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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jiwan08

Thanks for the feedback guys! Keep the comments coming!!

Glad you liked it. I'm working on part 2 but here's a small snippet.

As the stars fought to be seen through the unnatural light emitted by the city, she fought to keep past memories from resurfacing again. Her past had however left scars deeper and seemingly more destructive than the burning of the distant stars themselves.

I should have the next part up later today.

Jiwan

can't wait to read the update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply great, looking forward tothe next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice dear. do pm me? plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wow very nice
i don't watch this show but my frnd told me about the characters and story
it's a first story i m reading on ashlok and its nice, actually very very nice
cont soon and pm me and thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting, thank you it is exactly what I need on a sunday morning to accompany my cup of tea. Looking forward to the rest.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes, please update, very nice start

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