The Unsuccessful:VirManFF Part 12 Pg 49 (FINAL) - Page 38

Originally posted by: Sumana123

OMG Hus...I can't explain what's going inside me after reading your review. I must say you are the best in analyzing any story. The way you explained everything made me feel as if I m reading another story.. I know to a writer their own work is never best ...but when I read your words I felt I m reading review of a new book...I m just too flattered to what you said. *Words falling Short* ...I m just glad people liked it...As I already told you once , you judge everything correctly , you did it even here. Yes you are right till Chapter 9 the story is running on flash backs ...and probably this is the reason I wanted to finish it on a tight note. I cannot afford to fall flat in the story after keeping it tight till such a long time. The reason of Viraat's and Maanvi's fast reunion is no where in their lives they ever wanted to stay away from each other. Everyday their wish was to go back, so why keep them waiting for so long when God gave them such a strong chance ...Next you call me Clever ..I must tell You are Cleverer cause you caught all such moments where I played tricks ...Yeah .I can reveal one thing about myself ...That I will always write opposite to what people want 😉 evil girl I know... Anyway cause of this story I got to meet some really good people like you ..Yeah next FF is on it way to start...hope I entertain u there too...I m overwhelmed .

Sumana

Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Ah! A beautiful successful end to the Unsuccessful story!
Amazimgly written n explaind each n every situation
the dialogues hav deep meaning whch i lovd the most
keep it up n thankyou sumana for gvng us such a beautiful story on VirMan

Originally posted by: sha19

Wow awesome ending 😃
Loved it so much
Waiting for your new FF
Good luck 😊

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Hwww khatam kar diya? :o :o :o...i never thought it would end like this...i mean all of sudden...but i think its a right dicision to stop here with happy ending...but i m going miss this FF badly...*teary eyes*

moving on the updt...updt was phenomenel...i enjoyed every bit of this...this is called 'chummeshwari' updt...finally there true love won over all there miseries n tragedies...manvi-virats convo was magicle n so impactful...or could say it was a heart n soul of the story...this convo is actually needed...giving a 2nd chance to their love, relation was indeed a gr8 decision...happy that virat got a chance to redeem his deeds...

Manvi- virats...jealousy, insecurity, hurt, pain, emotions, maturity, presents of mind, love everything is portraied excellently...their bonding with ashia is so adorable

Manvis words explains that we learn fr our mistakes...as nia says if u dont make a mistake then u r not a human...mistakes is part of our life but puting them behind n move ahead thats the life...n thats wat they exactly deed...awesome jeourney till now dear...but it says so all is well if end is well...thnx fr this roller coaster ride...i enjoyed a lot...n i must say ur story leave a benchmark behind...*salut to un ur efforts*

pls come back with another dhamakedar concept...i m egerly waiting fr that

Originally posted by: Huma0301

such a mind- blowingly sweet ending loved it all - the way they patched n everythin else too loved the line- when Viraat is here ...There Shouldn't be any tears really lyked hw u changed it

and the letter written from manvi to shanaya 😆 thats was too good

cnt wait for ur new FF- so badly wanna kno the new concept n everythin so plz do giv us the new story quickly 😉

Originally posted by: paddu53

It was one of the awesome ff...a beatiful journey...ending was like a memorable moment...i will miss ur ff...ur updates are amazing...sorry I never commented before...but I followed ur updates regularly...good ff...take care,...bye.

Originally posted by: ArthyV

First of all, congrats for such a long update...😉

I loved it to the core...👏

This update had lots of emotions... I can say that while reading tis update I was going on a emotional ride...😉

At the starting Virat's and Viren's conversation and Manvi - Virat - Shanaya's conversation was literally making me laugh...😆🤣😆

And when Virat and Manvi patched up - I felt my eyes filled with tears...😭

And again Manvi's letter made me laugh like there is no tomorrow...🤣

And when Virat and Manvi became virman... I was like aww... Finally they became one after a long time..

And again atlast Ayesha and Adi reunion was a treat to read...😛

And I must really say that the words you used to mention love in the last part was amazing yaar...👏

And when Manvi's pregnancy news came out...I was like they are going to be a proud parents...😊

And the sentence that one should have Faith on Your Love and Trust on your Lover was awesome...👏

And last but not least when Virat called himself SUCCESSFUL, I was out of the world...😊

But there came the shocking news..."THE END"... That's not fair yaar... I would really miss this ff...😭😭😭

I should definitely say this - YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER...🤗

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

it couldn't have had a better ending than this!!!👏 it felt so complete. like everything was just perfect. a perfect happy ending!! that virman part at the lawn was just bang on! virat assurance to manvi about forever was so dreamy!!😳DAT SURPRISE PART WAS SUPERSEXY😳😳 ahh im gonna miss dis virat- manvi n Aisha too so badly!! n u already know I love ur writing so much!.so waiting for ur next story, mostly for ur super long updates😉 start da new story soon.will look forward for ur posts regarding da updates on FB. KEEP ROCKING SUMANA!!

LOVE

SWETHA :)

Originally posted by: AnaluvsVirman

Perfecto! Loveeddd it..from beginning..made me hate Shanaya..woman with no dignity..is an enslaved woman...Loved the way Manvi wasn't emancipating immediately it was so apt...she still had fears,doubts and glimpses of that nightmare weren't letting her move on...though Virat's politeness that change she saw in him gave hope to her somewhere in her heart she wanted to forget that night wanted every fear to fade away..and move on with her life partner...but her conscience wasn't letting her accept it...what I loveddd the most is Virman's conversation..the most effective conversation I've ever read..liked the way he admitted that he was more at fault but then he suffered more and he couldn't even express it or to share it with anyone...he was grooming outside but inside his soul was disrupted...and nobody could ever see it...loved the way he cleared all her doubts..he himself opened up...he wanted her...her love...her support in his failures...he wanted her more..then she wanted him...he was in trauma for past 6 years though Manvi recovered after 6 months...it was surely destined...fate played its role in the form of letter...destiny wanted them to realize to gain their strength to gather those longings and letting their guilt and apprehensions to withhold them ...also loved the way he assured her regarding the happiness of present as present is way more important..than past and future..we cannot erase the memories of past and cannot even predict our future but we can make our present better..they absorbed it well..even promised each other that they will never leave each other in despair...I loved it all..a relationship once tainted cannot always be tainted forever..people can give another chance to it..as those who love each other are always connected...no matter how much they suffered because of fate..or because of themselves..they can make their relationship better anytime..by realizing what drifted them apart..Even loved their milan in moonlight..at the end loved what Virat advised Ashia sometimes we reach to conclusions..without complete understanding..that's a part of human nature...love without trust is incomplete..where there is love there should be trust...Even loved Virat's last lines...he's successful now..his success is that he got everything back..all what he had lost...he got opportunity to make his life better...got that feeling of being complete with his soul mate with his family a complete happy family...I think where there is love guilt is there only if y've hurt ur love one's only then u are guilty..because u loved them...and u can feel their pain...Thankuu so much PB for writing such a beautiful story...u are a brilliant writer 👏👏👏