The Unsuccessful:VirManFF Part 12 Pg 49 (FINAL) - Page 40

Originally posted by: nanditam2107

It was just amazing!!!!! The ending couldn't have been better!!!!!!😃

The way Virman united was just so beautiful!!!!!!

They understand each other so beautifully!!!!!!!!😊

and then that letter to shanaya...hahahahaha...it was so funny!!!!!!!!!! Seriously it will change her life!!!!!!!😆😆🤣

And then their union was again amazing!!!!!!!😳

The ending was just outstanding!!!!!!!
This journey of Unsuccessful just superb & amazing!!!!!😃😃

Great work!!!!!!👏👏

I loved it 😃 also I lovvveee Virat..and u know that😆..u've included several good moments...including one where fathers' eyes got filled with tears..esp...Vishal's feelings for his Monu...it was very emotional...and past connection between Mannu her Buddy & protector...people who are connected...their heart,mind and souls are connected its a miraculous connection...I loved the way u showed them being indifferent,unaffected infact together making fun of everything that irked them...this is surely a verry unique story...I also loved when Manvi was feeling cool breeze while Viraat was carrying her...they didn't feel awkward that time...why would they? when they have shared same proximity since they have opened their eyes..I also loved dori scene...it was like getting better and better while scrolling down...I don't want to misss sad parts..I want to read them...

Originally posted by: AnaluvsVirman

I loved it 😃 also I lovvveee Virat..and u know that😆..u've included several good moments...including one where fathers' eyes got filled with tears..esp...Vishal's feelings for his Monu...it was very emotional...and past connection between Mannu her Buddy & protector...people who are connected...their heart,mind and souls are connected its a miraculous connection...I loved the way u showed them being indifferent,unaffected infact together making fun of everything that irked them...this is surely a verry unique story...I also loved when Manvi was feeling cool breeze while Viraat was carrying her...they didn't feel awkward that time...why would they? when they have shared same proximity since they have opened their eyes..I also loved dori scene...it was like getting better and better while scrolling down...I don't want to misss sad parts..I want to read them...

Originally posted by: maclean

😃omggg reading again,,,,,, and again,.. 😊