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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow Indu ,,wonderful update
U are fabulous writter,,,i can imagine things in front of my eyes while reading this
Loved every bit of it,,,,
Mountain fairy with flowers,, wow it was so beautifully described
Lovely first meeting of Palak n her Pari

Thanx for the amazing update dear,,n waiting eagerly for the next

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Posted: 12 years ago
What a sweet (and long!!!😊) update.

Thanks Indu for making her choose Sameer- even in the darkness- she chooses the lesser of the two evils!

I love the images you conjure up- Aarti in an aqua suit covered in leaves, then covered in jasmines! On a green lawn- after it's been ravished by rains! Such a pretty picture. It made me smile to just read those lines!

When's the next holiday?!?! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh i didn't realize the secrets will be revealed so soon

although they didn't make the connection of the shy girl being aarti and NOT DEAD 😡
wonderful update as usual
i could imagine the flower covered aarti- and i love love love jasmines 🤗- that's the beauty of your writing- i can always imagine all of these scenes- but htis time i could smell it too 😳
aww i'm looking forward to aarti and payal interactions and aarti observing yash and payal's
good job yash- so glad the deal will be finalized before she marries sameer 👍🏼




Thanks Rutu.😊

Yash has begun probing. He is very clear about his feelings...and he has some idea that Aarti's past was pretty bad. This is making his need to know about Aarti all the more urgent. He has her friendship and her trust ...which is a start. Also, the fact that she called out to him in her sleep indicates that Aarti feels more than she realizes.

Aww Rutu...I love jasmine too. My parental house has one near the main gate. Early morning we have all the elderly people in the colony come in or just reach out to pluck some flowers for their morning puja.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

brilliant episode...glad that they identified eachother regd hoshangabad incident. is the buyer going to be yash? loved arthi-payal little interaction.




Thank you. Well, Yash was waiting for Prateek to arrive, so let's see what he does...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

I just loved the flow of the story with Yash realizing who Aarti is and with Aarti knowing that it was Yash who saved her years ago. Aarti really has a pure heart that despite everything that occurred between her and her father she still grieved for him (as she said he was her father after all). I thought that their realization of having met each other before will reach the part about connecting the dots of Aarti's relationship with Arpita. I guess that would happen some other day as the two gets to unravel their past.


I also felt comforted when Yash quietened Aarti during the reoccurring nightmare and knowing that Yash promised to himself that she will never be hurt again with him around. Yipee! Payal has arrived and their meeting each other went very well. It augurs for positive things happening. I hope the person Naanimasi is talking to is Yash's agent to ensure that they get to keep the property.

Thanks Indu for the lovely update!




Thanks for the lovely feedback Cynthia. Aarti never blamed her father for anything. In fact she always blamed herself for being the cause behind his unhappiness. The dots are all haphazard in their life. Only destiny knows the pattern.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fantastic updates dear! 👍🏼

It was such a delightful to read. Some of the secrets were told.
I was actually surprised when Yash told Aarti that he was him whom she's praying for. The one who help her when someone was trying to abuse her. I thought he will still hide it to her. But it's good that he reveal. I love the silent reaction that both did. It's a natural reaction especially when that someone was special. It somehow makes a joyous feeling inside.

I feel for Aarti when she found out the truth about her father. The feeling of guilt that she had from the past has again come out. It was very inhuman that the family had to declare her as dead.

Yash really knows where and when Aarti needs him, he's her soulmate indeed!

I love how Aarti and Payal have met. They seems so close in just few moment.
And the buyer, do I need to guess who's who?

Love the flow of the story, still reading... chapter 18
😳


Edited by smileymj10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read the parts 16& 17 together... !!

Yash always finds Aarti in her most vulnerable state.. and she finds the much needed support in him..!! 😊 The trust factor is building up...she talked freely and joined Yash in the teasing game...good to see Aarti coming out of her fears.. slowly opening up to him..!!

Some pleasant.. unpleasant secrets are out for good...!! 😊

Finally Payal is here...!! What a cute conversation btwn Aarti-Payal...!! Aarti herself is a innocent child at heart..hence the strike at the first meeting...!!

Hmmm.. does Yash know abt Nanimasi's plan of selling the house...can that buyer be from Yash's side..?? 😕 Also the slip from Yash's mouth (during the hug scene) for Aarti as "my love" went unnoticed...!! 😆

Wonderful updates.. Indu.. thank u..!! 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abie10

Brilliant update⭐️ ⭐️

Grr dubey's family said Aarti was death 😡

Just love love Aarti n payal convo. Payal is such a sweet heart n Aarti play well in her language.

Don't know what decision Aarti takes wanting to meet sameer.




Thanks Abie. 🤗

Aarti's family never considered her family. They tolerated her because she was their son's child. Once the son was dead, his daughter was of no concern to them.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: billieberry

That was awesome update, continue soon

Thanx for d PM :)




Thanks Billie.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update as usual...






Thanks Leevi.😊

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