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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello friends ,
i m new in writer's corners , i used 2 post poems in d3 forum , didn't knew about this writer's corner's , just came 2 know šŸ˜† so aagayi aap sabko bhi pareshan karne šŸ˜†šŸ˜†, plss bare me ok .šŸ˜› because i m not that bad at writing ( stop glaring at me , šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† arre friends aise kehte hain main nahinšŸ˜†šŸ˜†) ok enough of my bak bak ,
here i present u my poem ~


RADHA~KRISHNA JI
purest and the most beautiful love story 😳


( tuning a little fast)
pyaar ne kuch aise pal diye
jinmein hum har pal hain jeeye ,
( lalalalalalla lalalalalallla ..
ohooo hooo hooo ohooo )
(now a little slow)
PYAAR NEEE , HOOO PYAAR NE
HAAA
TERE - MERE PYAAR NE ,
HAA
TERE - MERE PYAAR NE
kuch aise pal diye , jinmein hum har pal hain jeeye
( lalalalalalla lalalalalallla .
ohooo hooo hooo ohooo )
very slow

chahe - vo - pal kho gaye kahin duur humse ,
banke - BEETE KAL KI YAAD ,
banke beete kal ki yaad ...
(now a little fast)
jo thaa khoobsurat aur pyaara bhi ,
hai ab bhi , rahega bhi
(now slow)
aur YAADEIN ,
haa unki khoobsurat yaadein ,
jhilmilayein ab bhi ,
mere dil mein ,
haaa mereee tanha dil mein ,
(a little fast )
saanson mein , dhadkano mein haii bas ,
teraa pyaar , meraa pyaar,
hamara adhoora pyaara ,
aur mehke sirf vo ehsaas , teri aawaz teri khushboo , aur tuuu , haa sirf tuu

hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm

jagmag jagmag jagmagati ab bhi ,
vo khoobsurat yaadein ,
banke meri muskaan ,
jismein ghule hain ~
tere pyaar ke nishaaan
haa hamari mohabbat ki zubaaan ,
hamari adhoori mohabbat ki zubaan,

ab ,
main judaa hun tujhse ,
aur tu judaa hai mujhse ,
haaa main judaa hun tujhse ,
tu judaa hai mujhse JAISE BICHDE HAIN ~
DO DIL EK JAAN ,
naa tu bewafaa tha ,
aur naa main thi bewafaa ,
bewafaa to thi shayad kismatein apni
( a little fast)
jisne judaa kiyaa humko,
aur , saath jeene naa diya humko
haa jeene naa diya humko ..
naseeb hua khafa (angry/upset)
kuch iss tarah,
ki teri baahon main ( in beloved's arms)
marne bhi naa diya humko ,
marne bhi na diya humko

(slow again --- asking from god )
JAANE KYUN ,
E- MAULA ,
TU RUTHA IS QADAR HUMSE ,
ki ,
cheen li hamari zindagi ,
apni he jaan se ,
haa apni he jaan se ,
aur ,
judaa kiye do dil ,
haa judaa kiye do dil ,
apni he roohon (soul) se
apni he roohon se ,
(fast)
par ,
sun le e- khuda ,
pyaar ka dard bhi hum yaadon sang ,
has - has ke seh lenge ,
pyaar se iss dard ko bhi hum khoobsurat bana denge ,
( 2 d beloved)
haa tere pyaar mein ,
aansoon se , he khud ko sukoon pahuncha lenge ,
unn yaadon ko yaad karke phir muskura lenge ,
aur tere ishq main hum marke bhi jeelenge ,
lekin tujhse pyaar karna naa chodenge ,
haa tujhpe marna naa chodenge

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hey my sweetu cutu friends out there , the poem is over but i hope i didnt bored u much , plss if u like it and want me 2 write more then HIT LIKE AND DO COMMENT AS WELL , MAKE ME FEEL A LITTLE SPECIAL PLSS
BUT BUT BUT D COMMENT SHOULD BE FROM HEART ( dil se comment pls)
lots of love
moni ,
take care !!!!!
keep smiling always !!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
awww... my sweetu sissy...
missed u so much!!!
love u sooo mych!
nd love u more 4 this poem!!!
haaye... reminded me of taarey!!!
love u so much!!!
keep writing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super awesome poem šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res... ā¤ļø
Unres...

Didu... Guess wat?? I saved my 1000th post for u!! Meaning iss comment seh i'm a goldie now!! :D so so so happy ki iss poem pe i became goldie...
Now enough of this šŸ˜†

Let me tell u how amazing the poem was!! Omg!! It was so so so very beautiful didu! I loved it to the core of my heart!! U know why?? Because my chotu sa dil could feel every emotion your pure heart put in... And honestly... I loved the WHOLE POEM!! Par for me... My fav part had to be:

Originally posted by: chinudolly

saanson mein , dhadkano mein haii bas ,
teraa pyaar , meraa pyaar,
hamara adhoora pyaara ,
aur mehke sirf vo ehsaas , teri aawaz teri khushboo , aur tuuu , haa sirf tuu

and on wards was the best half of the poem!!

It was amazing!! Loved it so so so much!! From my full heart!
Love u a lot lot lot lot lot didu!! Muaah muaah muaah muaah muaah muaah!!! šŸ¤— tight pyar bhari huggie! MUAAH! With lots of kissy's!
Amazing poem didu! Hoping to read more from u soon!
Par for now... All the best for studies!! And take care of urself! And your health!
Love u so much pyaru! Muaah!
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Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww so sweet and lovely poem
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh godd!! Didi muge toh ye poem ki half hindi bhi ni aati esp wich u wrote in blue!! Dey wer seriously makin me giv a blank stare*_*
bt thank U!! Dat u wrote dem in english..šŸ˜†
otherwise me wud seripusly nt understanding anythng!šŸ˜†
Niways..nw cumin to d point..
AESOME JOB sisso!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
U nailed d emotion of love,emo of pain gettin separeted,emo of feelin happy in reminscing dose beautiful memoz,emo of askin god y did he seperate d couple,emo of d person expressing his love pf beloved,emo of d person wrn his beloved was wid him.
Oh gawdd!! Dat rvrythng was written so purely beautiful!ā¤ļø
I just loved d whole poem though i dint undrstand sme lines[south prob re...>_<] bt i loved it as dey spelt vry beautiful..hehehešŸ˜†
Bt seriously,deedu YOU ARE AN AMAZING POETESS!!
i think u shud continue writing poems n expose ur writing skills lyk dis!
Bt bt bt bt...plzzz plzz dnt strain urself olso by sittin in frnt of pc fr whole day!! 😊
Niways,take care!
Keep Shining like dis wid ur OUTSTANDING n AMAZIING works!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweetu it was a lovely poem loved it. health kaisa hai??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWSOME AMAZING BUDDY U ARE THE GREAT AWSOME WRITTER I LOVED UR POEMS OMG WHAT A LINES U R SACH A TALENTED PERSON I LOVE YOU MERI BESTEST BUDDY KEEP WRITTING N THANK YOU 4 THE PM N WRITE MORE WE WANT TO READ UR POEMS N FF SS OS MORE CUZ WE LOVE YOU N YOUR WRITTING U ARE GREAT THINKER LOVED UR CONCEPTS AMAZING BRILLIANT FANTABULOUS WRITTEN WORK LOVED IT JAAAN BYE HUGS TAKE CARE KEEP SMILLING NEVER SAD EVER PLSS HUGSšŸ¤—..šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm poem yaar ...too good !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome aur pyaara poem tha di
loved it

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