Burning In Your Love ~~ VirMan SS CHAP 2 PG 16 ~~ 22 dec - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Update it so some of the Confusion would be clear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

virat tanvi manvi angle loved it very much do continue soon😊 are thy sisters😉



Hey i cant reveal anything... Sorry 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting dear...waiting 4 ur update...loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Burning In Your Love
~~ Uncontrollable Emotions ~~
life... at times its simple and at times so complicated that we cant even imagine. it just takes one moment and BAMM... everything changes... sometimes for the good and sometimes for the bad. life was always a fairy take for virat... he got what he wanted until everything changed. he was a sort of a person who was greatful to god and loved his life... he had no regrets... no regrets at all... life was just too perfect... but then there came a time, when things went againsst him and may be we can say in her favour.
at present, virat pretended that his life was just the same. the same fairy tale with its perfection... but who knew it was dark... dark within his heart... he wasnt happy... he cant be happy when the only source of his happiness killed him and gave him a reason to regret. manvi gave him this pain... this unbearable pain... she was the cause of the fire that was burning him every minute... it was her love which was burning him... he was burning in her love... her revenge...
Mere Dil Mein Aaj Kyaa Hai
Tuu Kahe To Main Bataa Duun
Terii Zulf Phir Savaaruun
Terii Mang Phir Sajaa Duun
Mere Dil Mein ...
virat moved out of the conference hall and made his way to tha parking lot. he was too busy in himself until he heard some sounds... those werent just normal sounds, it was sound of someone moaning. he looked from the corner of his eyes and found a couple hungrily making out n the parking lot. he immediately looked away and made his way to his car and zoomed off from there.
after driving for about an hour, he apllied the brake and the car stopped with a jerk. he held the stearing wheel firmly and resting his head against it. he couldnt forget the scene he witnessed in the parking lot because it reminded him of something, he thought he has already forgptten. that love, passion, intimacy was pulling him again towards his past... towards manvi... towards the moments which were unfortunately the best moments of his life.
*** flashback ***
virat : what happened...??? why did you come back sweetheart...??
virat went and hugged tanvi, the love of his life.
virat : bolo na baby... tanuuu... (kissing her neck)
tanvi : leave...
virat : jaanu whats wrong...?? tell me tanuu...
tanvi : i dont like such parties... (her body relaxing and adjusting in his arms)
virat felt something wrong and turned tanvi around. looking at her face and again... again he was spell bound... she had the power to mesmerise him even with a single look of hers.
virat : did anyone say something...???
tanvi looked down and a tear rolled down her cheek which hurted virat in the most painful way eevr. it broke his heart.
virat : tanviii... look at me... jaan...
tanvi : i know... i know im not good enough to be with you... im not... (she bursted into tears)
virat : who said it...???
tanvi continued crying and she tried to get away from virat.
virat : tanvi... who said it...??? kisne bola baby...???
tanvi : mujhe jaana hai... hostel... its late...
virat : i dont want excuses tanvi... i dont...
tanvi : i need to go...
tanvi slowly moved away from virat and looking down at her feets, took a step which would take her away from him. but virat couldnt take it... how can she give importance to everyone else except him... he and his love should be of utmost importance to her, not the nossy people who have nothing interesting in their life. virat pulled tanvi with a jerk and hugged her tightly.
virat : i love you... love you soo much...
tanvi : i dont belong to your society... (between her sobs)
virat : then im not as pure hearted as you are... im not an angel like you... so that means i cannot love you...
Mujhe Devataa Banaakar, Terii Chaahaton Ne Puujaa - (2)
Meraa Pyaar Kah Rahaa Hai,
Main Tujhe Khudaa Banaa Duun
Terii Zulf Phir ...
tanvi looked at virat after leaning a little backward so that she can see his face.
virat : you trust me...??
tanvi : hmm...
virat : fir... why did you listen to those pinheads...??? its about you, me and our love... (wiping her tears with his thumb)
tanvi : pakka...??
virat : haan baba i swear to god... 100% wala pakka meri topper... (touching her nose with his)
tanvi : okk...
tanvi again hugged virat and it elated virat. it gave him the pleasure which nothing gave him... it was that pleasant feeling of holding your world in your arms.
virat : waise tumne party kharab kar di tanuuu... (teasing her)
tanvi : you wanted to dance with those girls na... their short dresses excited you... hai na...??? (again getting emotional)
virat : no... i get turned on only by you... ye anarkali suit na mujhe -
tanvi : virat...
virat : okk i was just trying to light your mood... fir se rulane ka plan nahi tha mera... sorry jaanu...
tanvi : its okk... but am i beautiful...???
virat : very... you are the most beautiful girl on earth and next will be -
tanvi held a fistful of his shirt and with great difficulty asked " next will be... "
virat : forget it... you wont be able to hear that...
tanvi : tell me no...
virat : tanvi junior...
a blush crept on tanvi's face and she hided her face in his chest. he could feel her cheeks turning pink due to embarassment and he loved when she used to get shy on little little things. he loved when his heart understood even the words which she didnt speak.

soon things started getting awkward... the passion was increasing more and more... it was becoming difficult to control the desires which were getting awakened... it was becoming difficult to stop the heat which was radiating from their bodies.

Koi Dhuundhne Bhii Aae, To Hamein Naa
Dhuundh Paae - (2)
Tuu Mujhe Kahin Chhupaa De,
Main Tujhe Kahiin Chhupaa Duun
Terii Zulf Phir ...
virat didnt want to take a step which would make tanvi uncomfortable but today after being in a relationship with her for around 7 months, was forcing him to take a step further. he wanted the girl he loved, admired and desired.
virat : tanvi...
tanvi understood his unsaid words and separated herself from him and nervously straightened her dupatta and took steps towards the door.
tanvi : mujhe drop kar do please...

virat stood there mentally scolding himself for being desperate to touch her and on listening to tanvi, moved out of the room slowly. tanvi followed virat and got into the car. virat started driving towards her hostel and in the mid way he stopped the car. tanvi didnt notice which place was it and thought that they reached her hostel, she thanked him still playing with the corner of her dupatta.
tanvi : thank you... bye...
virat : jaana jaroori hai kya...???
tanvi : m.. matlab..
virat : matlab... wo..
virat turned his face towards tanvi and held her hand in his. she looked in his eyes and she somewhat understood what he was saying... the blush of her cheeks told him so. his hands made way to her shoulders and she closed her eyes. she imagined him touching her but today it was actually happening and she sighed contentedly before realising that it wasnt her imagination. with a squeal, she pulled away only to have strong fingers tighten their grip and pull her back.
tanvi : vi.. virat...
virat : tanvi... i need you...
his hands massaged her shoulders and then ran up and down her arms. this made her heart to beat at a supersonic speed and her muscles tensed...
virat : i.. i know this is awkward but... but try to relax...

tanvi nodded but her inner self thought that he got to be kidding. relax...??? how is she supposed to relax when this will be her first time... the first time real hands would be touching her that way... the first time she would be shedding her inhibitions... the first time she would be giving herself...

virat : tanvi...

tanvi again closed her eyes and waited for him to make the first move. she felt him lean close to her, his breath fanning on her skin, giving her goosebumps. she felt his lips slightly touching hers and his hands wrapped around her petite figure. expertly his lips teased and tasted her... before she knew, she opened her mouth and his toungue slipped inside gently stroking hers. this was totally a new experience for her and there was a strange quiver of excitement in her stomach... as if thousands of butterflies were ancing in her stomach creating a very different sensation. unknowingly, she was turning him on in a way nothing did and stroking a fire within him.
Mere Baazuon Me Aakar, Teraa Dard Chain Paae (2)
Tere kesuon Me Chhupakar,
Main Jahaan Ke Gam Bhulaa Duun
Terii Zulf Phir ...
involuntarily, tanvi found herself responding, gripping his biceps as he moved his hands up and down her back, drawing her closer and closer. she moaned against his mouth and tried to pull back when he pulled her even more close and broke the kiss. he placed butterfly kisses on her neck and nipped her delicate skin making her more and more shy and excited at the same time until she realised something.
tanvi : st.. stop... v...virattt...
virat stopped and looked at tanvi who had tears forming in her eyes.
tanvi : this is not right... this is not right...
virat : tanvi... i love you baby...
tanvi : i also love you but... this is wrong... this is wrong virat...

tanvi got off the car with tears in her eyes and it scared virat. he cant lose her... yes he rejected her once and now her going away from him like this, made him feel rejected. she cannot go like this...
virat getting out of the car, stood in front of tanvi.
virat : i love you... why dont you understand...???
tanvi : im not like you... humare yahan nahi hota aisa...
virat : aisa matlab...??? im not using you or something... i love you idiot...
tanvi : mujhse nahi hoga ye sab...
virat : i wont cross my line... i promise... is that okkk now...??? tanvii...
tanvi : hmm... im sorry ke maine...
virat : its okk... come i will drop you...
tanvi : okkk...
*** flashback ends***
constant blowing of the horn brought him out of his past and virat started the car. he gave side to the car behind him and parked the car in a corner. the car behind him crossed his car and that was it. virat looked at the face which was the cause of his destruction. he can never fail to recognise her... how can he fail to recognise manvi... he followed the car and overtook it and stopped in front of her car.
manvi cursed her fate the moment she saw virat coming out of his car. he hasnt changed even a bit... he was still the same... she kept looking at him until he came and knocked on the window of her car.
virat : come out...
manvi ignored him and looked straight.
virat : i said come out... come out right now...
manvi came out of the car and before she could do anything, she was pinned against the car.
manvi : leave me... what are you doing...???
virat : why are you doing this to me...??? whyyy...???? whyyy manvi...???
manvi : listen just behave yourself... dont force me to lodge a complaint against you...
virat : main kahan complaint lodge karwaun... tell me god damn it... speak up you bitch...
manvi : control your tongue... dare you abuse me...
virat : hehe... abhi se darr gayi... see i found you today...
manvi : im not scared of you... get your fact right... leave me nooww...
.
virat pushed manvi harshly towards the car and she hissed in pain. he leaned close to her and she turned her head away.

virat : dont worry i would prefer to die rather than coming close to you or for that matter touching you...
saying this he zoomed off in his car leaving manvi who was least affected by all this and rubbing her arms, got into her car to go the place where she belongs to.
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so thats it... second chapter...!!!
i got around 30 likes...
guys like and comment and encourage me to update next part, and agar u are not interested, tab bhi bta do guys... i wont mind... promise 😳
lots of love
naina
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virman_superhit

Oohhh... U r back with a new ff ... Woowww... How do u get such awesome ideas... 😊😊👏.. I should start writing scripts.. For movies.. 😉😉.. Loved Ur start and the first chapter..
awww... thank u soo very much... 😃 😃 😃 it really means a lot... n i cant tell from where i get ideas 😉

So Virat hates Maanvi and loves Tanvi... Hmmm... I have a feeling that Tanvi looks like Maanvi... 😆😆.. Which might b wrong.. Just a that.. Haha... 😆😆

woh toh just for the time being secret hai... shhh

But m loving it.. So many secrets and so many questions in mind making it all the more interesting... 😉😉.. When u wrote.Tanvi even I thot it was a mistake.. But this concept is more interesting... Wanna know y he hates Mannu so much and where is she... 😊😉😉

stay tuned n u will get many shockers... hahaha

Loving it and waiting for the next one.. Plzzz.. Update soon... Specially DMG.. 😆😆..

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update how tanvi and manvi related each other
why he hate manvi so much update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. I am still confused. Tanvi comes in the past and Manvi is in the present but how are they related.Hope it will be cleared in upcoming updates.Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update
confuse in btw tanvi nd manvi
plz jaldi jaldi confusion dur karo na
thanx 4 pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
I'm confused between this tanvi and manvi
y he hate manvi ?? And where is tanvi
how they both are related
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ u hav written it beautifully 👏👏👏👏 so tanvi was in luv with virat n he had rejected her once before 2 but after sum tym he 2 fell in luv with her ( i don't think so may b it was just attraction d status 4rm he belongs he hadn't seen sum1 like her simple n beautiful at d tym so he thought wht he feel 2ward her is luv but if he luv her he would hav understand her n not make her understand dat wht he wants 4rm her dat wht i think may b i m wrong or did his family separate dem just 4 dere status or sum misunderstanding make dem apart ) n now virat's luv maanvi he is trying his best 2 remind himself dat he hates her wht she had done with him is just her revenge she played with his emotions n she doesn't regret 4 doing sumthing like dat ( maanvi n tanvi hav a relation dats confirm may b sis or frnds even dere name r same only difference is t n m hopes shakalein different ho otherwise mai tu pori story predict kr chuki hon mai b abhi nhi btaongi 😉😉😉😉😉 )

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