FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 49

Originally posted by: NidhaA

Hey Liz,

It’s been long and I hope your life’s rumbles have settled a bit.

Of recent I have been reading FF’s that have been so incredibly well crafted that I am glad to get back to yours.

You explore the depth of human emotions so well, taking into account the environmental /societal/personal influence. Even though there is but a barest hint of changing physical intimacies it was an absolute delight to read.

Hoping to see you back soon

Love

Nidha

Hello!

It is great to reconnect with the familiar people. Yeah it has been months, and my life is doing fine. How is yours? I recall you were planning to relocate to a different place.

Thank you. When people find this work decent and worth re-reading, makes my day every single time I read it. I believe this is the best compliment a writer can ever have.

I have finished writing the next chapter, editing is all that is left.

Hugs and Love

Lizzy

Welcome to this thread. Thank you for giving this fan fiction a chance!

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Okay! I know I am late by 10 days but whatever. I sat down to read the chapter more than three times and didn't read it fully.

First time I gave it a quick overview which got me thinking it was filler chapter.

Second time I read the first half and was like Oh. They are making progress.

And I finally for the third time I sat down and read the whole thing!!! This chapter was amazing! I loved it! Although i have re-read it again to give a full blown review. But I love the way Sahiba and Angad are making progress. Vese isn't Jasleen stupid?

Hehehe. I was anticipating your review. Initially I thought you might be busy, then I thought, maybe, this is bad and then I had given up. At no point I had anticipated that the update would play out like this!

This chapter definitely started as a filler chapter because a major action was planned for this one, but then it felt off in terms of timing, so I pushed the action for later and used this for context building. In the process of writing this chapter I incorporated proper progress for upcoming ones. It took me a lot of time to write this one because a lot of the elements of this chapter actually feature in the next chapter.

I will wait for your full blown review - take your time.

Jasleen is stupid - do you mean in this story or in the show?

If you ask me about this story, then yes, she is. But in the show, every character is stupid and a caricature of what they should be like. Toh, I guess overall stupidity cancels out her singular stupidity or something.

i read the whole story in one sitting that's how good it is

fanfictions keep my hopes alive for SahAn and love how this story is progressing!! can't wait to read more :)

Hi all,

As I had notified in one of the replies that I am in the editing phase of the next chapter, I am wondering how much explicit I can get without getting this thread reported.

I have posted a query regarding this fan fiction in a Q/A thread. I request everyone to respond because it will be the deciding factor in how much I would need to include and exclude in the upcoming chapter(s). If you all decide that I keep the tamed version, accessible to all age groups [who am I kidding, I am more worried about getting reported] I will finish the fan fiction here. But if you want me to get explicit, well I need to find alternative sites where I won't be reported.

As of now, I am considering wattpad, ao3, and fan fiction section of this thread. Each comes with its own downsides. Please decide and let me know. If you have other better alternatives, please suggest.

Hey Lizzy, hope your well. I literally read your story and I am obsessed with it. I love your writing skills and details. Can't wait to read more!

Thank you for giving this story a chance and welcome to this thread.

Hey you can totally shift your story to Fan fiction forum.

Patiently waiting to read the next update, and be transported into the beautiful world you have created!

Thank you,

I am embarassed to say that editing is happening at snail's pace. I apologise for the delay.