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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Great update Indu 👏


Finally the truth of Yash is out. I am really glad that nanimassi still trust and believe Yash after the truth coming out in such a way. He still have some work cut out for Arati but I think if he can explain in detail why he had to hide his identity she too will understand.

Payal has fixed Arati as her mother and she is not going to give Arati an option. Arati has already started to see Yash and Payal as hers but its just that she herself don't know that. I am sure when Arati will realise that what she feels for Yahs is love, she is definitely going to fight it and there Yash will have a lot of work to do as her fears are deep instilled from her childhood.




Thanks Asha.

Naanimaasi is a wise old lady. Although she was disappointed in Yash, yet when he explained himself, she believed him because of the sincerity in his demeanor.

As foe Payal...she sure has made her decision. Just like her papa, this young lady too has fallen in love at first sight with this sweet gentle pari. Her mind is made up. I totally agree with your final sentence (in bold)...That is Aarti's main problem.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: billieberry

sorry di for the late response😊
Awesome update indu di❤️
love Aarti payal scene so sweet😃 finally yash identity is out
Hope there won't be a misuderstanding between him and aarti😭
great part
thanx for Pm
continue soon😃




Billie...thank you so much. And you are not late at all...and even if you are, you will only get bear hugs from me.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srilanka123

Wonderful work dear


Waitinig for the next update



Thank you my friend.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ,wow Indu wonderful update 👏
Loved the picnic part n Aarti was so comfortable in Yash 's presence
Payal is such a cutie pie n she wants Aarti as her Mumma
Every thing was right but Prashant 😡
Glad that Nanni massi believe Yash
Curious to know how yash will handle Aarti

I just loved the Picnic part a lot Indu ,,,i can visualize those beautiful scenes
Thanx for PM n continue the story
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

Dear friends,

When I started Samarpan, I had a vision about the major events in the story. My end stretches beyond the present day (as and when we reach it). As you must have realized that this is all about Aarti's complete samarpan to the present in spite of her unhappy past. She needs to let go of her past completely in order to find the ultimate freedom. Also, as we see now, Payal and Aarti are fast getting bound in a relationship that will strengthen over time. I wanted to explore Payal's samarpan to her present when she comes to know of her past, and Aarti helping her in doing so...in the process shedding off the remnants of her fears.

All that will take a few extra chapters. I am already 20 chapters down. I needed your suggestion whether I should stop the story once we reach the present day...especially considering the show is getting over...and we shall all scatter slowly.

I'll await your opinions. Thanks.

Love
Indu

hey Indu di I think a journey of aarti as a woman cannot be complete till she plays all her roles equally n payal needs her mom n so we need you to share the more sesnittive side of the stry so that we can experince n learn more from you as in your though process
hope you understnad as i learn a lot personally from you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

Dear friends,

When I started Samarpan, I had a vision about the major events in the story. My end stretches beyond the present day (as and when we reach it). As you must have realized that this is all about Aarti's complete samarpan to the present in spite of her unhappy past. She needs to let go of her past completely in order to find the ultimate freedom. Also, as we see now, Payal and Aarti are fast getting bound in a relationship that will strengthen over time. I wanted to explore Payal's samarpan to her present when she comes to know of her past, and Aarti helping her in doing so...in the process shedding off the remnants of her fears.

All that will take a few extra chapters. I am already 20 chapters down. I needed your suggestion whether I should stop the story once we reach the present day...especially considering the show is getting over...and we shall all scatter slowly.

I'll await your opinions. Thanks.

Love
Indu


I think Arati's samarpan will only be complete when she help Payal to adjust to her present. So, please do continue it to Payal's samarpan too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileymj10


Hello Indu, am here! 😃

And now ready to fill up the spaces that I have left. Just got time to visit and stay for a while..
It's election day here, meaning no work, no pressure. So, I have nothing to worry about my time at least for now.

Nwei, It was another awesome reading!

Have edited the 2 post that i reserve @page54 and page67 , I still have 2 chapters to go..
(just click the blue text)

Am still reading... 😳




Barbie...I read all your responses. What can I say pal...You take time off to do this for me, and I can only virtually hug you. Thank you so much. I am so glad you are up-to-date with the story now.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your little quips along with the reviewed portions. That' so you.

Thanks for being there for me...love you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 123mitul

loved this update😊..happy that nanimaasi still has trust in yash. waiting for the next part...



Thanks Mitul. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Kya se kya ho gaya...


Nahiii...

Jis ka dar tha woh hi hua.

Da** things were progressing too smoothly that good for nothing Prashanth😡

WHY WHY WHY???

But now WHAT???

Can Aarti be convinced that Yash's intentions were selfless and good? She is so wary in trusting anyone and without knowing she has already put her faith in Yash. This is going to be such a huge thing shock and coming to terms with it is going to take some major doing for Aarti. I hope she does not take up one of the proposals that came her way in haste.

Beautiful update as usual. I am glad I am commenting on time this time at least.




Did I mention that I missed you and you endearing comments? My bad if I didn't.

Yes Aarti has issues...In a way this is good, don't you think so? At least this way these issues will be addressed. Naanimaasi never broached the topics that had the capacity to hurt Aarti...In the process, those matters lay dormant. Aarti needs to verbalize them in order to be cured. Yash has hurt her yes...but he is also the one person who is through to her in a way naanimaasi isn't.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

indu...u are so good at story telling👏👏...just loved each and every part of this ff...plz continue writing even after our pv ends..plz😭




Thank you my friend. That's so sweet of you to say that. 😳

Que sera, sera (whatever will be, will be)...
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