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Posted: 12 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

Life would have been easy if Newton's third law was applicable each and every time we said "I love you"

You'll meet a lover that offers you the lowest price for your heart. And you'll take it. Because you don't say no to love. Because you think that any love, no matter how shallow and merciless it is better than no love at all.

And it's sad, and pitiful and a lie.

Jis afsaane ko anjaam tak laana na ho mumkin... Usse ek khoobsoorat mo'd dekar, chho'd dena behtar hota hai...

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Excellent excellent chapter Z!

I love this Khushi, she finally has what she has dreamt and wanted her entire life but to see her maturity and depth of her love for him and her self respect has left me in awe of her this update, she she wants him completely, physically and emotionally but not if some thing is missing ...the one vital ingredient for happiness and togetherness...Love!

My heart breaks for her sitting on that bench...words are required at times and this was one of those times...

The feeling of happiness and relief on knowing that he does not love Payal, the joy is evident!

To know the truth and knowing it is something that is not what you want to hear but still be brave enough to want to hear it is brave and shows her strength ...she may have been assertive and clear in her want for him but she is smart and intuitive enough to realise his feelings. She knows the cost of their happiness with a forced relationship is not worth it at all, it makes for an unstable foundation for any relationship to stand on or grow from.

I loved his honesty, to be able to answer her must have been as hard for him but I love that he does...I love how he has been trying to be her 'boyfriend' and in theory he has done a commendable job which she appreciates...but then there was something obvious staring at them which they know had to be addressed.

He knows she deserves the truth having finally understood the intensity of her feelings for him. He knows she truly loves him and even though he tries for her to overcome what he thinks or hopes is a passing phase for her by encouraging her to meet more people and behave more like someone of her own age and by making her embrace her own identity, her appearance and her confidence !

I love her reaction when someone expresses interest in her and her reaction. Just so simple and a matter of fact!

It is sad that this she has not been able to get him to love her as of now...but one lives in hope...even while she is in pain, her heart breaking she thinks of how this decision will affect nani and wants to keep her away from the truth.

This chapter has been a turning point and I have full faith that going forward you will do full justice to the story and them...this was an outstanding chapter, bringing out the characteristics of your Arnav and Khushi beautifully...

To me, I find her she has been etched so naturally ..what she did was not easy, but she did. She deserves respect! I love that she respects her own love for him not wanting it any cost just to have him...she wants him but with love.

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

What a chapter Z di!

Although right now there are a million things going on in my mind, but one thing that i actually wanna share is : i Find Arnav and Khushi quite similar, emotionally! I've said this before i guess, that Love for both of them had grown out of care, trust and support at the time of need!

But difference in their cases has been of time and growth! For Khushi, it was respect, then admiration then attraction .. Then love! Obviously she was Young and thats why these feelings are in this order.. Yet these define the depth of her Love!

While for Arnav - Payal it was care, trust and attraction and everything more.. But did it grow? - i guess not!

True that Arnav doesn't love Payal anymore, but once bitten is twice shy! Yet he might have risked being in a relationship again if not for Khushi! But now, he is in a relationship because of Khushi , wih Khushi.. Fearing about her 'Khushi'! He's put so much to ensure her happiness till now and now he himself is the way of her happiness or so he thinks!

What has come out good from these 6 months is : Arnav has realised and worked on Khushi's individuality which somehwere was being overshadowed unknowingly by him! He now understands the actual depth of her Love!

Arnav, like Khushi, too has put up his efforts in their relationship, which makes me wonder, why is he going over the line when he himself didn't like Khushi doing that! Going for dates 3 times a week.. ? Is it him?

He might want Khushi to find someone else.. But in a way he's on holding her too.. I feel! Pata nahi kyun!:(

her Love doesn't let her be selfish.. While his love still is selfless. Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon??

Okay.. So with roses, is that NK she's talking to? Or its Arnav only?

P.S: Sorry for the delay in un-resing!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

That is just beautiful update!!

Everything, every scene touched me! Really!!

After their kiss, when khushi wasn't opening her eyes and said "I am scared to open my eyes and not see the love for me in your eyes" gosh, my eyes got moist with this!! And when she asked that if she loves payal even now, i was thinking how cutely and innocently she asks this!! I was happy with arnav's reply, waise it's not that I don't know he don't have any feelings for payal, I knows that very well, coz first if he had he would tell khushi as one of his bahane's which he gave to khushi to make her stay away from him! But I like and loved when he said it!!

So they decided to give their relation a chance, specifically arnav for khushi's happiness!! And got nani's permission too. I know that nani won't have any problem either!

Glad arnac noticed khushi more in this 6 months period of their dating-period! Oh god, I cant tell you how much I was happy to read that part!! Really, I really want arnav to notice how much khushi knowingly or unknowingly changed herself for him and how his small small opinions and words meant to her!! And how much she tried to be the person who she thinks arnav will like it!! And damn he, and also he mend his mistakes, I mean made khushi what she is, no, how she should be!!

Loved how he compare term boyfriend' with himself!!

But In all I don't like that he still want her to be with other!! Why he just love her! I am sure if he'll try to see her in that sense, he will surely fall for her, she is an amazing person!

And damn, khushi noticed too, yes after all how can a girl wont understand if her lover or boyfriend loves her or not!! And khushi understand this very well!!

I felt really bad for her when she asked to him don't be a person or try to love her when he don't, and be happy infront of her when he paining inside and coz his happiness is her happiness, gosh khushi again won my heart with her maturity! And that's what khushi is!!

I really felt bad when arnav agreed that he don't love her!!But it was his fault also, I know it's not easy to stop the feeling which he felt the most for khushi, that is, responsibility and any six month cannot eaily over come it!! I really loved his honesty here!!👏

Zee, you really in this chapter, gives us true arnav and khushi, really!! Very well described their emotions!! Just superb yaar!!

Uhm yeah, about the italics part, yeah it was confusing but I am being a optimistic person, thinking positive only, like, that's of their future, khushi make her mind that, arnav cannot love her bas! And maybe arnav realise that he loves khushi like anything and wants her! Is trying to show he loves her but couldn't say, coz he arnav!! But khushi is thinking that, he is doing this to make her feel good and for her happiness!! Hence, she' there is khushi, without any doubt and he' is arnav!! Well it can be anything!!

Zee, do one thing, extend this ss for some more chapters na!! I just can't get enough of it!!😉😆

Aree waah, next chapter will come soon, cant wait

Continue soon 😃

PS: again sorry for lamba choda comment!😳

Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago

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vibha92

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Posted: 12 years ago

ufff!!...finally sryy for editing diss late!!...(making a puppy face)😳

d update ws beautiful!!...

arnav tried his best!!...pr use pyaar kyu ni hua khushi se ab tak!!!...😭

feeling sad for khushi!!...😭😭😭

she is so right!!...a grl always knws whn she is not being loved!!...

her love for arnav is jst!!...i cant explain in words!!...👏

she is awesome!!...

d more arnav wnts her to go away from him d more she cnt!!...her love for him is jst too strong to go away from him!!...

bt she accept d fact tht he doesnt love her lyk a mature grl!!...

she didnt wnt to fool her heart anymore i guess...😭

n its not arnav's mistake too!!...he did try hard to love her tht way!!...bt!!...pata ni kyuu!!...

n d dialogs in italics!!...pata ni kyu dey r not giving me any positive or gud feeling!!...😕

wat was tht!!...

koi raaz to nai kholne wale aap!!...😲

agar khole bhi to happy wala plzz plzz!!...

aap thode chapters badha nai sakte kya!!...sachhi me its ending with nxt update!!...😭

eagarly waiting for nxt part!!...

update nxt part soon...😛

Edited by nirmal1992 - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsum beginning
n i hate d italics
don't tell me ur gettn payal bak?
or is ir la?

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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

A truly heartbreaking update Zehra,

"yeh ishq nahin aasan, bas itna samajh li jiye, ke aag ka dariya hai, aur doob ke jaana hai."

Your story really does embody this poem Zehra, its not plain sailing for these two at all is it? But I do think the couple made progress in this update because they understood each other a little better, adjusted themselves for the other and felt the others love and pain on many levels, and if a summary was needed for this update then for me Khushi's declaration said it all: can't they see I belong to you?

This seperation of sorts will work wonders for both of them, it is important for them to understand themselves and be comfortable in thier own skin before they commit to the other, as right now they are too busy being what the other wants them to be. I think this seperation will also serve as a testament as to how intrinsically linked the two souls are, they love, now they just need to understand its depths.

Another brilliant update

Manreet :)

Edited by manreet_gill - 12 years ago