Kal Ho Naa Ho:DevAkshi,Haider-Dua - Page 4

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Part 3

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So Ghazal loves someone else and unlike the show, she isn’t obsessedwith Haider. Dev confronting her was nice. Finally Ghazal told Haider everything.I hope Haider’s reason is that he loves Dua. Sonakshi is falling for Dev. Song scenewas nice. Omg Dev loves someone else. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

Thanks a lot.Haider revealed to Ghazal that the reason for cancelling the wedding is Dua.

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So Ghazal loves someone else and unlike the show, she isn’t obsessedwith Haider. Dev confronting her was nice. Finally Ghazal told Haider everything.I hope Haider’s reason is that he loves Dua. Sonakshi is falling for Dev. Song scenewas nice. Omg Dev loves someone else. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Part 5

Fabulous Update

Finally Haider and ghazal broke they

engagement

Radhika is Devs doctor I guess....but Sonakshi will misunderstand him. I hope at least in this story he doesnt die and they get a happy ending.

HaiDua ki aag dono taraf barabar hai but i cant digest Ghazal being nice

Chapter 1

Nice start. I am surprised to see Kareena as Sonakshi's dadi and Latika-Manoj as her parents. Komolika is Prerna's mom. Haha. Nice to see Veer as Sonakshi's friend. Karan-Erica's pics from the web series are very nice. Veer is really a good friend. Their movie scene and childhood spot scene were nice. Sad that Kareena is taunting Laktika even after Sonakshi becoming an adult. Dua-Haider meet was nice. It's funny that Sonakshi mistook Dev as a thief. Nice to see Dev as their PG. Sonakshi didn't even ask sorry due to her frustration. Sad!

Chapter 2
Loved the episode. I love the pics you chose for Devakshi as those pics reminds me of few nice episodes of KRPKAB. Good to see Dev as a chef and surprising that he works under Latika-Manoj in their restaurant. Sonakshi doesn't even have a good impression on Dev. She is very rude to him. Dev really had a sad past but he chose to be optimistic. Dev dancing with Sonakshi's family was nice but it left her frustrated. Haha. Sonakshi hates marriage but wonder if she marry in future. Surprising that Veer and Dev get along together well which made Sonakshi possessive so she accompanies Veer to the pub. Sonakshi and Dev dance was nice. I liked Dev's advice to Dua. Dua and Haider's way of spending time was lovely.

Chapter 3

Nice chapter. Dev's conversation with Kareena and Latika-Manoj were so good. He solved their problems and reunited them. It's very nice of him. Good that Sonakshi's bad impression on Dev had been cleared and she is cordial with Dev. Surprising that Haider's marriage got fixed with Ghazal. Dev again gave a right advice to Dua. Wonder what would be Haider's reply upon Dua's proposal.

Chapter 4

Ghazal is doubting if something is there between Dua and Haider. Wonder if she find the truth. Poor Dua is heartbroken. Dev's replies are nice about love. Hope Sonakshi understand love is not as bad as she thinks. So Veer is committed to Eisha. Nice to see Reem. Their bike ride scene was nice.

Chapter 5

Surprising that Ghazal was in love with Darsh but was lacking courage to stop the wedding. So Haider was also in the same lines as of Ghazal. I wonder when Haider will propose Dua. Dev helping Ghazal confess the truth to Haider was really nice. I liked Dev telling he likes uniting lovers. Sonakshi thanking Dev was nice. Surprising that Sonakshi has started loving Dev. Devakshi dream sequence and Eisha-Veer's romantic scenes are nice. Surprising that Dev loves a girl named Radhika. Wonder who is she.

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Kal Ho Naa Ho:Promise to live a lifetime in a Heartbeat Part 6

Sonakshi bought flowers and entered Dev's room.

Sona:I will confess my love to Dev.

Suddenly her eyes fell on a photograph.Dev was with a girl in that photograph.

Dev came out of the washroom.

Dev:Hi Sonakshi...what a pleasant surprise!

Sona:Who is this girl?

Dev:My lady love.Radhika.

Sonakshi was shattered.She could not believe what she heard.

Dev:Why are flowers in your hand?

Sonakshi smiled artificially hiding her pain.

Sona:You did so much for us.A small gift from me.

She gave the flowers to him with a fake smile.Dev smiled.

Dev received them and said:That's so sweet of you.Thank you.

Sonakshi smiled and walked out.

She struggled hard to control her tears and looked out of the window.She saw a wedding baraat there.

Soni banno chan si chamke
Mathe uthe jhumkar dame
Palka uth diya ne thum thum ke
Main vari vari java
Soni banno chan si chamke
Mathe uthe jhumkar dame
Palka uth diya ne thum thum ke
Main vari vari java

She imagined herself as the bride and Dev as the bride groom.

Tu vekh tai lai aj raj ke
Apne sariyan nu
Cheti apne nahi mil de
Ja banno pave khushiyan
Te dil dariyan tu
Pave armaan sab dil de
Tu vekh tai lai aj raj ke
Apne sariyan nu
Cheti apne nahi mil de
Ja banno pave khushiyan
Te dil dariyan tu
Pave armaan sab dil de

She cried bitterly in her room.

Tum ho gham ko chupaye
Main hoon sar ko jhukaye
Tum bhi chup ho
Main bho chup hoon
Kaun kise samjhaye
Ab dooriyan itni hain to
Milna yahan kal ho naa ho
Ab dooriyan itni hain to
Milna yahan kal ho naa ho
Tu vekh tai lai aj raj ke
Apne sariyan nu
Cheti apne nahi mil de
Ja banno pave khushiyan
Te dil dariyan tu

Pave armaan sab dil de

Veer gave flowers to Eisha and said:I love you Eisha.

Eisha was shocked.

Eisha:But we are friends Veer.

Veer:Of course yes.We are good friends.But my best friend is Sonakshi.For me,you are more than a friend.You are the woman I love.

Eisha became upset.

Eisha:I am sorry Veer.I have never seen you that way.

Veer was shattered:What?

Eisha:It's not that I don't like you.I really like you.I can't imagine a life without you.I need you with me.I am confused whether we can turn into lovers.Till my confusion gets over I can't say anything Veer.

Veer became upset.

Veer:It's ok Eisha.We can continue to be friends.

Eisha was relieved.

Eisha:Thanks for understanding me Veer.You are my best buddy.

Veer smiled painfully.

Veer asked Sonakshi:Did you confess your love to Dev?You both are lucky to have each other.

Sonakshi replied painfully:I did not confess my love to Dev.Because he told me that he is committed to someone.

Veer was shocked:What?

Sonakshi:What about you Veer?

Veer:I had confessed my love to Eisha.

Sonakshi:You are very lucky Veer.

Veer:What luck?Eisha rejected my proposal saying that she is confused about our relationship. So she considers me only as a friend.

Sonakshi was shocked:What?

Veer:We both have become fools in love life Sonakshi.

They both started weeping.

Tum ho gham ko chupaye
Main hoon sar ko jhukaye
Tum bhi chup ho
Main bho chup hoon
Kaun kise samjhaye
Ab dooriyan itni hain to
Milna yahan kal ho naa ho
Ab dooriyan itni hain to
Milna yahan kal ho naa ho

Dev was smiling at Radhika.

Radhika:Stop smiling Dev.Stop pretending to be happy.

Dev became serious.

Dev:Radhika!

Radhika asked Dev:Dev,why did you lie to Sonakshi that I am your lady love?

Dev was silent.

Radhika:You love Sonakshi. Right?Then why?

Dev's eyes got filled up with tears.

Sach hai ke dil to dukha hai
Hamne magar socha hai
Dil ko hai gham kyon
Aankh hai nam kyon
Hona hi tha jo hua hai

Dev:Yes...I love Sonakshi. But I can't spoil her life. That's why I lied to her.Radhika...you are my friend too.So you know why I am doing this.Right?

Us baat ko jaane bhi do
Jiska nishaan kal ho naa ho
Har pal yahan je bhar jiyo
Jo hai sama kal ho naa ho.

(Kal ho na ho).

Radhika wept holding his hand.

Radhika:No Dev.Think positive.

Dev:Don't give me false hopes Radhika.

Radhika:No Dev.It's not like that.

Dev:Please stop this topic now.I don't want to talk about it and get upset.

Radhika nodded.

Dev met Veer.

Dev:What's up Veer?

Veer:Everything is a mess Dev.Because the girl I love is still confused about our relationship. So she prefers to be just my friend.

Dev:If she is still confused that means she is not sure about your love for her.

Make her feel your love for her.She will understand how much you love her and automatically she will fall in love with you.

Veer nodded though he was not confident.

Haider placed a necklace around Dua's neck.

Dua was surprised.

Dua:What was the need for this Haider?

Haider:When we were small i gifted you a chocolate.That day i told you that when we grow up I will gift you a necklace. That was not a mere childish promise.I really meant it and I kept my word.

Dua:I can't believe that you still remember it.

Haider:Not only this.I remember everything Dua.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Veer waited outside Eisha's office to pick her up.

Eisha came out of her office.She felt bad seeing him wait for her.

Eisha:You waited for me for hours.I am sorry for the trouble you took for me.

Veer:Waiting for you is not a trouble for me.Because I love you.I can do anything for you.

Eisha felt emotional.

Veer baked a cake on his own by listening to Dev's recipe. He gifted that cake to Eisha on her birthday.

Eisha was impressed.

Eisha:Everyone gave me costly gifts.But I value your cake the most.Because you baked it with your own hands just for me.This is my best birthday gift Veer.

Veer smiled happily.

Dev and Sonakshi decorated the restaurant to arrange a grand dinner date for Veer and Eisha.

Dev:Superb!Now the restaurant is looking so romantic for a romantic couple.

Sonakshi:But Veer and Eisha have not become a romantic couple yet.Do you think it will work out?

Dev:That's not in our hands.But we should do everything from our side to bring Veer and Eisha closer.

Sonakshi:You are right Dev.Not everyone will get the person they love.Atleast Veer should get the one he loves.

Dev became upset as he understood that Sonakshi was talking about not getting Dev as a partner in her life.

Veer and Eisha arrived.Eisha was surprised to see the decoration.

Eisha:This is so beautiful.

Eisha:You did this for me?

Veer:My friends Sonakshi and Dev arranged this on my request.

Eisha:You did this for my happiness.I am really happy.

Veer smiled.

The waiter served them food which was cooked by Dev.

Eisha was again surprised.

Eisha:Wow!These are all my favourite food items.

Veer:Yes.On my request Dev prepared them for you.

Eisha smiled.

They had the dinner.

Eisha:Thank you so much for this beautiful date Veer.You made my day special.

Veer smiled happily.

Eisha:I am lucky to have a friend like you.

Veer became dull.

He thought:Still she considers me only as a friend.

Veer told Dev in a sad tone:Still I am just a friend for Eisha.

Dev:Because you behave like a friend.Have you ever spoken romantic words to her?

Veer:No.

Dev:Then how will she understand how romantic you are for her?Let her feel your love with beautiful romantic words.

Veer nodded with a smile.

Part 6

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