There are many things about this story i really loved..and i don't think i can count them all in one go..however here are few things tht to me gave its identity.
The Culture tht u have described is the one of the most attractive features. and then..additional pictures in the updates...very descriptive...making the story more real.
Rani Saa- BEst and the most adorned features...power as a women...And the pride as a Jethwa!! I don't think any better depiction to tht could have been done.and then...another quality tht really moulds her personality so delicately is her willingness to live up to everything she's expected to do and for everyone...even though she need not.Putting others ahead of her. Really remarkable quality!!
the egoistic ASR...Went through many faces,,,from ruthless ASR to being the softest Arnav forRAni Saa. He knows well tht other than his sister..this flexibility exists only for Rani Saa and no one else at all...but the "to the core in love" Arnav is still stubborn tht never does he accept his love. Why? just because he counts Love to be an emotion tht leads to hurt..but doesn't realise it is the purest, sweetest and most needed nectar tht is needed in life. Never mind...Offcourse..with time his heart will catchup too.
DEEPU- Another..hardcore victim of Love. A character tht touched me most in the whole story. The purity of his love, the serenity of his desires, the complied tornado of emotions yet the calm composure. The raw passion yet the controlled demeanour. the only thing i would say about him is... I m in Love with him! He affected me Way much more than what ASR could do in this story.
... but off course the game of love holds power above all its player..and their behaviours said it all.
The best quality tht accounts to this story is it's intense plot...Lot many twists and suspenses...the only things tht keep the readers intrigued till the end.
Each character held importance at thier own repective times..and the resonings behind every happening is well explained. Anjali, Nani, Shashiji, Buaji,etc. and Most of all Shyam.
Shyam- his role was one of an equal importance too. His absence from the story...and it would have changed all the dynamics of the story. He was as like the fourth pillar of the story...without which the roof of story wouldn't have existed.
And then...i won't say how much i loved the story...because i hope mine and Jahnvi's constant stalking, TT playing, and bagging 1st positon back to back for 5 updates..is enough to tell u how much i appreciate it.
I hope my mere attempt with words at expressing... what The Mirage means to me and to tell tht ur efforts for it have always been valued... has been sucessful in delivering it's rightful impact.
I really doappreciate it...for writing an whole FF with such intense is not an easy take. and u passed a milestone of it!
CONGRATULATIONS!!! And off course good Luck for another journey around the world of words! I wish u a lot many readers then u ever expected!
YES!! YES!! YES!! I did it!
PHEW!!!! I can finally give a sigh of relief!!! The pending review on the MIRAGE is one thing tht had been constantly eating my mind ever since it was mentioned for!! I really need to treat myself for this! For now..i guess a little dance shoulddo!😉
LOL... Me becoming "MUHH Miyaaan Mitthu" 😆
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