Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 50

Originally posted by: sb1410

I look foward for your updates ❤️ just love this story so very much ❤️ Different perception from the show you are a talented individual ❤️ 🤗

Thank you so much. You flatter me my friend. 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: billieberry

awesome update indu di❤️

continue soon

can't wait for yash to reveal himself

thanx for d PM😊

Thanks Billie.🤗

darun update Indu,

Originally posted by: rutu83

sorry for the late unres...i don't even have a good reasn for it 😒

as i was rereading for the comment, i was more affected by the quiiet power of it all. while i could comment on interesting happenings in the story, i.e. payal's wish, yash's realisation (both in love and the truth behind aarti's decision) and aarti's outburst, but what i loved was the sthiratha behind your writing. that of a master knowing his/her craft...👏

Rutu...that's the best compliment someone has given me. Thank you so much Rutu. I am no seasoned writer, but just someone who is going with the flow of this story and putting words to the flow. In fact it still surprises me that there are kind readers like you who grace this story with your presence after every single chapter. It humbles me and it overwhelms me.

Originally posted by: gcluv

darun update Indu,

Read part 16 and 17 at go

So lovely !!!

arati opening up her emotion to yash

Yash comes to know arati as the same girl whom he saved once

Payal meeting up Payal was just so cute

Yash curdling up Arati in sleep to give comfort for her nightmare was very thoughtful of Yash

these two are so into themselves

I hope the prospective is buyer turns out to be yash

Thanks Aditi.

Onek din baade? All OK? Settled down completely?

These two have been into each other whenever they have met or communicated. For some reason they were never indifferent to each other.

I'll await your pov whenever you next find time. Take care.

Oops sorry dear, haven't updated my reserved post yet, real life doesn't allow me to have much free time..
Am always busy and tired! 😕

And here i am again reserving for the next chapter.. 😳

EDITED:

I knew it! Yash won't let his name be known in buying naanimaasi's house. Of course he will ask for someone to do it. But what am glad about, is that he didn't let anyone comes first before him. He make it sure that no one will take it except him.

Am so glad that Yash already accepted and realized that he's in love to Aarti.
He really knows her so well. Even Aarti did noticed it too!

So, Aarti found out that she has something common with Payal. They both loose or rather grew up without having a mother. Both are longing for a mother's love. Somehow, she can relate with her. I so love the convo between them as well as with naanimaasi.

And oh, she was cornered by Payal's question, "If I ask GOD to make you my mumma, will GOD do that?"
Good thing Yash interrupts them, wonder what will be her answer.

The more Aarti trusted Yash, the more am getting nervous to what will happen.
Hope Yash will fix this prob before Aarti comes to know about his lie.

Aarti still want to continue her plan to marry Sameer. She will do her best to save the house, even if it will ruin her life. Good thing, naanimaasi came to know it and she told everything to Yash.

So sad that Aarti still see herself as a curse.

Wonder how Yash will convince her for not marrying Sameer and make her believe that she's not a curse.

I'm enjoying it Indu dear! 😳

*Me, runs to the next, chapter 19*

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Oops sorry dear, haven't updated my reserved post yet, real life doesn't allow me to have much free time..
Am always busy and tired! 😕

And here i am again reserving for the next chapter.. 😳

Hey, it's OK Barbie...take your time. And you take good care of yourself. OK? 🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Zet...thanks pal.🤗

Yash is fast discovering Aarti's past, but Aarti is still unaware of who he is. Yash feels that till the house problem is dealt with, he cannot come out in the open. Be cause if he does, he will have to give them reason why he covered up in the first place...which was to find our whether Aarti was a gold digger or not. So, poor Yash is stuck between what he has to do and what he has already done.

You know Yash is already through to Aarti in many ways. She has given him what she never gave even naanimaasi easily in those earlier days...Her trust.

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Fantastic updt,cnt soon

Thanks alekhika. A warm welcome to the thread.😊

Indu - you got me confused there for a second pal. Did Arti decide to marry Sameer or Prashant? I think P's mention threw me off. i tell u this Pareshan-T is too much trouble for what he is worth.

I read the last 2 updates together so my comments will probably span both. I loved Payal's intro - her innocence is so refreshing and a perfect complement to Arti's innocence. They both recognized twin souls in each other - what's not to love in the other then?

Yash knows and so i will keep faith. Unlike Naanimaasi, i think Yash will fight to stop Arti marrying Sameer because he suspects why she is doing it. Naanimaasi wants the best for Arti, but the situation is overwhelming for her - and i suspect the poor woman is befuddled by Arti's reaction, though she knows its unlike Arti. She will let Arti do what she thinks Arti really wants, despite her best judgement. Yash on the other hand won't. Hence - my faith. (He can well spew to us readers - Main hoon na 😉).

Lovely lovely reads Indu - and a much-needed break in a mad day. So thank you - once again 🤗.