Burning In Your Love ~~ VirMan SS CHAP 2 PG 16 ~~ 22 dec - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Again u forget to pm me 😭
Abt choose track...
I m sooo confused...
Actully i wanted it in ur style...
Unpredictable and intrsting...
Plzzz pm me Naina whenevet u updated 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
combo of both will be fun...but i am ok with whatever u choose naina ji...😉😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63


will be updating chapter 1 today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: naina927



<font size="5"> will be updating chapter 1 today... </font>



WOWWW...NAINA G.. 😃 😃
WAITINGGG DEA... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Burning In Your Love
~~ Confession ~~
bheegi bheegi raaton...
meethi meethi baaton mein...
aisi barsaaton mein...
kaisa lagta hai...???
hearing the harmony of this romantic song played on the radio, someone applied the brake and the car stopped with a screeching sound. listening to this song, forced his mind to take a flight to the time when he and she were together... he hated himself whenever he went on that track back and again in time... he came out of the car and broke the beer bottle throwing it on the road.
i hate you... i hate you manvi...
he screamed his lungs out... he wanted this world to know that he hates her... after what she did to him, he hates her... he wants this land and sky to understand for once and for all; that he is no longer in love with that heartless girl... he does not feel anything for her now... she is dead for him... her presence disgusts him...
few raindrops fell on him... instead of rejuvenating him, it reminded him of her... she loved rains... she used to dance like a peacock whenever it rained... a fabulous dancer she was... so graceful and delicate...
you are no one... no one manvi... you mean nothing to me... i cant love you... virat vadera hates you... i hate you from the bottom of my heart...
he screamed it out to the whole world... donno he wanted the world to know it or he was just trying to remind himself this bitter reality...
unwillingly his mind and heart started off to that journey again... the journey of his unsuccessful love... the journey of his limitless yet incomplete love... the journey of his emotions, his love, his care but who knew it was a journey of revenge and hatred for someone else... love lost in front of hatred... her hatred won and his love lost... her revenge was successful and his love was unsuccessful...
aisa lagta hai tum banke badal
mere badan ko bighoge ke mujhe
ched rahe ho, ched rahe ho...
she was dancing in the rain enjoying herself unaware of the pair of eyes watching her... she was smiling feeling those raindrops touching her skin... she was splashing the water droplets after collecting them in her palm... she was turning around and jumping like a kid...
ambar khele holi ui maa...
bheegi mori choli, hamjoli hamjoli...
he was lost in her beauty and her innocence... his eyes were struck on her angelic face and there was no way he noticed her perfect curves which were visible due to the wet clothes that were hugging her body...
o paani ke iss rele mein...
sawan ke iss mele mein...
chhat pe akele mein...
kaisa lagta hai...??
he was falling for her... falling for her irrevocably... she was pulling him towards her like a magnet and the best part was she was not aware of it...

aisa lagta hai tum banke ghata...
apne sajan ko bhigo ke khel
khel rahi ho,khel rahi ho...
virat : ravishing... (he whispered still lost in her)

aisa lagta hai tum banke badal
mere badan ko bhigo ke mujhe
ched rahe ho, ched rahe ho...
she was dancing and enacting as if she was not alone there... she has her dream man with her... dancing with her in this rain...
barkha se bacha loon...
tujhe seene se lga loon...
aa chupa loon, aa chupa loon...
virat wanted to hold her in his arms and save her from this world... he wanted to cherish her, love her and pamper her... he wanted to accept her one sided love... he wanted to belong to her... he wanted her to be his...
virat didnt knew when he started moving towards her... he got out of his car and all he could see was her... he wondered how he failed to accept her and her love... he dont know when she became more than a friend to him... he himself told her once that he is not interested in her and now... now all he could see is this divine beauty...
dil ne pukara dekho...
rut ka isshara dekho...
uff ye nazaro dekho...
kaisa lagta hai...???
he stood behind her but still she didnt seem to notice and spinned joyfully. she collided with his body and was about to lose her balance when he saved her with his protective arms wrapped around her. they have hugged many times but never did he felt so attracted to her... he was drinking her beauty from his eyes and wanted to dry her face with his lips. a strange kind of thirst was making him go insane...
she got shy and tried to get herself out of his grip... in this process he was again about to lose her balance, she closed her eyes and then regained her balance. she stepped away from him when something pulled her back.
aisa lagta hai kuch ho jaega...
mast pawan ke ye jhoke saiyaan
dekh rahe ho, dekh rahe ho...
se turned around and found that her dupatta got stuck in his wrist watch. she again went close to him and slowly forwarded her hand to untangle the dupaata from his wrist watch when he placed his hand on hers and stopped her nodding his head in negative. her heartbeat raced and she was breathing heavily... she wanted to hide herself from his gaze.
virat : i love you Tanvi...
she stared at him unbelievingly... never did she thought that anything like this would ever happen now... now when he himself told her that he has no such romantic feelings for her...
virat : yes i do... do you still love me...???
she nodded her head and hugged him. he happily hugged her back... both got what they wanted...
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so thats it... curtain raiser chapter...!!!
i really hope u guys like it...
encourage me to update next part, so that some of the confusion gets cleared... 😳
lots of love
naina
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Awesome updt...but its Tanvi ot Manvi...r u sure there is no spell mistake...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Awesome updt...but its Tanvi ot Manvi...r u sure there is no spell mistake...cont soon



No spelling mistake 😉
Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
AWSM START NAINA...
FEEL SAD FO.R VIRAT...
BT ITS ONE SIDED VIEW...
CANT SAY WRNG TO MANVI...WDOUT WHOLE VIEW...
TANVI...IS ITS ALSO ONE OF MANVI'S TRICK OF REVANGE.?????
ASALWAYS SOOO MANY QUESTION..hai na...
EGRLY WAITING FOR WHOLE STORY...
UODATE SOON DEAR...
KEEP ROCKING... 👏 👏 👏
THANKS ALOT FOR PM DEA...
Edited by GOOGLU - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

AWSM START NAINA...
FEEL SAD FO.R VIRAT...
BT ITS ONE SIDED VIEW...
CANT SAY WRNG TO MANVI...WDOUT WHOLE VIEW...
TANVI...IS ITS ALSO ONE OF MANVI'S TRICK OF REVANGE.?????
ASALWAYS SOOO MANY QUESTION..hai na...
EGRLY WAITING FOR WHOLE STORY...
UODATE SOON DEAR...
KEEP ROCKING... 👏 👏 👏
THANKS ALOT FOR PM DEA...



thank u soo much...
Yeah u r right...
Stay tuned...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: naina927



No spelling mistake 😉
Thank u 😊

o.k then i think its very very intresting

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