keep it going.......... - Page 48

hey kajol and kash
it is not fair that u compare me with that ekta
who take our sujal out of our site 😭
but she can never able to take him out of our mind 😆
this is not good to me 😭 😭 😭

hey guys great job. I m so glad k iss forum k iss chotey sey group ki ronaq waapis aa gaye hai. that's why i wanted to start off with something that would keep u going. we shouldn't be depened on just one person writing the whole thing. See how many great ideas we all have.
[B]Great Job !!! [/B]
I'm so happy for u all

great very nice story 👏 👏 👏 plz post next part soon 😊

in night
kajol adi and akash went to sleep
kashish sujal or piyush beth kar baatain kar rahay hotay hain
sujal:or yaar sun .......tumhara business kaisa ja raha hai
piyush:perfect.............or tum
sujal:haan aj kal aik nayee foriegn company kay saath kam chal raha hai...
piyush:kashish tum kia karti rehti ho
kashish:piyush....mujhay to ghar hi rehna pasand hai...bachoon kay saath time guzarna
piyush:likin kashish tum business kay baray main itna kuch janti hoo.....tumhain sujal ko join karna chayee
kashish:likin piyush.....
piyush:dekho kashish....tumhain office jana chayee. yeh baat theek hai kay tumhain ghar rehna accha lagta hai likin iss tarahan jo kabliyet tumharay ander hai tum usay chupa rahi hoo.....tum apnay saath na insafu kar rahi hoo
kashish:main janti hoon likinnnnnnnnnn
sujal:kashish piyush bilkul theek keh raha hai....tumhain office aana chayee(sujal kay dil main ladoo phoot rahay hotay hain kay office kay bahanay hi sahi woh kashish kay saath zaida say zaida waqt guzar sakta hai)
kashish:nahin sujal main bachoon ko ignore nahin karna cahhti
sujal:iss main bachoon ko ignore karnay ki baat kaha say aa gayee....or waisay bhi tumhain kaun sa poora din wahan guzarna hai tum subah chalna or bachoon kay school timing per wapis aa jana.......plz kashish
piyush:abh man bhi jaoon na.pl
kashish:ok theek hai likin abhi say nahin jab hum apnay trip say wapis aayein gay tab chalain gai
sujal:ok
piyush:trip? yeh trip ka kia chakar hai
kashish:haan sujal kay us foriegn company say meeting hai or issi bahanay hum bhi us kay saath one month kay liyee US ja rahay hain
piyush:kia tum log US a rahay ho
kashish:haan ..kyoun tumhain sujal nay bataya nahin
piyush:sujal..........making a what-is-this look
sujal:yaar main tumhain surprize dena cahahta tha
piyush:likin mujhay mera surprise mill gaya na..... abh tum nay mujhay nahin bataya iss ki saza to tumhain bughtani hi paray gi
sujal:kia.....kaisi saza
piyush:woh yeh kay tum log wahan aa kar meray saath thehroo gay
sujal:sorry piyush likin meri meeting place tumharay gahr say kaafi door hai
piyush:ohhh no.main chah raha tha kay main kuch waqt bachoon kay saatth guzaroon
sujal:to iss main kia baat howi....tum bhi ussi din ki tickets book karwa loo or phir main or kashish hotel chalay jain gay or tum bachoon ko apnay saath lay jana
piyush:likin tum loog kab aoo gay
sujal:mera do din ka kam hai...kam khatam kartay hi main or kashish aa jain gai
piyush:theek hai
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sujal or kashish in their room
kashish:sujal jii.... kia app ko lagta hai kay main do din apnay bachoon kay bagair reh sakti hoon
sujal:kashish jii main janta hoon kay app apnay abchoon kay bagair nahin reh saktin or main bhi nahin.....likin main do din app kay saath guzarna cahhta hoon.....agar
kashish:agar kia...meray sartaj
sujal:agar app ki ijazat ho meri malkayee aliya
kashish:ijazaat hai..........and they both start laughing
sujal:janti ho kashish......tum meri zindagi ka sab say bara tohfa hooo...
kashish:sujal..........main bhi kabhi kabhi sochati hoon kay agar tum meri zindagi main na hotay to....
sujal:uss kay hoontoon per ungli rakhtay howay......tum meri thi or mujhay mill gayeee.....or main iss say agy kuch nahi sochna chahti
they both hug each other
at the background
hum tum mellay yoon pyar main
mitnay lagi tanhaiyan
abh hai nahi kuch faslay
bas pyar hi hai darmiyan
and they both went to sleep

next morning
sujal wake up and see kashish putting her head on her hand
sujal just murmurized by her beauty.sujal kashish ko iss tarhan aram say soya dekhta hai to chupkay say uth kar fresh honay chala jata hai or phir ja kar kitchen main chayee bananay lagta hai
jab woh kamray main aata hai to kashish uth gaye hoti hai
sujal:kashish...uth gay
kashish:tum nay mujhay kyoun nain uthaya
sujal:mera dil nahi kar raha tha....tum itni pyari lag rahi thi
kashish:sujal........
sujal hand over to her the cup of tea
kashish aik sip leti hai
kashish:very good....app ko to itni acchi chayee banani aati hai
sujal:abh kia karain suhbat ka asar to hona hi tha
kashish end her tea and went to take a bath
sujal dinning ki taraf bharta hai...kay piyush bachoon kay saath aa jata hai

bachay:aj ka kia program hai
chiuti hai yaan kam hai
piyush:bhai aj to chuti hai or aj hum sab ghoomnay gayin gay
just then kashish came there:no....aj to kaam hi kaam hai
piyush:comom yaar main yaahan bus kal tak hi to hoon or phir tum log bhi US aa rahay ho....mujhay aik din to india main apnay bachoon kay saath din guzarnay do
kashish:likin piyush .....humhain abhi packing karni hai
piyush:koi baat nahin.....paking main main tum loogon ki madad kar don ga
sujal:comon kashish.....abh piyush itni zid kar raha hai to chaltay hai na
kashsh:no raat ko main nay tumhari baat mani abh tm ko meri baat manani hogi.....ok
sujal:yaar main hi ghar main rehta hoon......high comand ka order hai .....likin tum bachoon ko lay kar cahhlay jaoo
bacha party:hurrahhyaaaa

wow that part was just soo good.. keep it going like it is...
Yours Paheli

👏 sujal is soooo sweet 😆😆.

pink

pink tum kabhi tho sujal ka pheecha chodo there r otherz in line behind u 😆

sk woh log london ja rahe the magar tumne unhe us bheejwadia y dint i dink of dat ? 😕 😕 😆
ok ill continue
piyush to kidz : tum log decide karo kahaan jaana hai
sujal pachtaoongay piyush. tum in shaytaanon ko nahiin jaante....
piyush : cum on yaar
acha tum log national park jaaon gay
adi : nahiin
piyush : beach?
kajal : nahiin
piyush : carnival ???
becharra piyush...
akash : nahiin
piyush : to phir...
all 3 of them : pehle AMUSEMENT park phir zoo phir ice cream phir pizza phir burger phir movie phir popdorn phir dinner phir chocolate ...
piyush : acha acha samajh gaya samajh gaya ab bass karo mere sir main dard ho raha hai
kajal: main dawain laoo
sujal : maine kahaan tha pachtaoongay
piyush : tnikhe tum jeetay main haara .... khush /
bacha party : aur hum bi jeet gaye.....
sujal is slightly disturbed kyunke woh notice karta hain kay kashish kuch ghusse say upar '' packing '' karne ka bahaan abanaa kar chale gayi..
sujal : piyush tum log ladayee karo main abhi aaya
adi : papa mamma ko laane gaye hain phir woh bhi ladaayi kare gi...
sujal goz upstairz and knockz on the door ..
sujal : kya main andar aaoon ?
kashish angrily : ji aap kaun?
sujal is very shocked and enterz room wid dharaam
sujal : tumhe nahiin pata main kaun hoon ?
kashish : ji nahiin
sujal : hahah main tumhara pati hoon
kashish : ji nahiin mere pati bohat ache hain aur unhe pata hain kay unke khud ke kamre knock kar kar kisi paraye ke jaisa nahiin ghuste
sujal thinking : acha ab mazaa ayegaa
sujal : u r rigth. lemmego find ny room
kashish : kyaaaaa?
sujal : goodbye
kashish thinkink : acha bachoo ab ayegaa mazaa
kashish : ok and plz dont disturb me again main packing kar rahi hoon
sujal : bye.
he closes the door.
after 2 min he cumz in room and......
sujal : kashish meri white stripe waali shirt rakhna mat bulna
closes door and then after 2 min :
sujal: kashish haan meri black tie bhi mat bhoolna
closes door and then after 2 min :
sujal : aur mera suit bhi
closes door and then after 2 min :
sujal : and my toothbrush
closes door and then after 2 min :
sujal : aur mera aur mera....KASHISH CHODO BHI NAA BATAON GHUSSA KYUN HO ?
kashish :main kaha ghussa hoon ?
sujal : tum jaanti ho kashish main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon aur timhare bina jee nahiin sakta aur agar tumhe dookh ho to mera dil rukh jaata hain meri saanse bandh ho jaati hain tum aise mat kiya karo
kashish : main to bas tumhari pyaar ki ghayraain dekna chaati thi
sujal : koshish bhi mat karna .... doob jaon gee
( guyz forgive me for copying frm here and ther )
kashish : waise tum opar kyun aien ?
sujal : kashish tumse aik baat kehna chaata hoon
kashish : kya
sujal : dekho kashish try and understand mujhe aise kar naa pada .... main kuch saalon se tumhara pyaar kisi aur ko bhi day raha kisi aur ladki ko i luv her very much lekin may tumse bohot ziyaad pyaar karta hoon kashish..
kashish burstz out laughing
kashish : wah kya kamaal ki acting karte ho sujal
sujal : yeh sach hain
kashish : cmon sujal bass bhi karo
sujal : tumhari qasam
kashish bcumz quite
kashish : k..k aun hai w..woh ?
sujal ; woh
uska naam kajal hai .......
kashish lookz at him then .... SUJAL.. maon tumhara qatal karne waali hoon
she jumpz out of bed and runz after him he runz out of room but when she cumz out her foot slipz on rug and she slipz.........
AAAAAAAAAA! sujal !
baaqi ka part main kal likho gi now gstta go freshen up ! 😃

virgo...u r too good.....and dunt xpect pink 2 eva leave rajeev....she is crazy abt him....literaaly crazy....