TAAREY - KAASH KABHI TUM MUJHE SAMAJH PAATE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey my sweet dear friends ,
i know i have 2 update my other stories also but i really couldn't resist the idea of this story , as i was really very hurt when i saw rey searching 4 ways 2 break up online , and 2 let out my feelings i thought 2 write a story


TAAREY STORY
KAASH KABHI TUM
MUJHE SAMAJH PAATE

ONE YEAR HAS PASSED AFTER TAAREY'S BREAK UP CHANGING ALMOST EVERYONE'S LIFE , BUT STILL TAAREY'S PAIN OF SEPARATION IS NOT OLD AND IT IS NEW AND FRESH HURTING THEIR HEART NOW ALSO ,
TAANI HAS CHANGED A LOT , SHE IS LIKE A BODY WITHOUT SOUL , WITHOUT LOVE , WITHOUT HAPPINESS , WITH FAKE SMILE ON HER FACE , PAIN HIDING AND TEARS FLOWING INSIDE HER BROKEN HEART , BUT SHE HAS NOW MOVED ON IN HER LIFE 4 FINDING HER REAL SELF , UNAWARE OF D FACT THAT SHE HAS ALREADY LOST HER REAL SELF LONG AGO , NOW SHE LIVES ONLY 4 HER FAMILY , 4 THEIR HAPPINESS , AND SOMEWHERE SHE ALSO WANT 2 PROVE HERSELF , SHE STILL LIVES IN MUMBAI AS SHE DON'T WANT 2 RUN FROM ANYONE
BUT AFTER HER COLLEGE END 8 MONTHS AGO ,
SHE LIVES IN A HUGE BUNGLOW AWAY FROM SWAYAM , AS SHE HAS NOW BECOME A POPULAR PROFESSIONAL SINGER AS WELL AS COMPOSER , AS SINGING WAS D ONLY THING WHICH SHE LOVES 2 DO ESP WHEN SHE IS HURT ,WHEN SHE SINGS FROM HER HEART AND GET LOST IN IT , THEN D PEOPLE WHO LISTENS IT GETS MESMERIZED BY HER SINGING , AS IT IS SO ENCHANTING AND BEAUTIFUL

ON D OTHER SIDE REY ALSO MISSES HER A LOTT BUT SOMEWHERE GUILT HAS OVERTAKEN HIM SO HE DO DANCE BUT DUE 2 HIS GUILT , SADNESS AND A DEEP PAIN , HE CANNOT DANCE FROM HIS HEART , THEREFORE HE COULDN'T BECAME THAT POPULAR WHICH HE COULD BE ,

IT WAS D SAME DAY WHEN REY BROKE UP WITH TAANI ONE YEAR AGO , AND BOTH REMEMBERED IT , NO ONE CAN EVER FORGET THAT DAY ,

dono ke dil is judaai se tadap rahe the aur andar hi andar ro rahe the , par vo chaah ke bhi kuch nahi kar sakte the , kyunki taani ne apne pyaar ko to apne dil
main kab ka maar diya tha par apne uss pyaar ke dard ko kabhi khatam nahi kar paayi ,
aur rey ne to apni hi galti (mistake ) se apna pyaar paakar bhi kho diya tha , iss baar uski kismat ne usse dhokha nahi diya tha balki usne khud hi apne pyaar ko
dusri baar thukraaya tha apne aap se juda kiya tha ,


TODAY AFTER ONE YEAR OF THEIR BREAK UP , THERE WAS A BIG CHARITY CONCERT IN WHICH BOTH R GOING 2 PERFORM UNAWARE OF EACH OTHER'S PARTICIPATION . THEY DON'T WANTED 2 PERFORM BUT THEY AGREED AS IT WAS 4 CHARITY , BOTH WERE IN THEIR RESPECTIVE GREEN ROOMS LOST IN EACH OTHER'S MEMORIES , IN TAAREY'S MEMORIES , IN TAAREY 'S BEAUTIFUL DREAMLAND WHICH HAS NOW LOST SOMEWHERE BREAKING ALL ITS DREAM INTO THOUSAND PIECES AND SO WAS REAL REY AND BUBBLY TAANI , WHO R LIVING BUT LIKE A LIFELESS BODY , WITHOUT HAPPINESS , WITHOUT LOVE , WITHOUT SOUL ,
BOTH WERE IN PAIN OF SEPARATION FROM LOVE , IN D PAIN OF LOOSING LOVE , THEIR HEARTS WERE STILL CRYING DUE 2 THIS PAIN , BUT EYES R TIRED OF CRYING AND TEARS

( IN TAANI 'S GREENROOM , SHE WAS READY LOOKING NO LESS THAN A BEAUTIFUL PRETTY ANGEL BUT A DEEP PAIN WAS VISIBLE ON HER FACE
SHE WAS LOST SOMEWHERE ELSE WHEN SOMEONE KNOCK D DOOR OF HER ROOM ) ,

SOMEONE CAME 2 INFORM HER THAT HER TURN IS NEXT AND SHE COME OUT OF HER HURTING MEMORIES OF LOST TAAREY AND D UNBEARABLE PAIN GIVEN BY HER LOVE
SHE COMPOSED HERSELF AND GO 4 HER PERFORMANCE WITH A CRYING AND PAINFUL BROKEN HEART

SHE PUT ON A FAKE SMILE AS USUAL AND FIRST CLOSED HER EYES AND STARTS SINGING BUT A DIFFERENT SONG WHICH WAS SINGING AND COMING OUT BY HER CRYING HEART AND SHE WAS COMPOSING A SONG ON D STAGE ITSELF WHILE SINGING IT

( A LITTLE PIECE OF MY WRITING , A POEM WRITTEN BY ME ON TAANI'S FEELINGS BUT PLZZZ IMAGINE HER AS SINGING THIS )

(slow)
tum hi meri aashiqui the
tum hi the meraa junoonn
tum hiii deewaangiii the
tum hi the rooh (SOUL) kaaa sukoon,
tum hi meri aashiquii thee
tum hii the mera junoon
tum hiii deewaangiii thee
tum hi thee rooh kaa sukoon

(MORE SLOW)

har pal tumheee chaaahaa iss dil ne
har pal maangaaa sirfff tumhe,

kaisa ishq , kaisi mohabbat , kaisa pyaar hamne kiyaa
kiii ,
mere dil ki har dadhkan pe tera hi naam likh diyaa

par badle main hamein kaisi vafaaa tujhse miliii
hamne to thoda pyaar hi chaaha tha par nafrat hi millii haaa nafrattt hi milii

baar baar thukraaya (REJECT) tune mere pyaar ko
baar baar toda tune mere khwaab (DREAM) koo
haa kitnaa acchha silaaa(IN RETURN) diya tune mere pyaar ko ,
choodd diyaa rahon main tanha apne yaar ko ,
haaa apne pyaar kooo,

hamne to tere ishq ko hee rab maankar pooja thaa tumko par tumne to pal main hi tod diya mere dil ko,
haa kaun sii khataa (MISTAKE ) ki di sazaaa mujhkoo
joo,
khilona (toy) banakar khela(PLAY) tumne meri, zindagi ko

maine to meri zindagi ki har saans ( IN MY EACH AND EVERY BREATHE ) main basaayaa tumkoo
aur
meri rooh(SOUL) ke rom rom (IN EACH AND EVERY CELL) main samaaya tumkoo
par tune to apni zindagi kaa humsafar bhi naa banaya mujhkooo
aur pal main hi tod diye saare rishte naate bhulakar mujhko
haa bhulaakar mujhkooo

ooo sanam , oo mere sanam , hmmm
ooo mere bewafaaa sanam

(A LITTLE FAST)

jab jaana hi tha muh modke (FACE TURN KARKE )
saare rishte naate tod ke ,
to meri zindagi main kyun aaye the tuumm,
aur apne jhothee pyaar ke rang laaye thee tumm...
hmmm hmmm hmmm

( sorry but d pain of a broken painful heart has no ending and if u don't like this boring and bakwaas poem then u can play d song " sab kuch bhula diya " from movie hum tumhaare hain sanam , i couldn't get its link )

SORRY IF I DISAPPOINT ANYONE BY MY BORING STORY OR POEM

BUT PLZZZ DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM YOUR SWEET LITTLE HEART IF U LIKE ANYTHING IN IT OR IF U REALLY WANT ME 2 CONTINUE IT

TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING ALL OF U😊
I REALLY WANNA KNOW THAT WHETHER U LIKE MY POEM AND STORY OR NOT

SO DO COMMENT BUT PLZ Z SPEAK D TRUTH FROM YOUR HEART 😊
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rakhiankita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YIPEEE ME FIRST YAYšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

wow wow wow kya story hai yaar i loved it yaar dil jeet liya yaar tune mera i know bahut emotional par isse perfect way nhi ho saktaa taarey story ko move on karane ke liye yaar sachi mein itzz awwsome how dare u itni pyaari sweet nd emotional story nd poem ko boring kehne ki haan ...dobaara mat bolanna ...i wanna hug u tightly moni my partner love ya re 😳😳😳



it was so touching yaar😳 i was smiling nd crying at the same time while reading yaar kyun kyun itna achcha likti hai tu yaar...muaah yaar...taani ke liye ekk song likhna chaungi mein jo mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai yaar

Manzilein rusva hain..
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye..
Itni si iltaza
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan..

Aaa aa aa..

Mujhko iraade de
Kasmein de, vaade de
Meri duaaon ke isharon ko sahare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khwabon ki barishon ko
Mausam ke paimaane de

Apne karam ki kar adayein..
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sunn raha hai na tu
Ro rahi hoon, main
Sun raha hai na tu
Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Sunn raha hai na tu
Ro rahi hoon, main
Sun raha hai na tu
Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Yaara.. Aaa..


loved the story very much moni plzz update asap kk i ll waiting dearā­ļøšŸ˜³šŸ˜³


Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!
unres...

TRUE!!! nothing Hurts more than realizing they meant everything for u but u meant nothing for them ...!!!šŸ˜’
shona .. coming to the ss.. it was emotional n if it was a bit long more than this ,i would have definitely cried ... i was feeling so much affected with the whole thing...and the poem .. muaahhh my sweetuuu happy that u completed it and chweetu .. intelligent ha.. you used it in the correct place dear .. the poem suits very well to the situation and in fact it added intensity and beauty to the whole situation...you write such emotional scenes so so so so beautifully.. felt like pulling u into a bone crashing tight tight hugšŸ¤— šŸ¤— ...
love u shona .. keep smiling always and keep writing and off course studies toošŸ˜† šŸ˜†.. big sister.. so need to remind that toošŸ˜†
Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EMOTIONAL STORY... PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/Unres

First of ol HATS OFF!!!to u deedu...nd di r u crazy or wat???aap ye kya keh ri ho??AAPKA poem nd borin!???o_O aisa dreamz me bhi ho sakta hai kya?? God!!deedu story is wonderful filled wid tons of emotions..nd Aap sabse acchi EMOTIONAL STORY WRITER ho!!;-) ...(acrdng to me ha)

Nd next thing wich i lykd was ur FLUENT nd SHUDDHA hindi..
I loved d whole poem wich was written by u in hindi...nd aapki hindi toh lajawaab hai..
I noe ye thoda pagalwala compliment hai bt as u noe am a southy toh mera hindi is worst nd i hav never met ny1 who has spoken such a SHUDDH types hindi lyk u..isiliye thot of complementing...nd nw listen jaldi se update DIS story!!!plzz-5 šŸ˜‰
Edited by PrOjeCtA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story!!!!
It was really emotional...!! i loved it..!!! The poem of urz was really beautiful...!!!!
Please continue this... i really wanna know wat will happen next..! If rey n taani will meet..!???

please continue soon n pm me! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg again an brilliant concept by my barbie doll šŸ¤—
coming to your update it was amazing and emotional 2😭😭
but as i said you are just 2 good when it comes to write an emotional scenešŸ‘šŸ‘
felt bad for taani and also for rey 😭 but more for taani bechari she is soo sweet and yeah rey deserve that but still felt bad for him
and your poem was brilliant loved soo much
fab chapter and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow chinu just amazing ..it was so emotional n the poem is fabulous
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice chaoter plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
please continue soon and pm

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