#2~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~

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hi everyone🤗

welcome to the new thread of ~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (kriyaansh ff)

thank u so much...for supporting to my this first work ki pagalpanti this much ki 2nd thread aa gyi😆

ye mere style kathank u as always..

acha ye decent thank u...

to kriyaanshians n all the readers aab mei butterfly kissnhi de skti 😆 so butterfly hugs...🤗

update dhoond rhe ho?? chck the 4th post

stay tuned n take care😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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charactersketch

Kriya Ghai: A very bubly girl..loves her younger sister tina..scared of darkness,speed & height...she is only friends with sharon n hates to make friends due to some reason..

Reyaansh Singhania: The hottest hunk..A very cool as well as stylish guy always luv to fights his sis n luv to do masti..

Sharon Rai Prakash: kriya's friends..love shopping,make up n gossiping

Swayam Shikawat: a very interesting guy sometimes turn funny n sumtimes serious...best frnd of rey n luv to read books...

p.s: tiya r no more part in this story..

so guys if u like do comment n i'll be able to update saturday only b'coz of school...for pm's buddy me

Scroll down for Index..
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Index

Part 20: pg 1

Part 21: pg 18

Part 22: pg 30

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Link To Previous Thread: Thread 1

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Edited by RiyaArShaKapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here's the first update of this thread..😃


after hearing the couple's convo..rey was higly confused..he called up swayam but

hewasn't picking n aftr dat sharon only to hear a busy message..he went to

library,common room n mmany more places where they can be n finally spot them at

Rehersal Hall...he was about to enter when he heard sharon taking kriya's name on the

call they were aatending on the loudspeaker..he stood behind the door such that they can't

see him..n listened them..

"aunty vo..kriya kaisi hai?"sharon asked sadly..as she very well know the ans

"beta tumhe pata toh hai..aur aaj kal gabrati hai school jane se"kriya's mom replied..

rey(to himself): school? teacher ban gyi hai kya..itni jaldi..great..

"haan vo usne btaya tha bache usse"she was about to complete when she heard the sobbing

frm other hand..

"beta mei rakhti hu...thoda kaam hai bye"smriti replied still sobbing..

"theek hai aunty..take care..bye"sharon replied n hung up..

she luked at swayam sadly...while swayam was luking down...

sh:letz go n meet kriya..

swayam who qwas lost sumwhere luked at her...

sw;haan..par..

sh:par war kuch nhi hum usse milne jayenge abhi..

sw:shar rey ko kya bolenge..

sh;oh common swayam tumhe abhi bhi uski padhi hai jisne ek baar bhi kriya ke barein mei nhi

socha..usse pyar krta tha na ye hai uska pyar..

sw:tumhe kaise?

sh; I can see..tumhe kya lga ki kriya mujse itni badi bat chupa ke rakhegi uski life itna kuch hone

ke baad...

rey entered at the same tym..

r: toh usne aakhir sab kuch bta diya..great..sympathy ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai..tabhi pura

college bichari kriya karne mei laga hua hai..

he replied fuming n hurt sumwhere deep inside..

sw: par rey..

r: kya rey..jis tarah usne sharon ko apni side karliya hai waise tum bhi chale jao..pyaar jo

karte ho

sharon se toh uski har baat manoge hi..

sw: rey...

sh:wht? mujse pyaar..?

he didn't care about them n further started speaking..

r: yhi chahti thi na vo ki usse sympathy mile n pura college muje hate kare ki maine usse chod

diya..so uska mission complete ho gya..must say she had done a great job..well done

sh:rey tumhe kuch pata nhi hai so better shut u'r mouth..

r: kya nhi pata muje..i knw everything yhi na ki vo mere peeche us shavy ke

sath..chee..teacherban gyi..i'm sure ye bhi ussi ne karwaya hog a taki kriya mujse durr rhe..ek

baar bol deti ki she dnt like me ..cheat karne ki kya zarurat thi..

he said as tears were flowing down his eyes..

sw: rey aisa kuch nhi hai shavy..kriya ka past hai

before he could complete he again started..

r: i knw vo ter bhai hai..par maine khud unhe dkha hai ek sath..aur she must be lying kitne

past hai uske ankit sha

before he can say swayam shouted..not able to tolerate..

sw: shavy hi shravan hai..kriya ka past..

this was a big blow for rey...swayam's word kept repeating in his mind..

(zyada ekta kapoor syle ho gya 😆)

all he could mutter was

r: kya?

sh: haan aab kuch samaj aa rha hai tumhe ya ye bhi jooth lag rha hai..

r: tumne muje btaya kyu nhi aur mei itna sa bhi nhi soch paya ki shavy shravan ho skta

hai..par kriya toh uske sath khush thi..

sh: khush thi nhi dikhava kar rhi thi dhamki di thi us bas***d ne usse..aur vo sirf tumhare liye

yesab kar rhi thi..sirf tumhare liye..par tumhe us par bilkul trust nhi tha isliye tumne usse chod

diya aur vo hum sabko bhool gyi..itni baar tumhe btane ki koshish ki ki rey kriya..par tum toh

kriya ka naam sunte hi koi na koi excuse bana dete the..shar abhi nhi muje jana hai..mere

frnds hai...muje neendh aa rhi hai..toh kya karte hum jab tum sunna hi nhi chahte the n u must

have moved on par vo apni life mei aur peeche chali gyi hai..

she said crying..while swayam consoled her..

r: muje..muje kriya se milna hai..

swaron: nhi

r: haan ..abhi isi waqt..bye guys c u later...sorry maine tumhari phone pe kuch batei sun li i

knw

kriya school mei hogi but mei uska wait karunga...but i still can't belive baatcutter i mean

kriya teacher ban gyi..

he said going out while swaron followed him

sw: teacher?

sh: rey nhi phle puri baat suno..

r: nhi sharon mei wait nhi kar skta bye..

he sat in his car n drove off..

sh; swayam jaldi car leke aao usse rokna hoga..

sw: haan..

aftr sometime they to went towards kriya's house following him

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he reached her place n started shouting..

r: baatcutter...baatcutter bahar aao..

he saw the main door lock n then all the people luking at him..he smiled sheepleshly..ruffling his

hair n turn around..n walked to the nearby garden n sat on the bench

luking at his watching every passing second..n luk up at the sky..

r: kriya ke universe ji plz baatcutter ko jldi se bhej do plzz...

as if universe ji was only listening to him he saw her sitting on the bench opposite to him...he

smiled as she was to luking at the sky n talking to her universe ji with an angry pout...

she luked in his direction n smiled as if she was just waiting for him from a long tym..she got up

n ran towards him..he too stand up opening his arms..but but she ran

n ran leaving him soon his smile vanished..n wen he turned she saw him eating..baraf ka gola

🤣..he smiled seeing him..he still luk so cute...with two ponies

wearing school uniform..water bottle hanging around her neck n bag on her houlders..she was

dressed up like a school girl..wait a min..

rey(to himself): school girl..but she is a school teacher na? never mind..school mei fancy

dress hoga but she luk so cute..

he said again getting lost in her...n then came back to his senses hearing the crows sound who

was sitting on his shoulder..he tried to make him flew n was suceesful

too..n saw kriya laughing at him..he moved towards her n stand adjacent to her..

r: hi..

she didn't rply as she was so engrossed in having her gola..

r: naraz ho..hogi bhi kyu nhi..maine itni badi galti jo ki..sorry..

he said holding his ears but she never luked at him as if she was nt listening..

r: kriya meri taraf dkho toh..

she replied in her childish way still nt luking at him..

k: mumy ne bola strangers se baat nhi karna.

r: stranger..

this very word pricked him but never mind he had also give her so much pain n the way she is

talking like a kid lgta hai jaldi maan jayegi..

r: sorry na plz...acha mei situps bhi krta hu..

he started doing it but she never luked at him..aftr about 50 situps he stand up properly as

everybody was laughing at him..

r; kriya plz..

but still she was engrossed in taking another gola from the bhaiya..🤣 he was fed up as

everybody was laughing she hold her wrist n turned her towards him in resulting dropping her

gola..

r: mei kabse sorry bol rha hu meri taraf dkh bhi nhi rhi ho..itna kya ho gya dnt forget jitni fault

pe mei tha utne pe tum thi...muje bta deti toh kya jata..

before he can say she started crying..

r:sorry...plz maaf krdo sorry..

he said n hugged her..he was feeling so gud to hug her dat a big smile appeared on his face n

she felt familiar being in his arms but push him..n he luked at her confused

k: tum bahut gande ho..mera gola gira diya..

n she turned to other side..he smiled hugged her frm behind n placed her chin on her shoulder n

she was tring hard to get out of his grip..

k: chodo..

r; shh..chup mei tumhe gola le dunga khush..

she smiled n turned around..

k: sachi..

r: haan muchi..

n this tym she hugged him..swaron reached there n was about to go n stop rey wen they saw

kriya huging him they smiled..n saw them thinking may be rey get to knw about

kriya by seeing her lyk this, as rey was buying gola for kriya n teasing him by not giving her n were

speaking.,.

r: phle bolo muje maaf kiya..

k: par kis baat ke liye n do na gola muje khana hai..

she replied not knowing what he was talking about..she stopped as he heard her further..

r: tumhe us shravan ke sath chodne ke liye..

she stopped asking for gola n stood there luking at him while he kept murmuring sorry sorry as he

just said dat so that she behave properly ..swaron walked towards them as they heard it..kriya

blinked her eyes twice n again fainted...


likes n comments plz..

for pm's buddy me

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay me first..

congo for the 2nd thread🥳🤗

amazing update

loved it

gosh it hurts to see kriya in that condition

I hope she remembers everything soon...

update asap!
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for new thread
finally rey ko sach pata chal hi gaya
but abhibhi half sachai hi pata he
n at lazt kria i faint
hope she will be fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super awesome
loved it
pata ni hasu ya rou
but it was fantastic
superbly written
u've become my fav writer
i love this story and loved ur other story too
i was smiling at childish kria
arghh rey ko toh baatcutter ka khitaab milne chahiye kisi ki ni sunta
gadha
iska next update kab milega?
Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGO 4 d new thread
n the update.. Awesome
finally rey new about shravan
bt now he should know abt kriya's accident..
Jaldi jaldi nxt updates karo
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats 4 new thread dear 🤗
coming to update
its ws superb
fianlly rey ko pta chal hi gaya ki kriya ne sab kuch uske liye kiya tha
kriyansh scene ws awsm
i ws smiling at childish kriya
rey kriya ko baatcutter bulata h...
yeh name toh usse milna chahiye kisi ki nahi sunta
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Aw it was so cute!
loved it!
sorry riyu itna lambha comment nai de sakti!!
update sooon!
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago

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