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This story is just WOW, intense and awesomeee. It welled my eyes many a times. You have written a wonderful masterpiece. No wonder everyone suggests your fan fictions everywhere. You are an amazing writer. 👏😉
"There's a weird pleasure in loving someone who doesn't love you". Exactly this is what Khushi would have felt during her initial days of falling in love with Arnav.😛
The longing, pain, thrill, worry, suffering, ecstasy in one-sided love where feelings are not reciprocated between two individuals has been crafted with so much perfection here.
"Make me care, make me like spending time, make me feel, make me feel something, make me feel anything, make me like someone, make me love, make me love someone like I love you"
"When I close my eyes, I see you"
"When I open them, I see you"
"When you are away from me, I want you"
"But when you are with me, I want you more"
I have always loved you as a woman loves her man
Wow these lines melted my heart and brought tears to my eyes. This is not a situation of desperate love. This is about the immense pain Khushi is enduring knowing that her love will be seen only as infactuation by the very person she wants to spend her life with.🥱
Love doesn't really look upon the age or any restrictions and in fact there is nothing like true love or anything. Khushi was very strong from the beginning that nothing ,not even Arnav's initial awkardness to fall in love with the girl he should be shielding and protecting from the world, could reduce the love she has on Arnav.😳
Everyone gets selfish for their needs. Also Patience is a virtue. So when Payal wronged Arnav by leaving him without giving a thought about what life would be for Arnav, she did act selfish and impatient. She wanted her needs to be satisfied. She left him. And she didn't think about her love on Arnav or the love Arnav showered on her. And that is not how love works.😕
Love shouldn't be forced. And when Arnav started to date Khushi only for her sake, even the trying-to-fall-in-love has lost its meaning.
"Make me, make me approach you, make me feel for you, make me love, make me love you, make me love you as a man loves his woman, make me love you Khushi as you love me, make me love you as you ought to be loved"
Didn't he want someone to spend the rest of his life with?
Didn't he deserve to be loved?
Didn't he want someone to kiss him good morning instead of waking up alone every day?
Didn't he want someone to tell him on a regular basis that there is someone who loves him?
Didn't he want to have a person in his life whom he can tell every day that he loves her?
Didn't he wish to be happy and have a contended smile on his face every night and before he dies?
But when Arnav fell for Khushi on his own, for his sake, to go after his true happiness, it was indeed a pleasant happiness felt by Khushi.😃
"He told me that he loves you" he said after a moment of hesitancy.
I guessed this conversation has something to do with Arnav and Khushi's child. 😳
Its not necessary to know which child belongs to Arnav and Khushi and who doesn't, because they are going to be showered with the same love, in fact unconditional love by their parents.😊
This is an excellent story and thank you so much for giving us this brilliant one. Hope to catch up with more of your wonderful works.👏
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