accept that her family is going to leave her alone and that they may never prioritise her.Until they manage to trust each other,neither can they manage their own demons nor can they confess.

Yes, they'll probably kiss again but not until they confess.πŸ˜…

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Chapter 40-Jaspal

The meeting had gone off without a hitch.There had been some resistance towards a woman taking over but between Gurleen and Daarji, they had managed to settle down the naysayers. Gurleen in the board room was different from the Gurleen he knew as his fiance.His fiance was quiet, dreamy and had a smile which reached her eyes while the future chairperson was indeed a vision to behold.

Gone was her shyness and gentleness.She effortlessly cut through the discourse as if she owned the room.Yes,her inexperience did show,but everyone understood she was not one to be trifled with, especially with Daarji deciding to mentor her.He realised he didn't mind being sidelined by his family;he was happy to remain her support.He had never been prouder of her.

His daarji finally addressed the room,

"It's finally been settled.Brar Jewellers will have its own board,CEO and chairperson.It will be semi autonomous but partly owned by the soon to be Gurleen Brar.They will get twenty five percent of the profits in exchange for letting us use their jewellers and workshops.

Jaspal, as CEO, you will sit on the Babbar board as well ,along with me as the representatives of our company. Moreover it's vital to understand that while we have independence with respect to the designs and products ,the veto power lies entirely with the Babbar board.

I know this is difficult to digest but please remember that Gurleen is my daughter in law and her husband,my son,is your CEO.I will not tolerate any disrespect and will not hesitate to crush any dissent.I hope I've made myself clear."

To say he was shocked was an understatement. Never had he expected his daarji to go out of his way to support her.He snuck a glance at her,only to find an identical expression of shock with a hint of terror on her face.He discretely squeezed her hand under the table and to his relief she didn't pull away and squeezed back.Before long the meeting was over and everyone drifted off to chit-chat.

He helped her to the door and led her to his office .

She looked at him quizzically.

He smiled at her.

"Welcome to my office.As your husband,it would be rude not to give my wife a proper welcome, wouldn't it?"

She simply rolled her eyes and made herself comfortable on the couch.

"There's still enough time to call off the wedding you know?"

"But then you'll miss my charm and panache."he retorted .

She simply picked up a cushion and chucked it at him.He lazily caught it and replaced it in its position .

"This is the second time you've thrown something at me.Is this chronic?I wonder if Daarji and bebe are aware of what they've signed up for, a cushion chucking bahu."

She looked beautiful when angry he absent mindedly noted as she stuck her tongue out him.

"And to think out fortunes rest in your hands."he sighed before taking a seat beside her.

She was now comfortable sitting with sitting close to him.He mentally congratulated himself.

"Gurleen, I'm very proud of you."

He had clearly caught her unawares.She opened and closed her mouth lick a fish,lost for words.

He laughed ,"I believe the proper words are thank you."

She simply swatted at his arm.

"Thank you Jaspal ji but may I know what I did to earn your pride and esteem?"

"Let's see,you managed to make an entire room of old codgers listen to you.I know daarji backed you up but you still held out on your own."

She looked stupefied for a second before hugging him.Hugging her back had been only too natural for him.Instead of the usual thrill of electricity jutting through his bones, he felt his heart settle and mind clear,as if he had finally come home.She too seemed calmer than usual without flailing abd stiffening.He didn't know what to make of this new development.

She finally pulled away and spoke.

"I'm sorry about that ,I just got overwhelmed."

"No, it's ok.I really appreciate your spontaneous hugs.They're really comforting.You don't need my permission."

She started laughing.

"Parjaai calls me a hugging monster,so be careful what you wish for."

"One can never hug too many times.Anyways,I had nearly forgotten why I had brought you here."

"I'm all ears."

"The primary reason was to officially welcome you to my office.But I did have a hidden agenda.

I want to give you something before you leave for London ."

He got up and rummaged in his drawer and pulled out a rectangular box which he brought over.

"Open it please."

She obliged and gasped.There was a single delicate chain from which hung a flower.He picked up the chain and fingered the pendant.

"I designed this personally.The petals of the flower, as you might have noticed, are inlaid with amethyst stones.Amethyst itself signifies peace and tranquility and it reminded me of you .I would really love you to wear it ."

She looked rather conflicted as if she was steeling herself to do something painful.

"Jaspal ji, this is a very personal gift, something which I cannot accept.You have poured your heart and soul into it ;you must give it to someone you truly love.Moreover, I do not have a gift for you."

He was surprised.This was definitely not what he had envisioned.There evidently was one person who had the ability to surpass his overthinking and she was sitting right in front of him.He hadn't thought so much while designing the pendant.

"Gurleen, it's not as personal as you think it might be able trust me when I say that I do not expect anything in return.You are a really good friend and I made it for you."

"I know it doesn't matter to you but gifting is something I take very seriously.Technically,I could give you something in return but it would take away it's value as it was not given from the heart.Please forgive me."

With that,she actually got up and left.He just sat still on the cushion,very confused.All he had planned was wishing her a happy journey and somehow the whole conversation had shifted towards the science of gifting.

It's just a necklace right?

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Can't wait for the next chapter, Why didn't she take the necklace.

It's actually hard imagining a young Jaspal and Gurleen.

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I love this...can't wait to read more!

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I love this...can't wait to read more!

Thank you ❀️

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