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Posted: 12 years ago
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Miss You My Dad

I miss you my dad

Everytime I think of you I get sad

I miss you seeing during the dinner

You always said that I was a winner

I miss your laugh and smile

Though its been a while

I miss you how you used to tuck me to bed

I miss your kiss on my head

I miss our weekends

I miss your old talks

I still cry over our funny talks

I miss your help during my homework

I miss your encouraging smirk

I miss the kiss you used to give me on my cheek

I miss the your sweet voice when you speak..

I miss you dad

I miss you dearly...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww sweetu ,
this poem is quite emotional n heart touching as well ..😭
🤗 i so so so so so loved it gudiya
muaaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaahh🤗 🤗
love u so much , 😳
and ya my little detective 😆( i read ur comment sweetu ) , mere ideas ka source to mera dil hai ,
par tere wonderful amazing ideas aur sweet heart warming poetry ka raaz kya hai ??????😛

this poem is so heart touchingb ,describing beautifully d moments of a child n dad and then when d child is missing his dad and reminiscing all those memories with dad 😭😭
totally loved it gudiya ... muahhh muahhh
love u loads gudiya , my sweetu cutu sis , muahh
take care n keep smiling always
n ya keep writing also !!!!! would love 2 read more 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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The poem is really nice sweetie!😃

You are a wonderful writer!👏

Thought it is small, it had lots of emotions!😛

Loved it a lot!😳

Keep going!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinudolly

awww sweetu ,

this poem is quite emotional n heart touching as well ..😭
🤗 i so so so so so loved it gudiya
muaaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaahh🤗 🤗
love u so much , 😳
and ya my little detective 😆( i read ur comment sweetu ) , mere ideas ka source to mera dil hai ,
par tere wonderful amazing ideas aur sweet heart warming poetry ka raaz kya hai ??????😛

this poem is so heart touchingb ,describing beautifully d moments of a child n dad and then when d child is missing his dad and reminiscing all those memories with dad 😭😭
totally loved it gudiya ... muahhh muahhh
love u loads gudiya , my sweetu cutu sis , muahh
take care n keep smiling always
n ya keep writing also !!!!! would love 2 read more 😊





dii..no raaz from my side
woh toh was missing my dad naa.. isiliyee
he is not at home since a week..
so was missing him soo very much

aapki poems ka raaz pata chal hei gaya..
hmm..abh aapke style mein likhne ki try karungii
though i know that its impossible..
but still try karungii

love u too dii..
u too write more n more..so that mujhe aaur bhi raaz pata chalee😃
love u dii
take care

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

The poem is really nice sweetie!😃

You are a wonderful writer!👏

Thought it is small, it had lots of emotions!😛

Loved it a lot!😳

Keep going!😉


thank u soo much choco😊
me a wonderful writer?? no yaar...dont joke..
i just write for passing my time..and expressing my emotions..
there are even more fabulous writers here

though..loved ur comment
yaa..will write more ..whenever i feel like
thanks ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ridzi123


thank u soo much choco😊
me a wonderful writer?? no yaar...dont joke..
i just write for passing my time..and expressing my emotions..
there are even more fabulous writers here

though..loved ur comment
yaa..will write more ..whenever i feel like
thanks ...😃



I don't know about others! but for me, my sweetie is a wonderful writer!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend



I don't know about others! but for me, my sweetie is a wonderful writer!😃


thank u soo much ..choco
me love u soo much😳

sweetie loves choco😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ridzi123


thank u soo much ..choco
me love u soo much😳

sweetie loves choco😃



Choco loves sweetie too!😆

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