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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Ohhh god aisa scene mil jaye acp and professor sneaking inside the girls hostel waaahhh❀️


It was really fun to read i was on edge ab kya hoga 🀣 u should apply as a dialogue writer πŸ‘πŸΌ



πŸ‘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome ts Darshi

Thank you Rashi dear..❀️😳

Wow Reema nd AhirπŸ˜†kya combo haiπŸ˜‰

Mere aur Sakshi ka #KPπŸ˜†

Shaurya as always misunderstands Anokho nd Ahit

Haan uska kaam hi hai MUs , problem is you have to voice out n clear it. Show mein toh hone se raha so maine kar diya.

Lol dono apne lady love se milne ke liye girls hostel pahunch gaye..same tym same place🀣

Yeah I always wanted to make something like this. I had so much fun writing this..πŸ˜†

Loved the surprise Ahir gave to Reema(ji)πŸ˜†

Abhi hostel mein ghusne ko koi toh reason chaahiye..πŸ˜†

Finally ShaKhi confessionnd both of them all shy😳

Woh toh mujhe karvana hi tha. I have wrote something different but woh part hi delete ho gaya..n it put me to the set back for 3-4 days.

Lol Shaurya lied to Devi🀣nd Anokhi nd Reema lied to warden🀣

Dono ek jaise ho toh hai,.🀣

Cont sooon

Yeah I am going to start writing tonight.

Nd i m waiting for another 2 os

Yeah actually 3 in the pipeline..πŸ˜†

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: anjali9996

loved it

awesome update

Thank you dear..πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Lobed this ShaKhi banterπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

ReHir.... Tooo were so cute!

❀❀❀❀❀

Please do write moreπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹

Thank you dear..πŸ€—

ShaKhi banter is always we look forward to.❀️

ReHir is a jodi I look forward to. If makers plan to utilize them.

Definitely if I will get some good plots in mind.😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

As long as the TS turned I enjoyed reading it to bits & pieces πŸ˜ƒ

Aww thank you..πŸ˜³πŸ€—

Entertaining & accolades for the apt dialogues, especially Shaurya & Ahir's

Thank you again appreciation and motivation keeps me going.❀️

Keeping the elements of the characters intact I thoroughly enjoyed reading + Reema & Ahir would actually make a cute pair, specially after seeing them together today 😎

I am glad that you enjoyed. I tried to keep the character originality as much as I can as we love them as they are.

I have seen Ahir's parts but haven't seen much of Reema on screen. But I tried to shape up her character as I myself can connect with it.

Well.. The sudden outburst of emotions seems like something we can relate to Shaurya, he has never felt like this about any girl so it was obvious of him to spill it like that. Anokhi's tu tu main main with him gotta be the best πŸ˜‚

I know Shaurya won't let anything out unless he is triggered as he is very much guarded when it comes to his feelings. He is very good with masking it.

Yes indeed he has never ever felt like this for any girl n these feelings are new for him. So he himself spilled the beans. I love their tu tu main main during hostel scene.πŸ˜† Thats the inspiration.


Waiting to read the next part!

I am writing the next part n will post soon. hope you all would like it.😳

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: wamavasant

Ohhh god aisa scene mil jaye acp and professor sneaking inside the girls hostel waaahhh❀️


It was really fun to read i was on edge ab kya hoga 🀣 u should apply as a dialogue writer πŸ‘πŸΌ



πŸ‘

πŸ˜† Hum sab ko aisa kuch exciting chahiye on the show..

Professor aaye woh bhi darwaaze se nahi khidki se..🀣

Stalking PH people " Sunn raha hai naah tu" errm " padh raha hai naah tu" we need something like this on the show..πŸ˜†

Thank you dear for liking it..β€οΈπŸ€—

I had fun while writing and discussing it..πŸ˜†

Aap sab sifarish kar do dialogue writer ke liye meri..πŸ˜†πŸ˜³

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Yeh res ka unres kab hoga??

Birthday girl with radiant eyes Sakshi pre birthday gift kaisa laga??❀️

Sravu baby I know you are busy.πŸ€—

Rimi the edit put 4 chaand n make this write up looks more beautiful with it.❀️

I want to know an looking forward to all of your reaction n feedbacks.😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Its lovely.... Too good to read... Nice job πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Its lovely.... Too good to read... Nice job πŸ€—

Thank you dear..πŸ˜³πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20
superb..... awesome update 😍😍😍
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