Kal Ho Naa Ho:DevAkshi,Haider-Dua

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Kal Ho Naa Ho:Promise to live a lifetime in a heartbeat Part 1

I dedicate this SS to my dear friend Esha136 who requested for a story on the movie Kal ho naa ho.She suggested both DevAkshi and PraNbir.But I chose DevAkshi as I have written many PraNbir stories already.I also dedicate this to my friends Salley and Mochaqueen as they like Haider Dua.



An old lady was shouting at her daughter in law.She was Kareena.

Kareena:Because of you,my son got separated from me.

Her daughter in law Latika:How did I separate you from your son Mummiji?

Kareena:You brainwashed him and turned him against me.

Latika:No Mummiji.I have never done that.You are misunderstanding me.

Suddenly Latika's husband Manoj came.

Manoj:Latika is saying the truth.She has never brainwashed me against you.

Kareena:Wrong.After marrying Latika,you got distanced from me.

Manoj:I am irritated with you only because after marriage you are continuously taunting Latika only because she did love marriage with me.Why to blame her alone when I am also at fault?

Kareena:See how you are defending Latika and blaming me..

Their fight continued and the person who was watching it got upset.She was Manoj and Latika's daughter Sonakshi.She walked away.





Sonakshi went to meet her dearest friend Dua.Dua was dressed in a lehenga.

Sona:Why are you dressed up?

Dua:I am going to attend a wedding party.I am really excited.Because my childhood crush Haider will be there.

Sonakshi thought:Dua is really happy.I should not make her upset by telling my family problems.

Sona:That's nice.You enjoy.Bye!

Dua:Bye!

After getting out of her house Sonakshi rang up someone.

Sona:I want to meet you soon.






Sonakshi took her car and went somehere.Another car reached there.A guy came out of the car and Sonakshi too got out of her car.

Sona:Veer!

Veer:What happened Sonakshi?

Sonakshi was quiet.

Veer:You are upset because your dadi and your parents had a fight.Right?

Sona:You understand me and my life and problems so well.

Veer:I am your best friend.I have to..

Sonakshi smiled.But within seconds she became upset again.

Sona:Since childhood I have been witnessing these fights.I am fed up.

Sonakshi's eyes were full of tears.Veer wiped her tears.

Veer:I don't want my best friend to cry.Because it kills her beauty.

She smiled.





Dua collided with a guy at the wedding party.

He:I am sorry.

Dua looked at his face.Her face blossomed.

Dua:You did not recognize me?

He was confused.

He:Do you know me?

Dua:Hey Haider!It's me.Your childhood friend Dua.

Haider was surprised.

Haider:Dua!What a surprise!How did you recognize me?

Dua smiled.

Dua:Your face has not changed at all.It's just that your body has grown.

They both laughed.

Haider:Anyways I am very happy to see you after a long time.

Dua blushed looking at him deeply:Me too.

Haider:Let us keep in touch.

Dua got excited.

Dua:Sure!

They exchanged their phone numbers.





Veer took Sonakshi for a fun car drive.

Veer took Sonakshi to a beautiful place.They sat there.

Veer:I brought you to your favourite place.

Sonakshi smiled.

Sona:This is my favourite place because since childhood we have been spending a lot of time here.

Veer smiled.

Veer took Sonakshi to a cinema theatre to watch a movie.

Veer:Let's enjoy this movie.You will forget all your pain.

Sonakshi smiled.

Sona:You know how to cheer me up.

Veer:After all I am your best friend.

She smiled.



Veer was making pots.Sonakshi too joined him and had fun.

Sonakshi went to the top floor of her house.She was shocked and scared to see a stranger there.

Sona:Thief!

He was shocked:What?Why are you calling me a thief?

Sona:Then what else to call you?You are a thief who entered my house without my permission.

Hearing the noise Manoj and Latika came.

Manoj:What happened?

Sona:Dad....see a thief has entered our house.

Manoj and Latika laughed.

Latika:This is not a thief.He is Dev.He is our paying guest.

Sonakshi was surprised and embarrassed.

Sona:What?

Dev:Yes.I am not a thief.

Sonakshi put an attitude and said:Whatever I don't care.In this situation anyone will react like me seeing a stranger.

Manoj:Still you please say sorry to him beta.

Sona:I did not call him a thief purposefully. Then why should I apologize?And I belong to a family where the word 'sorry' doesn't exist.My parents did not apologize to dadi for marrying against her wish.Dadi did not apologize for taunting my parents for years for marrying against her wish.

Manoj and Latika felt embarrassed as Sonakshi talked like this in front of Dev.Without bothering that Sonakshi walked away.The embarrassed Manoj and Latika said:Sorry on behalf of our daughter.

Dev:It's ok.I just took it as a joke.

They smiled.


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Part 1


Fantastic Update

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I remembered yrkkh from first scene. Akshara’s MIL was also suchpartially, she couldn’t accept romance and Kareena can’t accept love marriage. Iforgot who r Devakshi, recalled after reading this. Surprising that Haider is Dua’schildhood crush just like Ibadat’s childhood crush is Subhan. Sona and Veer looksgreat together. Dua Haider moment was cute. Sona Veer moments were nice. Sonakshiis right, sorry doesn’t exist in their family. Perfect pics. Waiting for next.

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I am so happy that you started another story...i was missing your stories and just thinking about you todaysmiley19

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Interesting start dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Part 1

lovely update... well written


thanks for the pm

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Why is only the woman to blame when two people loved each other and got married?

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Veer and Sonakshi have a sweet bond. She can easily share her problems with him.

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Thank you so much for the lovely comments





Kal Ho Naa Ho:Promise to live a lifetime in a Heartbeat Part 2

Thank you so much my dear friend ingenuity_phoenix for the beautiful cover pages.


Sonakshi went to the restaurant run by her parents.She was shocked to see Dev as a chef cooking there.

Sona:How come you are here?

Dev:I am the new chef here.

Sonakshi could not believe it.

Sonakshi:How is it possible?

Latika:Sorry Sona.I forgot to tell you that.Actually Dev came here to work in our restaurant.Since he did not get any accommodation easily only we let him stay in our house as the paying guest.

Sonakshi was stunned.

Sona:How can you just appoint him as the new chef mom?He may ruin the reputation of our restaurant.

Latika:Do you think that we will appoint anyone without checking his talent?His recipes are great.His cooking is fabulous.

Dev brought a plate of food and kept it on the table near her.

Dev:Taste and see Sonakshiji.This is my new dish.

Sona:Our restaurant is not for experimenting new recipes.We have a good name here.You know that?

Dev:But without taking risk how can we move forward?Anyways please taste and see.

Sona tasted it and got surprised.

Sona:It's ok.I mean...it tastes good.

Dev and Latika smiled.


When the waiter served the new dish of Dev,yhe customers praised it.Sonakshi was surprised.


Sonakshi told Dua and Veer about Dev.

They both giggled..

Veer:It seems that Dev is an interesting character.

Sonakshi:What interesting character?I find him boring.

Dua:But like Veer said i also feel that he is interesting.

Sonakshi got irritated.

Sona:Instead of finding Dev interesting you take care of your love life.

Dua asked her in a teasing manner:Are you already feeling jealous?

Veer and Dua laughed.

Sonakshi got angry.

Sona:Shut up.

Veer:Come on Sonakshi...don't get angry.

Sonakshi kept silent.

Dua changed the topic.

Dua:Anyways...I met Haider.He looks so handsome now.Now I like him more.

Sonakshi and Veer smiled.


Manoj told Sonakshi:There is a good marriage proposal for you.

Sona got irritated and said:Oh please...I am not interested in marriage.

Latika:Why are you getting angry Sona?

Sonakshi:Because I don't want to get married.

Kareena:Why beta?You need to get married at the right age.

Sona:Why dadi?After marriage i will have time only to fight with my inlaws and my children will live in grief as they will grow up watching it.That's what i have been seeing since my childhood days.So I am not interested to get married.

Manoj,Latika and Kareena became dull.Dev was watching it.

Kareena stared at Latika:Because of you our family became like this.Because of you,my grand daughter became like this.

Latika:Mummij...you are the one who started the fight first.

Manoj:Yes mom.You never forgave us.You targeted Latika always.

Sona:For heaven sake you guys please stop it.

Sonakshi walked away angrily.




Sonakshi was sitting with a gloomy face.

Dev went near her.

Dev:Don't worry.All your family problems will get over.

Sonakshi stared at him.

Sona:It's my family.Whether I have family problems or not why do you care?Leave me alone.

Dev:I understand your mental state.Because I am from a broken family.I grew up watching my parents fight.One day they got separated and married someone else.I cried a lot.Because I became all alone.Now I don't even have parents as they considered me as an obstacle in their married life with their new partners.I was dumped in an orphanage.

Sonakshi was shocked.

Dev:But your family loves you.Your family problems are actually small.Be happy that compared to others you have a happy family.

Sonakshi ignored his words.

Sona:Leave me alone.

Dev:I will leave.But before that you smile.Because anger does not suit your pretty face as you are a pretty woman.

Sonakshi stared at him.

Sona:I will not smile.

Dev:Ok..fine.

Suddenly Dev started singing and dancing.


Kaun hai woh anjaani
Use jitna dekhon..
Ytna sochon..
Kya use main keh doon..

Maine jise abhi abhi dekha hai
Kaun hai woh anjaani
Woh hai koi kali ya koi kiran
Ya hai koi kahani
Use jitna dekhon utna sochon
Kya use main keh doon
Pretty woman
Hey.. pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Tum bhi kaho naa pretty woman



Maine jise abhi abhi dekha hai
Kaun hai woh anjaani
Woh hai koi kali ya koi kiran
Ya hai koi kahani
Use jitna dekhon utna sochon
Kya use main keh doon
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Tum bhi kaho naa pretty woman



Manoj, Latika and Kareena also danced with Dev.


Yo pretty woman
Listen up girl when u feel this way
Don
t u see the sunshine
Coming out today
You got to feel it right
Just like day agter night
Dont let the sunshine
Out of your sight
Cause i can feel you
Can you feel it
When i say that
I can feel you here
Can u feel me
When I say that I am crazy about you
Pretty woman

Sone ka rang hai
Sheeshe ka ang hai
Jo dekhe dang hai kya kahon
Hairaan main bhi hoon
Yeh kya andaaz hai
Itna kyun naaz hai
Ismein kya raaz hain kya kahoon



Ho woh toh pal mein khush hai pal mein khafa
Badle woh rang har ghadi
Par jo bhi dekhoon roop uska
Lagti hai hai pyaari badi
Use jitna dekhon utna sochon
Kya use main keh doon
Pretty woman..
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Tum bhi kaho naa pretty woman


Sonakshi was angry seeing her family dancing with Dev.



Ho aankhon mein hai nasha
Zulphon mein hai ghata
Pehle hamne ada yeh haseen
Dekhi na thi kahin
Dekhi jo yeh pari
Masti dil mein bhari
Hai yeh jadogari ya nahi
Ho na tum janu kya hain naam na janu main pata
Par itna hai maine jana
Jise dekhle ek nazar bhar ke
Usko karde woh deewana
Use jitna dekhon utna sochon
Kya use main keh doon

Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Tum bhi kaho naa pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Dekho dekho na pretty woman
Pretty woman
Tum bhi kaho naa pretty woman(Kal ho naa ho).

Sonakshi:Wow!You have impressed my whole family.But not me.

Dev:That's fine.Because I did not sing to impress you,but the pretty women like your dadi and mom.

Kareena and Latika smiled.Sonakshi got irritated and walked away.





Sonakshi came back home.

She could not believe her eyes as Veer and Dev were chatting and laughing.

Sona:How is it possible?You both know each other?

Dev:Yes.

Sona:But how?

Dev:2 hours back we met each other.

Sona:What?

Veer:Ya.I came here to see you and your family.But I met Dev accidentally. Within a few minutes we got connected with each other.Because Dev is so friendly.

Sonakshi was stunned.

Sonakshi:Within some minutes you both became friends?

Dev:Yes.Why not?Relationships can be made or broken within a few seconds.

Veer:We have even planned to go to the pub.

Sonakshi was shocked.

Sona:What?No Veer.

Dev:Why can't Veer come with me to the pub?

Sona:Because I don't like it.

Veer:But why Sonakshi?

Sona:You can't go out with a stranger.

Veer:He is not a stranger Sonakshi. He is my dearest buddy now.

Sona:But I can't trust him and leave you alone with him.So I will accompany you both to the pub.

Veer and Dev were surprised.

Veer:You used to hate coming to the pub.But now...

Sona:I am coming to protect you.

Dev:Anyways welcome to the pub Sonakshi.

Sonakshi got irritated.




The trio went to the pub.

Dev and Veer were dancing.

Sonakshi was looking at them in an irritating manner.

Dev went near her and said:Can I tell you a truth?You are very boring.Otherwise why will you not dance while all are dancing here?

Sonakshi got irritated.

Sona:How dare you say that I am boring?I will show you that I can dance.

Sonakshi started dancing with Veer.Dev also joined them.


Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya
Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Kaun mile hai kisko
It’s the time to disco
Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya
Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Kaun mile dekho kisko
It’s the time to disco


Balkhata hai badan aisi jo taal hai
Saanson mein chalti hai aandhiyaan
Behkata hai yeh maan ab to yeh haal hai
Masti mein khoye hai hum yahan
Tum bhi khoke mast hoke
Koi toke to khul ke kaho


It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Keh do milo jis jisko
It’s the time to disco

Josh mein naachti rangeen shaam hai
Bin piye jhoomta hais ama
Hosh ka ab yahan bolo kya kaam hai
Tez hai dhadkane dil javan
Yuh hi reh hai theek hai na
Aur hai kehna to khul ke kaho
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Samjho zara tum isko
It’s the time to disco

Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya
Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Kaun mile dekho kisko
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
It’s the time to disco
Kaun mile dekho kisko
It’s the time to disco.(Kal ho naa ho).

Sonakshi smiled after dancing.

Sona:I really enjoyed dancing.

Veer smiled.

Dev said:In the first meeting I found you irritated and frustrated.Now you smiled from the bottom of your heart.You look nice while dancing with a smile.

Unknowingly Sonakshi smiled.But she hid her smile.






Dua and Sonakshi were talking.

Dua:I met Haider.But I am confused how to enter his heart.

Sonakshi:Falling in love is waste of time.So don't waste time on that.

Suddenly Dev came near them saying:Falling in love is a beautiful feeling.So go ahead Dua.

Dua smiled.

Sona:Why are you always following me Dev?

Dua:So you are Dev?

Dev:Yes.

Dua:Hi...I am Dua;Sonakshi's friend.

Sona:Why are you coming in between us?

Dev:I did not come in between both of you.I did not follow you also.I just came back.Accidentally I heard you both talk.

Dev looked at Dua.

Dev:If you want to enter anyone's heart spend time with him.

Dua:That's a good idea.I will.

Dev smiled.Sonakshi did not care.





Dua rang up Haider.

Dua:Hi Haider..

Haider:Hi Dua..

Dua:I was thinking that we can go out together.

After all we met after many years.

Haider:That's a good idea.Since I was staying abroad for many years I am also excited to explore this place.

(Thank you for the edit Salley).

She smiled.

Haider and Dua stood in front of a school building.

Dua:This is the place where our childhood friendship blossomed.

Haider:Yes.We have lots of beautiful memories.

Dua:So i am your beautiful memory?

Haider:You were my beautiful memory.Not anymore.Because now you are not a memory,but a reality.

Dua smiled.

Dua:When you were abroad did you think of me?

Haider:Whenever i thought of India,you came into my mind as you are the most special memory regarding India.

Dua blushed.

Haider and Dua took a photograph in front of the school.

Haider and Dua went to Manoj-Latika's restaurant. Dua imagined Haider and her feeding food to each other.

They had food together and chatted a lot.Dev smiled seeing it.He showed thumbs up to Dua.

Dua smiled.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sona is so arrogant but still Dev has gone flat in her lovesmiley36

So Dev is Aman here and Sona is Naina....will Dev diesmiley19

I am looking fwd to see how HaiDua story goes

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