OS: Echoes of the Diwali Night - Page 3

Originally posted by: chavvi16

yipeee me a sizzler now
and just what a perfect story to begin it with
wow that sure was something
i just love your take on all those moments that had been painful for arhi
he didnt realsie how much he had hurt khushi right
and when he did he couldnt feel more worse as he had made her doubt herself
and all this because he was trying to keep his attraction hidden from her
well dont think that worked and you managed to make her doubt herself
thankfully he managed to let her know that he had always loved her and that those times when he was attracted towards her she didnt really do anything wrong to warranty what he said
am glad they sorted that out too
so whats next now

😳...lovely nd full of kisses!!!!! khushi finally overcums her fears nd kisses him!!!! 😃...wish ur oneshots were considered by d writers of ipkknd..they would be much more popular [8->[

this was beautiful piece rima

Wow
This is a brilliant piece of writing
Loved this os

That was just so wonderful.. She made him realize how hurt she was and he knows too that he hurt her badly..🥺

Beautiful. Wish the tv writers took ideas from our talented forum. 😛